I Am Reborn and Just Want to Live a Simple Daily Life

Don't describe too much about the black man, just a bar. Cut it off when it needs to be done, deal with it when it needs to be dealt with, don't go back and forth endlessly, it's impossible for you to open an American copy, and the main plot will be written in a bar. In addition, don't "give away the girl".

This book has a single female protagonist in the early stages, but then there are many in the middle and later stages. The heroine spans the second, third, fourth and fifth generations. As for the prosecutor's book, I was really tired from writing it. There is no positive feedback, and after a lot of searching on Naver and Google News to determine who is behind it, book friends basically don't know about the real zz characters, so it is normal for readers to be confused. In short, I feel that what I wrote is quite boring, I will talk about it when I have time...

Who is the heroine? ? If the harem wants to ask who is the first heroine?

The previous one was really good, but it was really difficult to write a prosecutor in an entertainment novel, and it was difficult to balance the plot.

But I personally feel that the career path should not be too fast, otherwise there will be less thrilling tension in the business war. But the most important thing is not to be too fan-oriented. The recent Korean entertainment dog-licking articles about reborn chaebols made me almost vomit.

After reading the first 7 chapters, I feel that the progress is a bit slow. After all, the main game is in South Korea, and the United States is where the protagonist accumulates original capital. Don't write too twists and turns. The twists and turns of the plot are sometimes fascinating, and sometimes make you unable to enter the main line, which consumes the readers' enthusiasm for reading. At the same time, the protagonist should clarify the future development direction. It must be clear that if he wants to make up for and protect his family, he must Enhance your own strength, wealth, power, both openly and underground. The protagonist must be aggressive, so that business wars are good-looking. Don't write a protagonist who is like an orphan, who can be trampled on by others. You must know that this is South Korea. Understand the chaebols. It is a stick country anyway. You can do evil as you like (they are all doing evil themselves). The protagonist does not need to be too majestic and upright. Just use the means you need. Next door Crazy, you call this a prosecutor, the dark flow is good, the career line is simply awesome, of course the emotional line is his flaw

This, this, this, the co-author is already at the pinnacle of his life? Since you have chosen such a beginning, why don't you just keep having fun and be done with it? May I ask why the protagonist joined SM to experience the workplace life! ! ! There is no sense of immersion when you write like this. In fact, I wrote well before. The only problem is that the progress is too slow. The protagonist's success process does not need to be too detailed. After all, it is a novel.

Three elements of Korean entertainment novels: stock trading, fighting, Shura field Come on Amin! ! ! Dry dog ​​card

I came here from the last book, but I can't support it anymore.

These chapters are too boring and not exciting, and the protagonist's investment is not clear at all. What is his purpose of returning to South Korea, and why is he not planning his career? Will it just go down like this?

Has anyone watched Let That Director Go and Karuizawa? Really, I am uneducated, so I can conquer the world by lying down. You can imagine that Korean entertainment and Japanese business novels explore human nature at every turn. Karuizawa This book is even better, it talk about wine culture at every turn

Recently, where is the protagonist? Why don't you take it out for a walk? If I continue writing like this, there will be no more people, and there will be too much foreshadowing. Oh, by the way, I support the following sentence of stock trading, tearing up, and Shura field, but don't abuse it.

Everything is smooth, there are no explosive points in the whole process, it feels like you haven't watched it, the plot line is not clear at all, what is the protagonist doing?

We are not on the main line now. Recognizing a relative is not a rebellion.