One Piece: Master of Thunder and Lightning

There are no invincible Devil Fruits. This isn't a matter of imagination. If you're saying that having a wild imagination makes me invincible, then I could write a novel where the protagonist eats the Urine-Urine Fruit and can blast through the universe—that's just arguing for the sake of arguing, and it's useless for writing. Besides Devil Fruits, physical skills and Haki are indispensable.

The protagonist should get ready to wash his neck. All Logia-type Devil Fruits are mere child's play compared to Luffy's Nika Fruit. During Luffy's battle with Kaido, the Nika Fruit demonstrated its ability to grasp elements. Luffy leaped into the air, caught the lightning summoned by Kaido, and threw it back at him. I don't know if Luffy can grasp other elements, but currently, his ability to grasp lightning is definitely the best counter to the Rumble-Rumble Fruit.

One Piece is too outrageous, there's nothing to watch anymore. 😁 Sigh, it's not the author's fault, the original work is too brainless. One Piece is a joke now, even more of a joke than Bo Ran. 😁

Has no one noticed? In the world of One Piece, Logia-type Devil Fruits are merely a shortcut; Paramecia-type Fruits are the true path to power. Time, space, and other special abilities only appear in Paramecia-types! Logia-types are inherently vast, but they are mostly natural phenomena observable to the naked eye!

The Rumble-Rumble Fruit, which volume has been released? It allows users to develop the ability to use lightning to stimulate their bodies, control electromagnetism, increase voltage to break down space, use Observation Haki to cover the New World, strike the entire world with lightning, and even more outrageous, directly travel between worlds.

After reading the first 36 chapters, I noticed a problem: the main character's teammates aren't clearly explained. They appear out of nowhere, and their Devil Fruit abilities and special skills are unclear. At first, I thought the author was foreshadowing something that would be explained later, but after reading 36 chapters, I still don't know. It feels very strange.

This is quite well-written; it's realistic. As a pirate, he's still ruthless when necessary, which I kind of like. Here are a few suggestions: When writing about crew members, provide more background information, highlighting their characteristics and abilities so they can contribute their maximum value as crew members, rather than having the protagonist act as their caretaker.

Furthermore, the novel shouldn't place too much emphasis on the three great weapons. Frankly, they're essentially just giants; they're effective against ordinary people, but useless against vice admirals and admirals, especially since naturally awakened weapons are practically useless. The One Piece world is a world of high-class lore; what weapons are truly effective against ordinary people and lower-ranking fighters?

The author mentions more than once in the story that the protagonist doesn't want to be flashy and wants to keep a low profile, avoiding attention. However, the protagonist's actions are quite the opposite. In the New World, he infamously destroys an island with a million inhabitants, joins the Rocks Pirates as a renowned division commander on the Grand Line, and then, without a second thought, raids Enies Lobby in the first half of the Grand Line?

The protagonist is a pirate, but his pirate crew has very little screen time. Moreover, the main storyline feels very limited, with most of the plot consisting of subplots. The transitions between scenes are very confusing, and it's hard to understand what the protagonist is trying to do. Each event seems to have no beginning or end. Even after reading two hundred chapters, I still couldn't figure out what the protagonist's purpose was.