Daily Entertainment Notes

What is this written about? After reading the first few chapters, you can feel that the protagonist has no fighting spirit. There is no momentum either. If you want to start with a very miserable beginning and then turn around and become a great success, you can also write a bloody beginning. Then you need to learn how to write all the beginnings. If you were to look through a book with this kind of beginning, what are the protagonists like? They are all people who are energetic, enthusiastic, hard-working, and have fighting spirit. They firmly believe that they will succeed, and they will never look down on themselves. You, the protagonist, are so bad. Weak, no fighting spirit, self-defeating, no self-confidence. Will anyone like it? You won't even like it yourself. Let's talk about wanting to pick up girls. Would any girl like this bad look? Not to mention Hashimoto, even a person with bad looks, temperament, grades, and personality would not look down on him like this. If you are not suitable for writing novels, go back to writing a diary. Write whatever you want to say about yourself, don't post it on public platforms, it's eye-catching

The writing is really good! Author, please keep writing and believe in your cooking skills!

Finally, there is a story about Airi's appearance. I hope Airi's role can be more~~O(∩_∩)O~~

She is still writing ten yuan after 22 years... I wonder if she has a lot of scandalous information and political leanings. You should check it out when writing this thing. Don't write it based on your face 😰

Can the male protagonist's habit of turning off his phone for several days and being unable to contact him be corrected?

The beginning is too literary and lacks story. Entertainment novels: You should focus on the career line at the beginning, and then gradually increase the emotional line.

After reading Chapter 15, I feel like the author can start a new book. I have no idea what the protagonist, a native, is doing? I don't understand. It's a time-traveler. It's not true. It's not. In the first chapter, there is another one. From chapters one to fifteen, he is in a complete useless state. Are you saying he is rich? I ended up being a pauper, saying I had no money? It feels like the protagonist is not in a hurry to do anything!

The writing style is okay, but the literary flavor is too strong. The characters and some details are delicate, but it always revolves around women. The chance encounter is too far-fetched. Since it is a time traveler, it does not have the distinct advantages of time travellers. The plot conflict is not enough, and the desire to read is not strong. The author must be a girl, haha

I read a few chapters, how should I put it, the main plot is unclear, making movies, TV series, literature, it is still in the initial stage, raising money, developing relationships, none of it, just daily life, having an affair with a little girl, I didn't even understand, what are you doing? Even if he is reborn decadently, he is happy enough to be young again.

Author, you said there will be a village beauty in the next volume, but what about Baa Jiang? When will it come out? Also, I am very depressed. The protagonist is going to be famous. Why is he still a street writer in the introduction? Now i understand

Brother, you have traveled through time! No memory at all? What a failure. When can it be restored

Someone else wrote Nana Min and I cried😭😭

I would like to ask the author if the protagonist's memory fusion at the beginning has developed. After reading twenty chapters, the protagonist is still in a state of inability to do anything. It would be okay if he were just an ordinary person. I can understand the difficulties of ordinary people, but the author has written about the memory of a parallel world, and the protagonist is still depressed. It's a bit unbearable to read in such a useless state. It's not like a cool novel, but at least it's not too miserable. If all the heroines' careers are up, how can the protagonist still worry about food and clothing? How can I write about the relationship? So I want to ask the author whether this memory fusion will be a golden finger for the protagonist to make a fortune.

This style is really hard to read. The confession chapter is quite outrageous. There are not so many descriptions together. I specifically searched for the handshake meeting. It is really abnormal. Boys will care about it. It should have been cut off at that time. Overall, I felt depressed after reading it.

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I saw Riho Yoshioka recently, he is really good-looking, he is so good at it, right?😁

After reading the entire volume intermittently, the protagonist was confused and drifting in the early stages, which was really unlikable. It's normal to hesitate when it comes to emotional issues because you're not sure about the future, especially when the first one (not considering Ishihara in the foreshadowing) confesses to Hashimoto, who was in his most difficult period, and he hesitates precisely because he can't give it. The adults around the protagonist are so nice (Editor Ishida, President), without them, the protagonist would have died long ago.

Can you write more about Airi? I have never seen any articles written about Airi, but she is really worth it😭

Is the author too biased? Hashimoto has three extras and Yoshioka only has one.