I Was Reborn, and I Only Want a Simple, Ordinary Life

Don't describe too much about the black man, just a bar. Cut it off when it needs to be done, deal with it when it needs to be dealt with, don't go back and forth endlessly, it's impossible for you to open an American copy, and the main plot will be written in a bar. In addition, don't "give away the girl".

This book has a single female protagonist in the early stages, but then there are many in the middle and later stages. The heroine spans the second, third, fourth and fifth generations. As for the prosecutor's book, I was really tired from writing it. There is no positive feedback, and after a lot of searching on Naver and Google News to determine who is behind it, book friends basically don't know about the real zz characters, so it is normal for readers to be confused. In short, I feel that what I wrote is quite boring, I will talk about it when I have time...

The previous one was really good, but it was really difficult to write a prosecutor in an entertainment novel, and it was difficult to balance the plot.

Who is the heroine?? If the harem wants to ask who is the first heroine?

Three elements of Korean entertainment novels: stock trading, fighting, Shura field Come on Amin!!! Dry dog ​​card

This, this, this, the co-author is already at the pinnacle of his life? Since you have chosen such a beginning, why don't you just keep having fun and be done with it? May I ask why the protagonist joined SM to experience the workplace life!!! There is no sense of immersion when you write like this. In fact, I wrote well before. The only problem is that the progress is too slow. The protagonist's success process does not need to be too detailed. After all, it is a novel.

After reading the first 7 chapters, I feel that the progress is a bit slow. After all, the main game is in South Korea, and the United States is where the protagonist accumulates original capital. Don't write too twists and turns. The twists and turns of the plot are sometimes fascinating, and sometimes make you unable to enter the main line, which consumes the readers' enthusiasm for reading. At the same time, the protagonist should clarify the future development direction. It must be clear that if he wants to make up for and protect his family, he must Enhance your own strength, wealth, power, both openly and underground. The protagonist must be aggressive, so that business wars are good-looking. Don't write a protagonist who is like an orphan, who can be trampled on by others. You must know that this is South Korea. Understand the chaebols. It is a stick country anyway. You can do evil as you like (they are all doing evil themselves). The protagonist does not need to be too majestic and upright. Just use the means you need. Next door Crazy, you call this a prosecutor, the dark flow is good, the career line is simply awesome, of course the emotional line is his flaw

But I personally feel that the career path should not be too fast, otherwise there will be less thrilling tension in the business war. But the most important thing is not to be too fan-oriented. The recent Korean entertainment dog-licking articles about reborn chaebols made me almost vomit.

I came here from the last book, but I can't support it anymore.

We are not on the main line now. Recognizing a relative is not a rebellion.