The Tycoon with Shards of Worlds in His Mind

A wildly imaginative conspiracy theory suddenly occurred to me: the Fragment Space is the spiritual space of a peerless cultivator. After a defeat, to escape, he could only self-destruct, his spirit escaping into the spatial turbulence. He accidentally ended up on Earth. Due to the different rules of this world, the black soil the protagonist retrieved from the space immediately turned to sand.

It's too bland. To put it bluntly, this story is about a man who has a miraculous encounter and then uses it to eat, drink, have fun, sleep with women, and incidentally expand his spatial range.

Yuan Zhen

Multicolored black

Honestly, this author has narrowed their options. Regardless of the results, updates should still be maintained. That way, even if this work doesn't succeed, there will be support for the next one. But this is the result—neither good nor bad. Who will dare support you in the future?

Which one does this match?

There are too many words about women, and you can't include intimate details. Too many female characters aren't good. The focus should be on enhancing the male lead, with the women playing supporting roles. It should be about physical attraction, not romance.

I was reported for posting pictures in a group chat. 🤔🤔🤔

Arrange

So far, it seems well-written. Has the female lead been cast? Maybe you should play around a bit more, don't make it feel like a cultivation story. You could learn some sports like free fighting, Sanda, rock climbing, swimming, diving, skydiving, etc. Add some everyday beautiful women to the story 🤓🤓. If you can coordinate all aspects well, and the writing and plot are good, writing over 2 million words shouldn't be a problem, right? 🐶🐶