Global Wasteland: The Immortal Emperor's Shelter

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This Immortal Emperor is too weak, like a Taoist priest from the Dharma-ending Age. Moreover, the opening trope of selling water is exactly the same as other similar novels (using magic to create water is similar to other novels where the protagonist draws a water purifier). It doesn't reflect the quality of the title "Immortal Emperor" at all.

Another 30 milliliters of water came.

The "Celestial Emperor" in need of a refuge. Are Immortal Emperors so worthless now?

Your name is problematic. Does an Immortal Emperor even need a refuge?

I just want to know, how did you, a Celestial Emperor, die? Think about the Jade Emperor, unless he himself didn't want to live, who would dare to kill him?

This book is well-written! First, the author's handling of the character Song Jiang is incredibly fresh and original. It completely breaks away from the previous style where Song Jiang was always obedient to Tang Sanzang. Tang Sanzang is no longer the one who constantly chatters with Lin Daiyu and neglects his duties.

The writing is quite good and readable, but the concept of the Immortal King is problematic; it doesn't demonstrate his due value. However, if the Immortal King's role were shown, there wouldn't be much to write about, and it would basically become a mindless wish-fulfillment novel. This is a very contradictory point.

Here's a small suggestion: the female lead should be functional in the plot. Female leads in post-apocalyptic novels generally have significant issues; randomly recruited female survivors are clearly not qualified to be the female lead. Remember, everyone's here to read about the Immortal Emperor.

Fantasy novels submitted to the science fiction section? What the heck is that? 😅