The Qin State's Grand Tutor in the Warring States Period

Ji is a surname, the origin. Doesn't the protagonist have a clan name? Generally, people refer to their clan name, since they're not from the main line. Over the years, their branches would have developed clan names long ago, either as official titles or fiefdom names. Even when surnames and clan names merged, clan names held absolute dominance.

Ying Ji was far more cold-blooded than Ying Si.

Empress Dowager Mi Ba Zi, King Yiqu Yiqu Hai, General Wei Ran—can you please find a different way to use this kind of wordplay? You're just using these wordplays for everyone's names. It's one thing to mention them the first time, but you have to add a prefix every time you do it. Aren't you bored?

I think it's well-written, and the dialogue is very precise, unlike many historical novels that are full of modern language like "78" and "awesome," which is jarring. It feels like they could write about a female protagonist with some talent; after reading so much fighting and killing, a slice-of-life story would be nice.

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Why are these transitional chapters so detailed? And you're updating daily? We want to see your writing, not things that can be found on Baidu.

I was already giving up after just the first chapter. There were so many instances of "" (de) in a single sentence. I wonder if the author has noticed that many books are ruined by neglecting details.

Overall, the article's structure is logical and not entirely far-fetched. However, the writing is weak, with numerous grammatical errors, which pulls the reader out of the story and negatively impacts the reading experience.

Each update is too short, I hope you can add more, thank you!

Keep up the good work, author! The book is excellent, and the writing is superb.