Be Cautious When Cultivating Immortality

What a magical world, there are several new authors who are very good recently

If you don't like this style of writing, it's like Gu Long's books. If you don't like it, you just don't like it.

The harem story is outdated and unappealing. I don't even feel like I'm yelling at the sky or the earth. There is no sense of substitution.

Spoilers to: The abilities and powers of the two young masters of the Dan family are quite different, and the protagonist joins the stronger one. The development of such a wonderful story should be that Danjing (controlled by his subordinates) counterattacks Danguan, the protagonist dies of his fiancée (a plot of being insulted by Danjing and then commits suicide), he understands the conspiracy, and then the protagonist takes pains to repair his revenge. …I hope it won't unfold like this story of bitterness and hatred. Manual 🐶

I have some doubts. In your setting, the protagonist is a time traveler. Is he not familiar with the Warring States Period? Or is it intentionally setting the protagonist to be unfamiliar with this era? The only thing that can come out of your time-travel setting is your language and behavior that are out of date with the times. I was fascinated by the appearance of Zhao Ji, and I was also fascinated by the appearance of the house. When I met Ghost Pipa, I felt like I was being tricked, and then I pulled out the apprentice and mother and son, and then I didn't see the mother and son again

Plain, like the surface of a lake. Talk about words, be timid, be clueless, and have no direction. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

Are you recruiting disciples from the very beginning? You are still a newbie and starting to raise a big daddy again?

The plot is OK, but it's a bit cliched to write about sword cultivation. Eight out of 10 books out of 10 are about cultivating immortals and using swords as the main weapon. Among them, there are many books on sword cultivation. I have basically tried all the tricks that can be played. There are several books with swords in the titles on the ranking list. In fact, martial arts is an early attraction in the story of cultivating immortals. After all, the story needs to unfold. Some readers don't have the patience to pave the way for subsequent chapters. A bright technique in the early stage can attract some readers to continue reading. I have read a lot of this kind of novels, and there are a few sword cultivators on the bookshelf. After reading those few books, when I read new books, I will inevitably feel that the techniques are old-fashioned and have nothing new. I should just cultivate them first and then read them when there are more chapters later.

There are not enough descriptions of characters and situations. Everything is inexplicable, like watching a movie in fast forward, lacking details.

I quit because I didn't have anything to do with it. It may be due to the despair of reality and my attachment to Goldfinger. It has reached the point where I can't stand it without Goldfinger.

There is no foreshadowing for various plots, so they are very abrupt, you know? The writing is okay, but forget it for this one. I look forward to the author's next book.

New book. I saw it hasn't been updated in three days. I don't even need to read it. The probability of being a eunuch is too high.

Five chapters, the author wrote it too hastily, the plot is not detailed and needs to be polished

It's almost climax! ! Poor Zhao Ji must be careful! !

There are no good books, so let's share some information with each other.

You can see that the reviews of this book are all baffling and I don't know what to say. First of all, the author is really awesome. I have only read Chapter 18. You can go and experience it. Chapter 17 is called Gongsun Lu. This chapter mainly talks about the protagonist's first day at work when he saw this person and had a few conversations with him. Why do I use "this person" to describe it? Because this chapter only says that this is a body sticker that is good for reading. In addition, I don't know what this person does. Also, the department where the protagonist works is called Si Xie and I don't know what he does. Judging by the name, it should be a department that slays demons. Then, at the beginning of Chapter 18, there was a person named Bai Feng. According to the way the author wrote it, I thought I had missed it. I also flipped forward and it was indeed a new character. You can feel it. After reading these chapters, I felt like, so and so on the rooftop, "You're here", "You shouldn't be here". Everyone who understands knows that this is the joke, and those who don't understand want to scold me. The dialogue and even the atmosphere are like this throughout the whole article, inexplicably omitting a lot of details and still showing off.