Transmigrating Through the Myriad Worlds, Starting with Master Kim

I'm a rookie writer, so I'll just write as I go. It'd be great if some readers could give me pointers... Here, you take the pen! First world: I Am Kim Kwan-jang The Romance of Tiger and Rose, The Story of Minglan, Joy of Life, A Little Reunion, My Heroic Husband, The Chief, The Trumpeter... Lin Daiyu uproots a willow tree, while fierce Diao Chan fights her way through five passes and slays six generals! Sheng Minglan climbs Liangshan in a snowy night, while Fan Ruoruo cleaves mountains and rivers with a single sword!