Evolution from Primitive Civilization

Did the author make a mistake? The highlight of this book is not the protagonist but the protagonist leading the apes to develop civilization. It feels like the building is getting more and more crooked from behind.

Okay, okay, I'll chase after chase... Will the administrative agency be called Yuanlaoyuan in the future?

If you abandon the setting of rebirth, no matter how ruthless and cruel you are in killing, everything is still reasonable. Since you are reborn, it is absolutely impossible to abandon your heart as a human being, and it is impossible to completely ignore the concept of family. Even if you don't pay attention to your first spouse and first child, the setting of rebirth is simply a failure.

How could a flame not caused by a chemical explosion, just an ordinary naturally occurring flame, burn the internal organs in such a short time?

I feel like after this book, it's not that it's hopeless, it's just that it no longer has the same flavor and feeling as before.

I'm afraid the protagonist has gone crazy after living for hundreds of years. He looks like a fool.

It was okay at the beginning but I couldn't stand it anymore, I thought it was going to be better, but after what the protagonist said to Anda, I felt so embarrassed, so embarrassed.

Really, the beginning of conflicts between classes and races has been foreshadowed before, but the protagonist chooses to ignore it? The slavery system that was established after that was simply ridiculous. Where there was oppression, there was resistance. You don't even know such a basic principle. Do you really think that a slave society must emerge before it can continue? You are immortal. You can protect this ethnic group forever. There is no need to go through human history. You have to find your own way.

In addition to leading the civilization in the beginning, the protagonist feels almost separated from civilization later on. This is not a novel about cultivating immortals. It's not like I keep exercising to see how the protagonist practices. Forget it, I don't want to say anything anymore. Is there any novel of this type? Please recommend it. I want to see if other novels are good.

After only 30 years of departure, there was a crisis of faith confusion and a crisis of governance. How useless is the protagonist? Two hundred years of rule was destroyed by an outsider in just 20 years

I feel like your author's thinking is wrong. If you follow your thinking and come to Mount Andato, you will be damned if you are wrong. Can't you just kill the two of them? Isn't the fight between the two of them internally attriting the city-state's strength? Is the total population 200,000? From now on, let the protagonist do it alone when repairing miracles, right?

The things that are shown to people must be authentic in ancient times, have three views, morals and so on, right... Is it for normal people to see, for people on earth and modern people, right? If you want to write something unique, you can't be unconventional, right?

Let the author take a look at the current new chapter. This Anda can be said to be inflated. No one can look down on it except the protagonist. Because he has the blood of the protagonist and is powerful, if he is not afraid of the death of his personal guards, he is afraid of killing Tuoshan with a slap. How can he call an army to overthrow Tuoshan? Which one, Tuoshan or his father, is not the British master? Which one has not made a huge contribution to the city-state? Is he comparable to the public side? Personally, my father is the eldest son of the protagonist, so he can't be compared to him, right? And Takuyama also plays by the protagonist's rules, right? If you want to take revenge, you should also take revenge on the protagonist. It's nothing more than feeling that others are easy to bully and looking down on them. I can only say this                             This Anda has only two endings. Otherwise, this book will be outwitted, either killed by the protagonist or imprisoned. Otherwise, the nobles of the entire city-state will understand that as long as they are not stupid, there is a group of people called personal guards suspended above their nobles. If they challenge the protagonist's rules, the protagonist will have to follow them. In addition, in the future, these personal guards who have some strength will cause civil strife. Of course you can beat Tuoshan, but that Anda will definitely not end well. Really, as long as there is a real IQ, it will definitely drop. Don't let the two of them talk to each other. The protagonist is watching from above. You must know that the protagonist's current territory is just a big forest. It does not occupy the whole world, and it is not possible for one person to VS the Federation.

The author doesn't read the comments at all and just dumps all the poison.

Is this talking about the origin of the Saiyans? 😂😂😂

In this book, I read the first chapter of The Stone Age. I especially like books about the evolution of civilization, whether it is the creation stream or something else. Therefore, this book is very suitable for me. In the primitive era, it participates in the development of civilization from the perspective of the protagonist, which is very immersive. The protagonist led the apes to polish stone tools, make fires, and raise livestock, but never left the forest. This paved the way for the subsequent forest fires and the forced migration of the protagonist's tribe. The overwhelming sadness of the fire is also vividly displayed, and the death of an ape to protect the protagonist reflects the ape's primitive, blind and fanatical worship of the protagonist. A highlight of this book is that the protagonist respects the basic laws of productivity that determine production relations and that production relations adapt to productivity. In fact, as long as productivity is rapidly improved within a certain period of time, just like our First Five-Year Plan, advanced productivity can be consolidated. But obviously the protagonist's ape tribe is too backward, and even slavery is an extremely advanced production relationship. The protagonist's decisive killing is really a highlight. On the eve of the Stone Age, the son of the protagonist begins to take control of the tribal power. Because the protagonist is immortal, I wonder if the protagonist will become a supreme god like "I am God!", Or similar to Kasha in "My Hair Can Create a Demon Kingdom". I think it's better to go my own way. The shortcoming of this book is that the writing style is still a little immature, but it is considered average among a large number of authors who write about civilization and development. This is also due to the issue of seniority, which is understandable. There are no other shortcomings. I would like to make a few suggestions (a little selfish) 1. I don't know whether this book should insist on writing about the development of this civilization or wait until it reaches its limit before developing another civilization. If it is the former, I hope that the author will write about scientific and technological civilization, the development of immortal civilization or fantasy civilization, there are really a lot of them, and I am a bit tired of reading them. If it is the latter, I hope the author writes about scientific and technological civilization first. 2. The protagonist can do what the Supreme God does, but I hope that the protagonist's civilization can think independently later. 3. I don't know how to solve the problem of the protagonist's immortality. I hope to use reincarnation. It is best not to show any content about cultivating immortals. I hope the author will keep up the good work!↖(^ω^)↗Come on!

Something is wrong, very wrong, the presentation is a bit strange, it always makes people feel that their views are not correct

You see, if you let the protagonist leave this tribe, there will be a bunch of poisonous points for seizing power.

Why is the protagonist running out alone? Are you in such a hurry to find a mountain? Who will recognize you when you come back decades later? This book feels a bit crooked at this point, the author should be careful.

At first, I thought you were the immortal ancestor of the Saiyans, preparing to lead the race to rise and dominate the universe. But I didn't expect that it was really good to lead a group of long-tailed savages to play primitive tribes for hegemony. Later, I was fascinated and had no idea what I was doing. It was so chaotic at the end that I had no idea what was going on.

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