Konoha's Autumn Path Giant Path

If there was only Attack on Titan, it would be too weak in the Naruto world.

Originally this idea was okay, but all I can say is that it's too boring😓 Do you want to write about how many extra grains of rice the protagonist eats in one meal in order to become stronger? There are also some descriptions that describe the characteristics of the protagonist. It is enough to describe them once. There is no need to point them out in several chapters. You think they are describing the details, but I think it is too wordy...

It can be seen that the author wants to express a lot of things, but his writing skills may be limited and it seems confusing.

Stream of consciousness writing technique, the author looks like a newbie and can't grasp the main line The golden finger is good, the outline seems to be OK, but the author's writing is a hindrance,,,,,,

The author should read it again every time he finishes coding. He has to read it again. Your coding speed may not be fast, and the plot has a serious sense of fragmentation. You have imagined many plots, but have not written them out. If you think about them while writing, it will make readers feel confused. You won't realize it when you write it, but you will feel it once you read it. The ideas and ideas are still good, keep up the good work!

The introduction and name are very attractive, but the content is not to say it's not possible, but it's obviously an online article and it has to have a colder atmosphere. Was Naruto moved by his childhood experiences? There are many people who have experienced the same thing as him, but others are not so moved. Why? Because although Naruto was miserable, he was very sunny. In contrast to his misery, Jiraiya was not moved when he died because of the foreshadowing of the good times ahead. The author's writing can't be said to be boring, it can be said that it has no ups and downs, and it is not impossible to write passionate comics into daily life. The whole article has a cold atmosphere. If others write about daily life, which is warm and healing, then the author writes about daily life in the underworld. I feel that all his psychological activities are far-fetched. The character of the protagonist is very unpleasant, like a piece of dead pork, with no emotional ups and downs. Compared to the writing, I think the character problem is bigger. If you like writing about daily life and psychological activities so much, you must create a charming protagonist. Obviously the protagonist is poorly portrayed

Looking at the name, I thought it was a secret path 😅. Attack on Titan might as well open a Susano Mecha.

The subject matter is good and very innovative. ………… Wen Qingfan is a bit too much, holding on to airs and handling, personal feeling

I think, since writing about giants, it should be a little igniting. Even Nexus, the most depressing character in Ultraman, can be a little igniting and exciting. . . Otherwise, the giant is called a hammer giant. It is better to call it a giant baby.

When I first saw the title of the book, I thought it was a mysterious power system. After all, the path is still a giant. I immediately thought of the top of the warrior path: Twilight Titan, which turned out to be Attack on Titan. I don't know how to deal with those bunch of demons in the later stages.

This book only gave me a feeling that it was tasteless, but it was not a pity to abandon it. It's not poisonous, it just doesn't look good.

At first I misunderstood the title of Mysterious Titan Path, but later I found out it was Attack on Titan and the card emmmmm😰 which is quite interesting.

Since I am writing about Qiudao, why should I have the physique of a strong man if I am not fat? There are also so many handsome guys with V-shaped faces and square faces. They have to be tall and thin to be good-looking. Are they kidnapped by the current aesthetic? I don't want to think about the main audience of the book. Men will really feel that because you write that the protagonist looks like a popular niche, they will feel very involved and have the desire to continue reading?

The power of the giant is definitely not weak in Naruto. When he can cultivate chakra The humanoid has extremely high recovery and vitality and can withstand lightning gun explosions Can create and control highly hard crystals Spouts steam that can carbonize people Burn The muscles generate explosions that can destroy a large fleet High-strength armor Predict the future As long as grandma is happy, it will be okay if her head is knocked off And as long as grandma is happy, any thirteen-year lifespan limit is just a fart

One is an inferior descendant of the Storm Star's combat power, and the other is an inferior descendant of the original monstrous insect. This is just like the tailed beasts in the Naruto world beating giant apes and transforming into Saiyans. The body sizes are indeed similar, but the giant Saiyans in Dragon Ball kill tailed beasts indiscriminately.

Legend has it that Susanoo is 120 meters tall, while the giant is only 15 meters tall.

There is no need to unlock the giant system in order! ! ! The Attack on Titan system does not need to be fully unlocked, as conditional factors will be activated to unlock the next system of Titans. Chapter 62 of the new volume starts a new system, filling in the gaps and introducing the Eastern Gods and Giants system. In the early stage, there were a lot of things, the layout was too large, and the holes were filled back. (Ps: Attack on Titan cards, cards only carry power and have no 13-year life limit) The next card is the Eastern Gods Giant card

How to force Naruto to rebel? Tell Naruto that he is the true image of the son of the Fourth Hokage before Konoha collapses his plan. I would like to focus on the following points. Why are the younger fourth generations and not the older third generations used to seal away the corpses? Why do the Yondaime's subordinates (Kakashi, Shiranui Genma) never approach Naruto? Why has the legacy of four generations disappeared? Why has he been discriminated against by others since he was a child? Why is it that after the death of the fourth generation, the third generation takes over instead of the fifth generation?

Just cut it like this. After saving it for 2 months, it will be gone when I come back.

The author writes fantasy, right? It's full of contradictions, the original characters and the original characters are almost 50-50, inconsistent, and after only two chapters, a female character was written. After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Is your style a doujin? Is it a light novel? ? ? Can you write fantasy well? ? ?

The Country of Rain is not a good choice. Small countries are all reserved battlefields. Ninja wars are fought on the battlefields of small countries. The four battle areas are inherently weak. You should choose a corner place, such as the Country of Snow. If you invade the small country next to it, you may also fight the Country of Wind (the Five Ninja Village is the weakest).

I haven't read the book yet, but I just want to say whether the appearance of the giant of light in Naruto is a bit excessive 😰

I, the giant Long Bo, am invincible in the world

So you can use chakra to create a giant Ultra Warrior of light.

I have thought about this idea for a long time, but there has never been an author to read it, but now someone has actually written it.

To be honest, the shaping of the protagonist in the first few chapters is more or less... And in the golden three chapters, there is a lot of content about social welfare ramen prices and the like It's not that there can't be such content, but it must have enough dramatic effect. Water can be used, but the water must be flavorful. It cannot be boiled water or cold boiled water.

It's a pity that I didn't create the golden finger myself.

Shouldn't Ninja be the Assassin path?

It's such a good subject, but you've turned it into a eunuch.

How about the Akido clan learn the Eight Door Dunjia and double the Yekai form?