I Become a Movie Star in the Strange Reincarnation Cycle

Author, do you know what stood out to me for the first time when I read this book? It's just the opposite body of the protagonist. The weirdness and absurdity come out immediately, so you don't have to listen to what others say, there are always people who like or dislike it, just stick to yourself. This is not a poison at all, but a highlight!

Author, you have been emphasizing that the protagonist is mentally lost, but will this be cleared up later? Don't whitewash it. Author, what you wrote like this reminds me of some novels. The protagonist is so dark in the first part, and then he says that he is mentally lost, and then there is redemption immediately, and he immediately becomes a virgin. Don't do this.

The stories are all original, why do you keep emphasizing who wrote the script? And you kept saying that the interpretation should be based on the original story? This gives the reader the impression that you are copying a horror story, adding some drama and then replacing the original protagonist with your protagonist. For example, in Journey to the West, your protagonist replaces Tang Monk, and then you copy the entire book again. So far, what you have written gives people the same feeling. How can it make people interested?

When it comes to supernatural beings, the male protagonist is decisive and crazy, but when it comes to women, the male protagonist is wretched and greasy, and he slips away.

There is a very strange problem. The protagonist's head is opposite to his body, so all his joints are opposite to normal people. So his movements and appearance are actually very different from ordinary people, and most people would find it strange when they see him. Why is it shown in the article that except for the setting of the headgear being reversed, other aspects of communication, whether it is communicating with others or actions in daily life such as eating and walking, do not reflect this, but are written exactly like a normal person? ? This setting is very novel, but there is no specific expression in the article. Very disappointed.

Come on, author, there aren't many writers writing dark stories from Qidian these days. If I hadn't used all my spare money recently to buy Ukrainian specialties at the directly-operated store, I would have given you some reward.

Author, I think you can write a more detailed post to explain it, or say in the introduction that the works mentioned in the article are your original works. Several comments in the book club circle have misunderstandings, and these are definitely not the only ones who have misunderstood. Rather than replying individually, you should hang your instructions where readers can see them.

I went and it turned out to be pretty good, far beyond my expectation. It's okay. It's very interesting to write.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210301106472253430","UserId":224311352} As a bookworm who has been writing online for more than ten years, I have some opinions and suggestions on this book. I hope you can read it. If you have the chance, even consider my suggestions and opinions First of all, I want to say that I find this book quite interesting. Here are my opinions: 1 I have carefully read all the chapters so far. Your writing is absolutely no problem. It is better than many or even most online writers. There are almost no typos. In all aspects, it is above average, but it seems that your description techniques and environment rendering are relatively young and even a little immature, and you have no own style. I hope you can refer to other people's techniques to create your own style and increase the layering of the work. This is very important 2 Quote from the original Therefore, you may use too many stories. This is your own book and not someone else's. The protagonist of this book is the protagonist of this book and not the protagonist of another story. In the first chapter, you have been writing about Xiao Lin and even wrote about the protagonist and Xiao Lin. Xiao Lin's appearance rate is higher than that of the protagonist in several chapters. This is fatal in online articles. Stories can be quoted but not copied or used too much in your own story. You can refer to the writings in the middle period of Samsara Paradise. Most of them were original creations after readers read other people's stories. This allows people to see a little bit of the original source but it is a new story. 3. The character design is not three-dimensional enough. You said at the beginning that Xiaolin and the protagonist have the same personality, but then you can't show it at all. This is a fatal flaw. On the contrary, I think the person who came to see the doctor has a more three-dimensional personality than the protagonist. I'm very surprised why you don't do it when you clearly have the ability. The above are all my suggestions and opinions (ps. You turned the protagonist's body upside down and it bothered me. Although it is quite interesting to have obsessive-compulsive disorder, can you write it earlier? I feel so impatient just thinking about it.) By the way, the author, you seem to be writing two books at the same time. I suggest you not do that. I took a quick look at the other one and it is completely different in style. Doing this will easily lead to a decline in the quality of the two books. The eunuch is chasing a new book for himself. I hope you can focus on writing one

Has the author ever risked his life? I feel like I might be able to put my work aside and write full-time🔥