Enlightenment from All Realms

I don't understand why the protagonist doesn't seize the time to practice in Swallowing Starry Sky? What kind of world is this? As a traveler, the protagonist should understand that without strength, he is just an ant. In a world like this, except for women, I have all kinds of random thoughts, so I am also drunk.

There are so many chapters, what is the protagonist doing? Swallowing the Starry Sky is not an urban romance. It doesn't write the main plot, but just rambles on useless things.

Get a world ring and collect beauties

You should write about daily life in the city, and don't touch on forceful stories, because you won't be able to grasp the key points. Returning to Swallowing Starry Sky, I have written dozens of chapters and still haven't practiced. It's simply not water but sea.

I started practicing after more than 50 chapters. I kept grinding. The pace was too slow. There was no theme or I never got into the theme. It was boring to watch.

Yyds

The author made the main character seem to be a bit sick, deliberately making enemies out, and kept blabbering for a long time. Before getting to the paid chapter, I couldn't read the whole text at all, and I was frustrated to death. Many authors write Zhutianliu novels. In a transitional world like the beginning, if you don't accept the heroine, you can just go through it and it will be over. You know that the plot will continue to cycle.

To be honest, the author might as well specialize in writing plot-oriented daily questions. The first copy is very good at the beginning, and the daily life in it is also great, but this is Zhutianwen after all. If it is a film and television world, and the combat power is not high, it is naturally ok.

It's not that you can't write about daily life. After all, this is astronomy. You can go about your daily life after time travel, but you don't want too much daily life in Swallowing Stars.

I hope you won't commit suicide again,

I feel it's okay, but it's too watery in daily life… I just skipped the beginning 🙂

There are so many daily routines after devouring... What should I do if I don't want to watch this and also don't want to miss some potentially useful plots?

I read it in ten minutes after raising it for half a month. The author really has you. The pace of the plot is already slow, and the updates are still so slow. Author, are you really not afraid of rushing into the street?

What are you doing to prevent theft? Spending money like this is not bad and it is also anti-theft.

Recuperate and introduce the background. It's okay. I'm finally practicing.

It's on the shelves and it's updated every day, but it still keeps changing! I thought there would be many chapters after raising it for a few days!

This introduction is not very appropriate and does not highlight the key points. An introduction should allow readers to know what the book is about at a glance, or to understand the advantages of the book and the pleasure of reading it.

Who would stay up all night cultivating immortality!

I've read a few chapters and it's well written. Generally speaking, Devouring fans are just practicing, and there's almost nothing about life. I'm a bit tired of the sameness. I hope I can write something new.