Time Traveled to Ten Years Later and My Girlfriend Became a Rich Woman

I stayed up late to catch up on the latest chapter. It's very well written. The most difficult part about this subject is the age difference between the two, which leads to big differences in language, behavior, and ideas. But the author has a good grasp of it. Gu Yiling is worried about gains and losses, timid but brave, playful, but he can pursue progress for Xiaoxiao. Lin Xiao is delicate and considerate. While she longs for love, she is restrained and considerate of Gu Yiling. Both have written character traits that suit their age, and there is no sense of incompatibility or abruptness. The love that the two of them make progress together and run in both directions is so enviable. Finally, I hope the author will write well and not demand more. If it maintains its current level, it will definitely be a good book. Come on!

Actually, I just want to ask, where did this book come from? Personally, I feel it's a bit sadistic, the heroine. . . Male protagonist, let's break it up! 😅

The author's writing style is very delicate, and the description of each character's psychology and plot conflict points are very appropriate. The application and description of character creation and supporting roles are very successful. I cried more than ten times while reading this book, and I really felt sorry for Xiaoxiao's ten years. But why didn't the author continue writing? It was finally published. It would be nice to write a little more extra to introduce the married life of Gu Yiling and Xiaoxiao. This would be perfect. Also, the foreshadowing of the university studio founded by Gu Yiling mentioned above has not been recycled yet. Also in the ending, Gu Yiling has not been able to truly protect Xiaoxiao, so the foreshadowing of each other's alliance has to be ended so hastily? I feel like I can write a lot more. The potential of this book is still great. If I continue to write it completely, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

The plot is relatively weak and similar, and a bit unfinished. But the writing style is very good, and many of the descriptions are accurate and to the point. Especially the action and psychological descriptions can express the image of the characters very well. This writing style is really delicate in online articles, and it is rare to be full but not artificial. The character design is also very good. Lin Xiao has the shadow of Lin Mu, and Gu Yiling has the shadow of Gu Feng. The characters can withstand scrutiny based on their identities (os: I don't know why so many people say that men lick women's clothes. I just read the article and don't consider men. The heroine's growth environment and personality should be considered in the character design, and the hexagonal shape of all aspects of the character is too flat.) Moreover, the images of Lin, Gu, and Zhou Bao Xiaoyu all have their own characteristics, and the whole text has a high degree of unity, which is rare in online texts. However, the image unity of some side characters is slightly fluctuating. It can be seen that the author's knowledge reserve is good, and he has a rare three-dimensional sense of observation and description of Nancheng's environment. Presumably Nancheng is Chengdu? Some plot settings are obviously unreasonable. For example, Gu Yiling gave his girl a dog licking directly after getting off the plane at the airport, saying that he was afraid that Lin Xiao would misunderstand, so he just parted ways and nothing happened. Normal people should do this. However, Internet articles are like this, and it is difficult to create conflicts with normal thinking. Finally, I would like to say that it has a strong sense of immersion, especially the first 100 chapters, which gave me a youthful shock. Reading these words in bed every night is like secretly regaining my lost youth in recollection and regret.

The novel is too childish and I can't stand it anymore.

Even a tauren like me was influenced

A good idea is often the starting point of a good novel. Unfortunately, the author's writing power failed to support this idea. What a pity.

It's strange. I cried at the beginning and my tears were uncontrollable.

The protagonist is such a failure that I won't watch it anymore

Is the author a screenwriter? I feel like there is a sense of déjà vu in many places.

I feel the same way, and I'm particularly envious of the male protagonist for having such a good girlfriend in high school. I particularly regret not having the courage to tell that girl that I liked her in high school, after all, she was so dazzling and outstanding. After I went to college, she took the initiative to say that I regretted that we had missed each other. She waited for two full years, and my indifference made me really lose my white moonlight. I really like your setting, the author. If she and I were together in high school, it might be very sweet.

It's so cozy! Idiot male protagonist, if the female protagonist has not always loved him deeply, why would she take him home on the first day! I have been living with him, he is so loving, and his sweetness is beyond the limit 😜

I feel like I am watching a TV series or an idol drama, and the bloody plots in it are not boring. I feel that girls will especially like to watch it. It is like the heroine is bullied in the company, and the hero comes from the sky. Tsk tsk tsk. I suspect that I am watching an urban idol drama. The picture is very interesting. While watching it, I had an indescribable feeling, like I always want to complain about a TV series, but I also want to keep watching it! The visuals are very good, reading and running on campus, very much like an idol drama, hahaha

When I read this book, I felt really good. I felt that the heroine's feelings of regret and recovery after being lost were well written. The heroine's emotional changes towards the hero could actually be written a little richer (it was originally written very well). After all, it has been ten years, and it is definitely not as emotional as when the hero just traveled through time. Anyway, the writing is great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

A virgin becomes a woman after traveling ten years 😂😂

The more I watch it, the more I think it's the vest of a female video author. I would love to read your article if it were posted on a post forum written in 2000, but it would be inappropriate if placed on an online post published in 2022. Looking at your comment earlier, you mentioned that boys can also watch sweet love stories. Yes, it is possible, but this kind of writing method that favors female channels will not be very effective in male channels. Most of the readers of online articles are young men and women. Their way of looking at the world and their thinking logic should be the most different among all age groups. Male and female readers also have different priorities when reading. From the control of the rhythm of the story, the behavioral logic of the characters in the book, and even down to whether every word of the character is appropriate. It is precisely because of this that male videos and female videos are derived. I'm not following the progress yet, but I quite like your writing style. The scene of meeting by the river is really outstanding, and the description is very delicate. The simple scene of two people looking at each other by the river suddenly becomes neutral from the text. But you must pay attention to the frequency difference between men and women, otherwise your performance will be affected. Of course it doesn't matter if you just use love to generate electricity, just do whatever you like.

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These are 18 and 28, good guys, the most powerful age meets the most powerful you,

The title of the book should be changed to "Time Travels to Ten Years Later and My Girlfriend Becomes a Stepmother"

It was okay in the beginning, but the taste changed after Lin Xiaoqian appeared. I insisted on reading Chapter 78 and gave up. I don't know what the author's brain circuit is. Adding this woman is completely redundant and will only lower the score of this book. With the author's brain circuit, there is no need to look forward to the following chapters. There will definitely be more embarrassing plots. The author should consider how to arrange the plot reasonably. The readers of Qidian have a very hungry appetite. After all, the age of the book is here.

I think it's pretty good. I don't know why. I just think that the heroine may dislike the hero for being immature and break up with her. Also, don't have any blind dates or suitors. We are here to see sweet love, not to see the tauren 😡😡😡😡

After reading a few chapters, I felt a bit silent, so I suggest you just invest in female videos.

The book review section is really good, because all the bad ones have been deleted.

I always feel that something is missing, it just seems to be too natural. The male protagonist has never thought that the female protagonist has changed. The female protagonist's attitude towards her has changed from him having nothing at the beginning and her success. Isn't he afraid of what others will say? To be honest, if it weren't for the protagonist's father, maybe the protagonist wouldn't have the courage to face those rumors and be with the heroine. After all, he is an 18-year-old boy, how could he rely on a rich woman to make a living?

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Did you see that Lin Xiaoxiao may not like money, but every moment that touches her requires money?

After reading the previous part, I feel that the main character is a bit useless! Age is the biggest problem. He has no special abilities, no golden fingers, and is ten years behind in experience. The combination will make the other party think that he is just a child, which in fact he is. The heroine is a completely independent and capable character. It is too far-fetched for these two people to be together. Let's see what changes happen later.

It feels like watching a love movie, I blame the boss 😂 The writing is not white and it is very heartwarming. I will order them all as soon as they are released. Good luck to the author💪

Hey~ It's actually not bad. I was a little bit crazy when I was in middle school and secretly read the sweet articles of female classmates~ Come on

This book is very comfortable to read and has a sense of the times. I hope the author can keep writing. As long as it is not abusive, it would be better if it is sweeter. Write it well. I am committed to this book. Even Jesus can't keep it. I said it~