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Laughing to death, God? A person who uses experience cards? Do you deserve it?
No matter what the situation, a hero like Kotou cannot be on the stage. Seeing Kotou appear on the stage is a bit dissuasive. I don't know what the author's rank is, but it's a bit uncomfortable to think that the protagonist's game understanding is the author's game understanding. When Kotou comes on, it feels like silver and gold. The Sword Princess in front is also a bit strange. She said she can break 4 times in one second. Now Sword Girl must flash 4 times in 1 second. But I didn't seem to hear the author mention it because I am a book reader. Maybe I didn't hear it.
After reading Chapter 98, of course most of them skipped to read. The author should understand the meaning of skipping to read. First of all, what I don't like is that this game is just this game. There is no need to highlight the contradictions and make people watch it. In fact, in the early stage, I frequently made appointments to wash feet and persuade some people to leave. Again, I feel that after looking at the whole game, there is no passion, and the own data is of no use. It is just killing anyway. I don't know how the author wants the pig's feet to grow. In this case, it is better to cheat and be the strongest from the beginning, so as not to make the logic difficult. Finally, don't write about the so-called conflicts. It's not good and it's disgusting. I really don't want to read it.
It feels good but not very good. The description of silver strength in the introduction really persuades me to give up. After all, silver is not on the table no matter how you consider it. As they say, whether Bai Yin can understand the game is a question. The author makes up for this shortcoming with character cards. However, the protagonist's own attributes are too low and relying on the character card every time will make the readers feel insecure. Looking forward to subsequent updates.
Chapter 222: I didn't understand the vn level 1 solo killing of a big bug. Why did the big bug enter the grass near the red square at level one? In level 1 vn, you order troops first, and the troop line is pushed toward the blue side. Even if the big bug eats troops in the grass, it will be in the middle grass at most, right?
Leng Shao doesn't have any scenes at all. In this book, OMG there are only 4 people.
It is really well written. Even though I have only played a hundred or so games, I can still read it very interestingly. The author also introduces the background characters very well, and I know a lot of people who don't know it (⊙o⊙)!
Actually, brother, it's a bit bad for you to use novel character templates to compare with reality, because the peak of other novel character templates may only be a little better than the peak of real characters, but those characters are written by the author so that they are basically equal to offline. For example, if S9 is strong or not, it is strong! But there was still a difference between the lower limit and the upper limit in that season, but there was no difference between the characters in the novel. Although you can say that you only extract the upper limit and choose based on the fact that the protagonist does not know the strength of the original character, for readers who know, the sense of satisfaction is actually compromised. For example, for example, Brother Li and Chen Mu of the Demon King system, Brother Li is at the peak of his s3 operation, while s6 is at its peak in other aspects, but in terms of operation, it is not as small as s3. But what about Chen Mu? In the book, the S3 operation and the S6 during the retirement period have always been outstanding. At the same time, in other aspects, the S6 has reached full marks. At this time, you let the protagonist choose. He doesn't know that the latter must choose Brother Li for stability, whether it is s3 or s6. But for readers, Chen Mu is the one who has the template of Brother Li and has been strengthened by the author. At this time, there is a conflict, and the sense of satisfaction is compromised. If there is no option like Chen Mu, there are only real characters and you choose Brother Li, the readers' first reaction is that Wuhu takes off! Most of the protagonists in all alliance novels have reality templates that have been enhanced by the author, and some are even template stitch monsters. In this case, if you choose a real character template, the pleasure of readers who know it will be halved, and it will be a bit inexplicable for readers who have not read those novels. Of course it's just a personal suggestion, you still have to look at it based on your own feelings. After all, I'm not writing it. ps Let me tell you in advance to avoid being criticized. Everyone has different opinions. If you think my opinion is not good, there is no need to criticize me. After all, I did not say that this book is not well written. If you feel that I have misled others, the author can delete it.
Omg? Is it God? omo. I don't accept it, I am God.
Sorry, the writing is very good, but the update is a bit confusing. My own idea is to keep it up, but, during the period, I read a few e-sports articles. When I came back to read it, I felt that the previous articles were about the same, so (* ̄m ̄) we are not close enough to accompany you on this journey.