Steam Age: I Reverse Contract with the Gods

Pretending to be mysterious. The first three chapters are written like shit. There's no story at all, it's all about adjectives.

Not only was it not exciting, but the writing was also incomprehensible. Nothing was explained clearly, and there was no main plot. Just like a normal travel diary.

After reading four chapters, I learned a lot of adjectives, what is the situation of the protagonist, what is the background, what is the situation of the system, and I am completely confused about everything.

This is the only novel I want to write about eunuchs. Those who haven't read it are best not to read it or write it. To be honest.

So many typos, I'm confused🐶

Pretending to be mysterious is not called digging holes. Being verbose is not the so-called good writing style, and it cannot even be called bad writing. On the contrary, it can only mean that the writing style is poor. If you can't even express your thoughts concisely, why should you mention the writing style? This is called procrastination. So book friends, can you please stop shouting about good writing when you see this kind of pretentious writing? When you see something that is not satisfying, say that it is thoughtful, it is not a novice. Writing a novel without revealing any emotional points is called a running account.

The protagonist is a loser, and the god who reversed the contract is a loser.

At the beginning, imitate others. If you draw a tiger, you will not be like a dog. The food will be tasteless.

My friend, there is something wrong with your novel! So problematic! The main line is vague! The protagonist is confused! Everyone seems to have a secret, and no one's secret can be connected to the main line! The background seems huge! But actually your writing power is not strong enough to describe it! And one secret after another! You only dig holes but don't fill them! No matter how hard you dig, no matter how hard you bury it! For example, the protagonist's boss seems to have a strong objection to the church, and he dares to conceal the protagonist's situation for a protagonist he has never met! But what happened later was that he helped the church become the protagonist, and the character changed his personality repeatedly! Here comes another little protagonist, a female roommate. Is she actually the princess of the kingdom? The princess of the kingdom doesn't know why she goes to such a ghost place? I wish I could just meet the protagonist! But you didn't elaborate on it! So, you are not suitable for writing novels! It's better to go home and farm as soon as possible!

Deliberately trying to outwit the protagonist makes me laugh so damn hard. It's written inexplicably

I read it from my mobile phone and it looked okay. Why are the comments on Qidian so cruel? It's pretty good among the Cthulhu books. The only drawback is typos,

Don't read it, this protagonist is really disgusting and has no personality charm at all. Being cowardly and useless again and again, looking hard

If nothing else goes wrong, this book has no chance of becoming popular. The ideas are very good, but the typos in it were not corrected even after the book friend pointed it out. It is obvious that I have not read it, so this book is just like that.

Um, the latest chapters are a bit mysterious and I can't quite understand them.

The main character was so disgusting that I gave up.

To be honest, it is indeed a bit confusing. There are many typos and the sentences and paragraphs are not clear. Many times, it depends on the reader's thinking and judgment ability to read your article.

The protagonist has no personal charm, the storyline has no tension, and there is absolutely nothing that attracts me →_→ It's like a piece of cake.

There is no steam feature, just the constant presence of kerosene lamps. Too much daily life. The protagonist is weak at the beginning. No pretense or slap in the face. It seems that the author wants to write an emotional drama about the protagonist, but his skill is not enough. It looks embarrassing.

When I read Chapter 13, there were a lot of typos, but the setting was okay, but the plot didn't feel like anything.

After reading Chapter 62, I would like to ask the author if he has lost his love? If you write well according to the rhythm at the beginning, you will definitely be popular, but later...

Come on, you must keep writing it down. Someone has been following your story, and I am really looking forward to the next development of the story.

The first part was okay, but when Anna came out, it was not good to watch. It was about forty or fifty chapters.

Link? ? ? This name is awesome, I must be strong

Too many typos. There are too few lines.