Konoha, Starting with the Fusion of Gojo Satoru

I hope the author will not give up on this book and continue writing it

There are too few chapters and I haven't read it yet, but they can be combined, like this

It feels quite suitable

How should I put it? Although Gojo is the ceiling of spells, he does not have explosive star power. But the ceiling of the Naruto world: If you like, I will pinch the moon for you.

Why are there so many articles about Naruto in Qidian? People who haven't watched it are very depressed. When I look at the recommended rankings, they are all about Naruto and Konoha.

When I saw the protagonist use the Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu, I didn't want to watch it. How did the protagonist learn it? This ninjutsu is not a bad ninjutsu like Shadow Clone. This is an A-level ninjutsu. In the anime and manga plus the theatrical version, only the third generation, the fourth generation, Kosuke, Konohamaru, and Orochimaru have used it. Looking at the relationship between these people, you know that this ninjutsu is a ninjutsu passed down from master to apprentice, just like the Rasengan. Even White Fang may not know this ninjutsu.

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Obito's Kamui will break your waist

Let me give you a suggestion to the author. Hatake Satoru is really becoming more and more inconsistent as you write. Originally, the character was a time traveler who knew the plot of Naruto, and he inherited Gojo Satoru's power. What's the result? When Obito was abducted, you said you didn't know the specific time and couldn't stop it, but what about the Minato couple this time? Knowing that Obito was coming to take revenge on Konoha, you didn't go to the Yondaime to discuss countermeasures. You just said that you didn't know the time and place. Kushina was pregnant and Kakashi was pregnant, so you couldn't be a guard? , You were absent from such an important event and then came late after knowing the plot? I don't know what the protagonist means. And what do you mean, Naruto and Sasuke can't become stronger and stop Kaguya if they don't have the experience of having no father or mother. If the protagonist saves them who should have died, the protagonist can only fight Kaguya alone? What the hell kind of logic is this? Let the protagonist save people, and this book becomes Long Ao Tianwen in every second. This is the first time I heard that Long Ao Tianwen can be classified in this way. I don't know if the author has watched Naruto properly. You can just spoil it. Or guide Obito and the Akatsuki organization to find the truth, or just make up an ability for yourself to predict the future. Is that okay? If it's not possible, just kill Black Zetsu with a sneak attack. Without Black Zetsu, Kaguya Otsutsuki can resurrect with a hammer, right? Why do you have to think about fighting Kaguya instead of thinking about how to prevent Kaguya's resurrection? It's okay if you want to follow the original work, but it's only reasonable if you at least change the character to a time traveler who has never watched Naruto, right? In my eyes, the protagonist in your novel is simply a coward who is unwilling to save his life, greedy for life and afraid of death, and short-sighted. The protagonist pretends to treat the world of Naruto that he has traveled to as a game, and he comes to live in Naruto with the same mentality as a player. It is really uninteresting for you to write like this. Let's talk about this in advance. If the author still writes with the mentality that the original work must die to achieve a perfect ending, then he might as well stop writing it as soon as possible. The protagonist is simply unworthy of Gojo Satoru's power. I'll keep it first and see how you handle the Uchiha incident. If you still avoid the problem like a coward, I will definitely delete the book and abandon it.

The Naruto animation has done a lot of magical originals that are not found in the comics, such as Danzo's capture of Kakashi's Sharingan, Danzo's assassination of the Third Generation, etc. Throughout the manga, the third generation is a loving father and does not want to criticize the third generation for anything. Orochimaru defected not because of human experimentation, but because he experimented on his companions. As for the fourth generation being a puppet of the third generation, first of all, Orochimaru could not compete with the fourth generation, and Minato was the most perfect successor in the heart of the third generation. Minato's death was the regret of the third generation's life. As for Minato's death, after the Third Generation pushed out the Kyuubi, the Fourth Generation turned the Nine Tails away. When the Third Generation got it, it was blocked, otherwise the Third Generation would definitely replace the Fourth Generation and seal it with ghouls. Minato's death could not be blamed on the Third Generation at all. As for Tsunade running away because she has hemophobia, can she rely on the third generation? Jiraiya ran away to chase Orochimaru, could he rely on the third generation?

Looking at Gojo Satoru now, it's a joke

Hatake Sakumo is a SB, right? His son graduated without permission when he was 5 or 6 years old, and even arranged for Uchiha to graduate. After that, he took the initiative to speak out about his abilities. He was really a good father of Konoha. He deserved to be cheated to death for acting like this. He deserved it.

It's too derogatory to Uchiha. Uchiha people are just crazy and not brainless. Moreover, Uchiha's character is unlikely to lead to a group fight if he is defeated in a normal competition. I don't quite understand why many authors like to write Uchiha as being so miserable, like the brainless villains they were 10 years ago.

He wrote that Minato is stronger than the second generation peak... Can anyone argue with me?

This book has a lot of typos, the writing is not good, the plot is not clever, and the setting has many loopholes. It really has no merit other than the setting of Gojo Satoru that attracted me. I can barely read it.

To be honest, the curse ceiling is far behind compared to Naruto's ceiling. Gojo Satoru can be a hit at most, and Naruto can create it for you from outer space and the moon. If you don't strengthen it, how can your curse ceiling be used as a ceiling in Naruto?

The protagonist is a ferret again, I can't watch it anymore

Looking at the author's epilogue, I think I'm going to read the original work, and I find that the protagonist is already invincible in the setting, but nothing has changed in the main plot It's just that the main plot of the protagonist pretending to be B is added to the original work, and only the main plot that has no impact is changed. What's the use of your protagonist?

How can you write so poorly? Please teach me.

There's a big problem with your setting. What's the half-armed Hokage sleeve? That is a sleeve with a flame pattern, the Hokage Half Sleeve, the Book of the Book, and Kishimoto has never acknowledged the existence of the Naruto Half Sleeve. This thing is just a novel written by someone who wrote it blindly. It has no actual reference significance at all. It is still here to mislead. Please check the information and complete the basic settings.

Is it necessary to say whether 5T5 is strong in Hokage? Even if we leave aside unlimited techniques, let's just talk about taijutsu. What is the concept of killing a thousand people in 299 seconds in a crowded space without hurting any innocent people? Even Madara can't dance like this. There is also a top reversal technique, which is only a little bit behind Tsunade's Baihao, really just a little bit. Tsunade's peak is to do sit-ups directly after cutting in half. If 2.5T5 can be turned into 2.6T5, it is not impossible, ahem. Not to mention the unlimited spells, the versatility is absolutely top-notch, teleportation, flight, defense, destruction, almost no shortcomings There is no big problem with the subject matter, it is just a pity, the writing is not easy to write even if it is brainless and pretentious

I'm really sorry for not letting Madara-sama use his full strength🤡

A crappy classic, a waste of time

The protagonist is like Kunkun, trying his best to show off, showing off his skills, but why is he so low-key before he develops? Slap yourself in the face?

Mainly I want to know if 2.5 Has been downloaded?

One has no upper half of his face, and the other has no lower half of his face. They are indeed brothers!

Gojo Satoru can't even get past Kakashi

When I wrote this chapter, I knew that many people were going to leave. I don't know what your purpose is for reading Naruto fanfics. Maybe you want to see changes to the original work, or maybe you want to read cool stories that pretend to be cool and slap in the face. Although I am writing a fanfic, it must also contain the soul of Naruto itself. If Naruto and Sasuke don't go through this, Naruto will not have a tailed beast in his body, and Sasuke will not have the Mangekyō Sharingan. Who will beat Kaguya? Does it depend on the protagonist? If it all relied on the protagonist, then there would be no need to write this book now and it could be finished directly. I know Minato is very popular, but maybe everyone has different opinions on fan fiction. When I read fan fiction, I don't like big adaptations of the original works. If you want big adaptations, why not write original novels? Of course, if you really don't like to watch it, there's nothing I can do about it. Of course, you can also become a strong man in your life and have already written a Naruto fan novel. You can write it however you want. If it becomes popular, don't forget to come and show it off to me.

Too wordy

To be honest, Gojo Satoru pretends to be handsome, but he is not lovable. Maybe he is trying to stimulate the students with oppression. But is it too early for the special level? If you give a level one, it is enough for them to drink a pot. Maybe it is too strong. I don't know the severity and always fail. Then I regret it and say that I am the strongest. To be honest, people like Kakashi are more responsible than him.