I Hope You Have the Same Attitude Toward Cultivation

So writing your first book is best done as a side job. Without the author's own desire for expression, this book would not have been written. Very few people become gods with their first book (but it is true that most people become gods with their first book), so the author must first determine why he writes the book. My personal suggestion is to satisfy your desire for expression. Only when you feel comfortable writing can you have the motivation to continue writing. And if the financial conditions are not good, it is best to find a part-time job. If you expect too much financial rewards from writing a book, you will easily be influenced by the will of the reader. No book has survived that was influenced by the will of the readers Readers' opinions can be referred to, but they cannot be influenced. Reading a novel is actually like playing an RPG on the "server" in the author's text. What kind of world the author can build and what kind of story he can create are the biggest selling points of this "server". Every author wants to build a different "server", and every reader wants to play a different "RPG". Therefore, the author can only make the best "server" he wants to build, and of course he can also consider popular elements to embellish it. But the bottom line requirement for a server is stability. The logic is stable, the story is stable, the characters are stable, etc. Each unstable point is like a bug to the reader. Readers will ask for bug fixes. At this time, the author must first consider whether this is a bug? Then consider the impact of fixing the bug. The last thing is whether modifying the bug will have any impact on other readers. ------------Don't want to see it? Just jump to the conclusion---------------- Write the story you want to write, and then listen to the readers' opinions to improve the story. Instead of writing novels for readers.

As a 13-year-old bookworm, this book written by the author is already a masterpiece in my opinion, because the advantages of the author's works are so outstanding that they can cover up other shortcomings. It can be felt that the author's writing style was very changeable when writing this book, because he was looking for different ideas. I think the other chapters are good, but the part where the protagonist dies is a bit stiff in order to quickly advance the plot. Simply put, the image of the villain is not full enough, and he does not stand up as a relatively pure tool man. The author's restraint in writing is also a unique part of this book. The characters he writes all have some personalities and special experiences, but the author only briefly describes them and quickly skips them. I think this is because the author has made some compromises for the fast pace of online articles. I think this kind of writing has the potential to open up a new genre. Longer works like Mortal Cultivation of Immortality may not be very popular with current readers, because people nowadays have less and less time to leisurely read online articles.

How to say it? This book is very good, but there are some poisonous points, but these poisonous points will be explained in the end, and they are very reasonable. However, if you don't know what is behind, these points are poisonous points. Don't give up reading because of these poisonous points. In the end, they are all foreshadowings, but it seems a bit unreasonable in the front. The Battle of Haotian in the second volume directly canonizes the gods.

Brothers, can you support me? I want to be the operating officer of this book. If I do, I will give everyone benefits!

It's time for the annual traditional show again! Leave your current cell phone battery, I believe you will be able to find the other half who has a battery that adds up to 100! It's the same old rules I'll go first: 99%

"I hope you have the same attitude towards cultivating immortals." "From now on, people will ask you if you have a Taoist partner." "Just do it!" "In the future, people will ask you what your cultivation level is." "Just deal with it!" "Just show off and it's over!"                             —Chen Xuanqing

Great content. Exaggerated plug-ins naturally need to have a matching world background. The author has a good grasp of the strength of the plug-in and the depth of the world background. It looks very satisfying. Long Aotian will not be one-sided, nor will he be a one-sided abuser. Such a perverted plug-in, if it weren't for the dark and dark background of the big world, would appear to be overly output. However, the simple darkness can affect the perception. It needs to be matched with enough humorous daily life and interactions, sprinkled with positive energy, and add some standpoints to blur the line between good and evil. The balance is just right. Only when the balance is grasped can the tilt of good and evil, promotion first and suppression later, and pleasure and cruelty become meaningful.

I hope you can leave here immediately after reading my comments. This book is completely poisonous. I really don't understand why some people can say that they are gods. Just because their settings and language expressions are good can they be called gods? The plot of the story is completely unreadable, the main plot is very confusing, and the character of the protagonist is even more confusing. Taken together, this book is just the author's idle moaning and the author's self-pleasure novel.

I can't figure out why the protagonist is so hostile to the demon clan, especially what he said to his adopted son. He clearly knows that demons eat humans, and humans eat demons. Natural selection favors the strong. As long as the protagonist is strong enough, demons can also be his subordinates. Yet, he still seems to want to exterminate the demon clan. After the demons wiped out the clan, wouldn't a large number of the materials for making alchemy, weapons, and exercises become extinct?

I can't stand it anymore. . First of all, the emotion towards the heroine. . In fact, the heroine was only given eyes. . There was no death or anything like that. . . Then he remembered it in his heart and cultivated immortality just to resurrect her. . If I were the heroine, I would feel a bit outrageous. Then the protagonist cannot get used to demons and cannibals during his journey of cultivating immortality. Because that would make the protagonist forget the essence of human beings. But he has had relationships with many women. What about the immortality you cultivated? Then the protagonist becomes a demon himself and can't stand it. Afraid of the rise of monsters and threats to mankind. . All kinds of traps. He is also extremely indifferent to his biological son. . Too much kindness to an adopted son. . But don't forget, immortal cultivators are not good either. Don't forget the dark side of Taixu Sect, and the Immortal Sect ignores mortal lives in order to deal with the Ghost King. . What's the difference between him and those monsters? . Not to mention that when the protagonist was dealing with the Ghost King in the Immortal Sect, he set up a large formation and killed countless monks just for their blood essence. . And the protagonist has a hook, so there is no need for these. . That's it, we still need to create a good senior brother in Taixu Sect.