Fellow Taoist, Please Go on Your Way

It's a pity that everything is good, but it was dragged down by the plot. Writing poetry is too stiff than pretending, and there is no need to pretend. Not writing poetry does no harm to the protagonist at all, but it is in line with the status. In the end, he insists on pretending and becomes famous all over the world. And then, with the protagonist's weak cultivation and rubbish status, isn't that the way to die? If virtue is not matched, it means death, nothing else.

After reading it, just one sentence. It's so frustrating to watch, and it's a little bit Madonna

When I see very specific attributes such as strength, agility, physical strength, intelligence, etc., I dare not look at them. It's annoying.

I have read Chapter 18 so far. To be honest, I have been targeted by princes and local officials from the Demon Suppressing Division. I'm speechless. An organization that suppresses demons and evil cultivators, what's the point? Moreover, there is a somewhat talented evil cultivator from the academy who practices with babies, and then the master and some talented people oppose the Demon-Suppressing Division, saying that the Demon-Suppressing Division is slandering him? Is there no evidence to slap him in the face? The power settings of cults and demons in this book are very weak. Is the Demon Suppression Division dispensable?

According to Taoist friends who have tried poison, this article is also depressing and pretentious. The author uses it to accumulate experience, so please be careful. But it's a good thing to dare to open a book. Let's accumulate it slowly. Come on, it's not easy to make ends meet. Let me give you a suggestion. Nowadays, life is fast-paced and stressful. Most people who read books want to have fun. This is too depressing for you. Not to mention it will be fun in the later stages, how many chapters do you think most people can last? Many subjects have been written about enough, and if they are not original, they will not be suitable for readers. Of course, if you are a rich person who writes books for fun, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Why don't you find a copy of the exercises and practice? Does Pig's Foot know that he can't practice?

As soon as I saw the word "fight of wits", I lost interest. Generally, those who write about "fight of wits" will write it as a brain-breaking text.

From a writer's assistant, it's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

Newbie, new book, please bear with me. I wish you all a happy life and happy viewing. Also, please recommend to collect and read, all kinds of ~ thank you.

No one else cares about it, only the protagonist, the time traveler, cares about his own business.

I would like to give you a suggestion. The overall feel of this book is not good. It looks like Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio. It has no picture and is like a mirror. Although this book looks like a mixture of several books, as long as you can distinguish the primary and secondary and integrate it well, it will definitely be a good book. If you don't get it right, it will probably be sold out.

Cultivation to immortality is the most cruel thing... If you can't do it, you can't do ink.

It looks inexplicable.

To be honest, the plot and details are well described, but the background description is a bit delayed. The male protagonist is too frustrated. The whole era does not seem like an era where good people are in power, and individual small kindnesses cannot be gathered together. It's quite uncomfortable.

The plot is okay, but the writing is hard to describe. I talked about a lot of irrelevant things, and I thought it was foreshadowing.

Oh my god, it's so hard to find novels about cultivating immortality without a female protagonist. I almost cry when I find them😭. Collect decisively.

Good evening, Mark, today is the second day of the Lunar New Year

It's not easy to find a talent like you if you add some novels.

Wouldn't it be better to do something original yourself? 😤😤😤

Intrigue and intrigue don't suit me, bye bye.

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