Douluo: Who Is My Father?

The writing is so messy. I suggest you write a new book instead of writing a fanfic. It turns out that the timeline of the fanfic must be aligned. Bibi Dong is not Qian Renxue's daughter. The Secret Chamber Douluo is not dead. I vomited after writing it.

God-level martial arts are no match for the Clear Sky Hammer? What does the author think?

The timeline is wrong. The protagonist was born during the time period of Qian Xunji. It is impossible to have the same timeline as Dong and Tang San, because the first chapter states that Tang Chen left after the protagonist was born, and then entered the mainland seven or eight years later. No matter how you look at the timeline, it doesn't match up.

Tang Chen and Bo Saixi's son went to pick up Qian Daoliu's granddaughter... You are murdering people this time.

Poisoned to death, the protagonist at level 20 killed a 50,000-year-old evil killer whale and lost a soul bone. Instead of giving the hammer a soul ring, he instead gave a god-level spirit a century-old soul ring. No one in their right mind could do this.

How did you review the book? Can this thing be of high quality? The Poseidon Martial Spirit is at the god level, and the Clear Sky Hammer is at the top level, so it is impossible for them to be twins. It's okay if you want to write it like this, it's a small problem. Good guy, I just absorbed the soul ring at level 20, and I have never been in a fight. I directly killed a 50,000-year-old evil killer whale. That is equivalent to Contra. Most human Contras can't beat it, so you are beaten to death? Don't talk about Poseidon being a god-level martial spirit. Qian Renxue is still an angel. Can she be invincible? Also, there are two books about Big Poison. He just blurted out in an instant, Big Sumeru Hammer, Explosive Ring. Who told a 6-year-old child? You know where Poseidon's Heart is, and you know the hammering technique, but you don't know who your father is? I have read this book over 20 times, and every time I was dissuaded by the name. Recently, I saw a lot of people saying that this book is 666. Come and take a look, I can only say that it is average, and it is quite poisonous.

The Clear Sky Hammer is pretty useless. I don't know why the whole novel makes this hammer look like a very awesome thing.

Tang San stopped licking and started licking Tang San's ancestor. Is the hammer so powerful? It's not good to use a sword.

The timeline is a bit forced. If the protagonist is Bo Saixi's child, it cannot be in the same period as Tang San. Could it be that he is stronger than Nezha? Bo Saixi was born after more than ten or twenty years of pregnancy.

The main character's name is awesome, Namikaze? Just call Minato Namikaze hey hey hey

The protagonist travels through Douluo and plays Madara Uchiha at the beginning. He scares the Shrek Seven Monsters into tears with a move called Sky-blocking Zhenxing, making the useless Xiaogang kneel down and beg for mercy on the spot. By playing different roles, he made villains with incredible strength appear one after another in the world of Douluo. Uchiha Madara, Killer Hit, White God Goku, Whitebeard, Death, One Punch Man Saitama and so on. Book title: The Beginning of Douluo as Madara Uchiha, just click in to read it, come and take a look.

Qian Renxue

I'm so convinced that Bibi Dong was taken away under the guise of being a single heroine. It's disgusting 😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

When I saw the introduction, I couldn't help but think of the story of Fulai going back in time to be his grandfather in "Futurama" that I just watched while watching the video.

High Priest

I have a question, if Tang Hao met the protagonist, what would he be called based on his relationship?

The male protagonist is also a scumbag. After regaining his memory, he abandoned Bibi Dong and asked Qianxunji to do harm, and also asked Poseidon to erase his memory in the world. It is better not to write this plot, unless Qianxunji did not force Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue was not Bibi Dong's child, which is acceptable.

Emm, halfway through watching it, the male protagonist and Bibi Dong have a romantic relationship, and they are labeled as single female protagonists, but they ended up getting together with Bibi Dong behind Qian Renxue's back 😅😅😰😰

Brother, you are getting worse every time!

At the beginning, my development of this book was: the writing was quite good at the beginning, but after more than fifty chapters, it became more and more outrageous, and it was written in big letters in every line - poisonous.

The protagonist's Poseidon Gaze is different from your mother's Poseidon Gaze. Your mother has the third soul skill and you have the ninth soul skill 😄

I don't understand why so many people hate Tang San. I haven't felt anything bad about the animations I've watched so far. He's very dedicated to Xiao Wu, unlike other harem stallions, and he's also good to friends and teachers.

Can the author now write a fanfic about Dou 1 and the group? The martial soul is a three-legged golden crow, and then like the sea god, he conquers the bird family and becomes a god, becoming the sun god.

Why is it finished before June? Don't you want some water?

The screen opens with a 100,000-year-old great white shark wandering around the human world, seeking death?

The author Why is the plot so bad? Is it bad before it is put on the shelves or all the time?

Regarding the timeline, I changed it a little bit, don't mind

Pig's feet

Why did it change to 5,000 words? Shouldn't it be 6,000 words?

I have read Chapter 30. It is not appropriate for this brother to stay for a long time. Why is there nothing about the hero's sister? It's that Nan Nan.