Global Wasteland: The Immortal Emperor's Shelter

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This Immortal Emperor is too weak, like a Taoist priest in the Age of Ending Law, and the routine of selling water at the beginning is exactly the same as that of similar novels (the magic of creating water is similar to other novels in which water purifiers are obtained), which does not reflect the quality of the word Immortal Emperor at all. . .

Another 30ml sip of water came

The "Immortal Emperor" in need of shelter Are the Immortal Emperors so worthless now?

There's something wrong with your name. Does the Immortal Emperor still need a refuge?

I just want to know how you died as an Immortal Emperor. Think about the Jade Emperor. Unless he doesn't want to live anymore, who would dare to kill him.

This book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Tan and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houdan did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but he only developed sparks with her after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have attracted the attention of readers. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have endless yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in Qiu Ming Mountain, suddenly and vividly highlights Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. In the book, the stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to go together to save grandpa are also highlights!

The writing is still very good, and I can read it, but there is a problem with the setting of the Immortal King, which does not reflect his due value. However, if the role of the Immortal King is reflected, then this novel will have nothing to write about, and it will basically be a brainless novel. This is very contradictory.

I would like to make a small suggestion, the female protagonist can be useful to the plot. There is usually a big problem with female protagonists in apocalyptic novels. A female survivor who is randomly recruited is undoubtedly not qualified to be a female protagonist. Everyone is here to see the Immortal Emperor. Don't forget this. The heroine can be your partner in a previous life, or she can be transformed in an instant. In short, don't drag yourself out. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just be very fond of the heroine. If you don't know how to do both, don't get the heroine. Everyone doesn't hate the heroine, they hate the heroine who has no effect on the plot of the story.

Fantasy book invests in science fiction section, what the hell is this? 😅