Starting from the Holy Ruins

The writing is very good at the beginning. Although the first world is a little long, it is still acceptable. But once I return to the main world, the style of painting changes. It feels like a dog-licking novel covered in fantasy? Wouldn't it be great if I had the time to see the city? Farewell!

The author should add a few more female protagonists. I believe there are not many people who like to watch eunuchs! Don't listen to those keyboard warriors who say they can't write emotional dramas, and if they can't handle it properly, it's better not to write it at all! This is fantasy, this is martial arts, this is a grass that can cut down the sun, moon and stars. One person can dominate an entire world. There is no need to describe emotions so delicately. The weak are bound to rely on the strong and worship the strong. The relationship between men and women is even simpler. On the contrary, if you write delicately, it will not be good if you write it in a soul-stirring way! Time travel, adding plug-ins, or fantasy. If it is a licking of dogs, it will drive away readers. If the eunuch persuades a large number of people to quit, it is not ideal if there is a single heroine, and of course it cannot open up a harem! Of course the writing is good, come on

Those who write about Shengxu fandom should panic. Once you enter, you will be fluttering under the noses of the two Immortal Emperors.

I just want to ask the author if he feels uncomfortable? As long as you dance in front of Chu Feng, you will be in the eyes of the two heavenly emperors, haha! What did the author think after reading Kidney Deficiency?

You called Wang Changsheng not to practice the art of calming chaos, I'm really sorry for this name 😏😏😏

Damn it, the plot is obviously okay, and the writing is also good. Sure enough, no one can break the curse of a Sacred Ruins fanfic being completed well😫, I have never finished reading one

I was trying to figure it out, but today I suddenly found out that I had entered the palace. Damn it.

Can the author write more plots about the Holy Ruins? I always feel that the protagonist stays in other worlds for too long. I came here just for the Holy Ruins. As a result, there are very few plots in the Holy Ruins 😥

No fun, I came to see the heavens. You have completed the complete version of Shengxu and asked me to read Shengxu again? It's boring.

Zongwu also embarrassed Zhang Sanfeng, and he was indeed a perfect template for fighting on the street.

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From Chapter 20 to the martial arts world, you can jump directly to Chapter 80. Even though I have played Jin Yong Heroes 5 for a few weeks, I feel it is too confusing and I don't get any benefits or adventures (I didn't go before Chapter 40, so I don't understand the rest). And the fighting plot has no sense of substitution. It is particularly related to the bandits and bandits. Since there is Zhang Wuji, wouldn't it be enough to go to the bottom of the cliff to get the Nine Yang Magic Skill? Isn't the star-absorbing magic of Hulong Villa the Dongfang Bubai? If you have Dongfang Bubai, go find Ren Yingying. Her father can do the same. You need to be a boy before practicing the magical power of Vajra Indestructibility. The protagonist is no longer a boy. How about seeking loneliness? With so many bells and whistles, it's better to go to Yanziwu and Mantuo Villa in Tianlongbabu. Both of them have treasures of martial arts. Just think of a way to get in. If it doesn't work, go to Langhuan Jade Cave to learn the Beiming Magic Technique. With Lingbo Weibu, the protagonist is so good-looking that he can still go to apprentice with Xiaoyaozi. After becoming the master, he can go to Lingjiu Palace and Xixia to collect the remaining martial arts, isn't that the end of the matter? After that, he will go directly back to the Holy Ruins world to continue practicing and wait for the plot to start. Why don't you go there with bandits and iron cloth shirts all day long? Since the gimmick of the Holy Ruins is used to attract readers, the author must distinguish the priorities. After writing dozens of chapters of the martial arts world, the Holy Ruins world is only a little bit, and only those who have achieved the Holy Ruins in the martial arts world are considered second-rate warriors in the martial arts world. What the hell is this setting? Are all Xiantian warriors in the martial arts world monsters from the underworld? Is it because I didn't understand the difference between fantasy and martial arts?

I want to ask a question, why are there still a group of people with a high starting point in the world, but every time the first world is a martial arts world? I understand that you said it is a Hong Kong comic (I glanced at the catalog). Your dimension is completely different. It is impossible for people to force themselves into an ant nest to train themselves and make themselves stronger?

Author, please remember, everyone came to see it because of the Holy Ruins

You write so much about martial arts, you might as well write about martial arts fandom and sell yourself like a sheep.

To be honest, the ending of the Holy Ruins is so weird. Wouldn't it be better to have the strength to fight in? Even if you can't kill in, wouldn't you be able to hide on them and touch them? This ending makes us look like fools😡

I thought the bosses were all dead, but I didn't expect them all to hide in a jar, drink animal milk, and falsify their academic qualifications.

The first time traveling through time was so tedious that I no longer felt the meaning of the existence of the main world.

Not bad, I thought Li Xiaoming was the protagonist at first

It's very interesting to write. I give you my recommendation votes.

There is a saying that I don't know how to say, mmb, I actually died of it

For time travel, I think we can just write the perfect trilogy of Zhe Tian

It looks good 👍, I gave more votes!

Author, remember! Zhutian Liu ≈ Eunuch Liu! How many big guys are from Zhutianliu? !

Personally, I suggest you take others with you when you travel through time. This way you can bring the protagonist like the Overlord of Lu University back to the Holy Ruins world, and you don't need more than a dozen people to rule the world 😁😁😁😁

Still writing books? Just write a notice and come on!

Only then did I realize that Shengxu actually rewrote the finale! ! !

Boy, that's true. . .

Eighty chapters are about martial arts, forty chapters are about Jiang Ye, and chapter 230 is unfinished.

Starting from kidney deficiency😭😭😭😭