I'm Really a Prosecutor

I feel broken, the plot is off the main line, the career line is in the clouds, I have written dozens of chapters on a case and I can't finish the sentence at the end, the emotional line is also a mess and I don't know what to write. Is your identity as a prosecutor so rubbish? You are from Seoul anyway and you write such rubbish. An entertainment company director can control you to death. Your family background is even more speechless. The protagonist is of no use at all.

Why not add Jiyeon? Good bestie, a quilt 😏

The author's outline should be refined, and the plot logic is a bit inconsistent. Based on the protagonist's father's experience, even if the protagonist deliberately concealed it, he should have realized that the protagonist was being used when it was officially announced that IU was the protagonist's girlfriend. This is not a conspiracy, but those who have reached that status have an exquisite heart with seven orifices. The awareness of being on guard will not be weak. Even family members would not be trusted. Therefore, after the official announcement, the entire plot was completely divorced from reality. If the protagonist's father really had this kind of IQ, he would have been forgotten by everyone. In addition, I really don't feel that any girl can be attracted to this kind of protagonist. The protagonist seems to have done a lot of things that moved him, and then he thought that the girl would fall in love with him 😭 This kind of plot is not as good, because after the protagonist's father learned of this situation, he killed the former subordinate named Xu with thunderous means, and then forced the protagonist to live with IU. Moreover, the role of the second female lead is very abrupt. If the author wants to write about the harem, of course he can use all kinds of wit and wisdom to include them all. Otherwise, what kind of emotions and impressions can a time traveler have on a female idol that he has never met before? It is best to keep secret love affairs under wraps, because the public does not know about it, and only the closest people know about it. Such people generally have higher interests involved with both parties involved, and will basically not expose themselves. However, the author wants to write about two women competing for their husbands. In fact, it is difficult to write about Peninsula Entertainment because the heroine's character is already stereotyped. It is difficult to imagine an iceberg suddenly competing for a husband. This kind of scene usually appears in the second dimension, and the contrast is cute or something, but the author's writing style is really not good, and there is no feeling at all.

Why don't you read it (go crazy, this is called a prosecutor) and learn how they write it. His book doesn't have any emotional drama, but the career line is okay.

The more I watch it, the more boring it becomes. It was pretty good at first. Iu and Da Mao Gang are both silly. . The back is full of various prosecutors, officialdom or political intrigues. Brother, do we like to see this kind of thing? How long will it take for you to finish writing this faction? If you keep writing, you will keep supporting it. At worst, you won't read it.

I have no idea what I'm writing and can't complain.

There are too many battles written about. I came here to read sweet stories, where the male and female protagonists interact with each other all over the screen, not to see how dark and political struggles Korea is. You wrote this as the main plot, and the male and female protagonists as side plots. There is no distinction between priority and secondary.

This book is a Korean entertainment novel. After reading N Korean entertainment and time-travel novels, the name of the heroine Li Zhien is already unknown. Celebrities without scandals are not big stars. Big stars must have scandals. Li Zhien's online scandal is baffling to him, like a drifting ship. Li Zhien is witty and smart, not silly or sweet, he is very unique. I hope the author will work hard!

Don't you want to collect all of these?😏

Write more about the interaction between male and female pig feet, the psychological activities in these chapters, and the chapters about parents and other people's parents are still unclear! The main trunk is weak and the branches are clustered together. Do you think it will grow into a big tree?