Scary, We Are Serious

The writing style of this novel is good, and it also captures a few cool features such as the horror experience hall, short videos, horror paintings, etc., Which makes it look like a "House of Horror". However, the author also has a thorough grasp of the poisonous points. There are some chapters that I really can't hold on to. I hope the author will change them, otherwise readers will be persuaded to leave. Also, the artificial intelligence in the game is too strong! No one doubts it? You can talk to people directly, unlike in the horror house where you are role-playing, so I hope the author can improve. There is also the issue of the longevity of the game. If other people play the game, it will be projected, so the suspense of the game will be gone, and the appeal will be less attractive to people who play it later. No wonder the protagonist's experience center has closed down. So I hope the author can improve the above issues. Please improve

There are no major problems with the book itself. Most of the poisonous points were avoided after they were pointed out. In terms of subject matter, it is relatively rare, and the content is more everyday. But compared to most books it's still good. Then came the foreshadowing, and now we have seen chapter 82. It is known that the foreshadowing has a system, "people around me", Sister Hong, as well as a haunted house and a virtual employee chat room. Just looking at the direction, I feel that it will be more fantasy-like. What I think of is something like a different space. Regarding Sister Hong and the heroine, as well as the emotional line, my personal advice is to handle it well. The article reveals that Sister Hong and her relationship with the protagonist will be a big poisonous point if not handled well. Then there is the system, which involves grasping the rhythm. When the protagonist has the ability in the middle and later stages, he will have to grasp the origin of the system and so on. Then there is the virtual employee, which is a connection point with the system, but his role cannot be seen now. If the author wants to write horror, he can spend time on the copy and use psychological environment and other techniques to create an atmosphere. But looking at the trend is a bit lighthearted and funny. Now ZC does not support writing "cunning" things, but for games, it can be said to be passable. Then there are some small details and settings that can be further processed. All in all, this book has its highlights and can be considered above average, but in the end it depends on how the author improves the setting. Maybe he can become a god too

Come on boss, I hope it's a new boss, stop being tj

Four stars (to be determined) ⭐⭐⭐⭐ In addition to the "unconventional humor", there is also a serious side to life. Or a dream? Or career identification? Of course, blind entertainment falls into the trap. While scary, don't forget that you are not a ghost. From this, you have to face the long journey - the global horror chain.

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The overall lack of smoothness is so serious that good writing is useless. After reading "I Have a House of Horrors" and then reading this novel, you will find obvious problems. Author, the layout is really too small. Just open a store. Whenever a guest comes over, he will curse. Come up with a new script. He was immediately arrested by the police again. Just put something together, netizen: It's so scary, so scary. (The more I watch it, it feels like a country bumpkin has entered the city. Even if the level of the city is high, but the level of the country bumpkin is not high, then how high can the level of the whole movie be❓) But there are shortcuts to everything. If you change the style of the movie, you can immediately turn decay into magic.

Wu Yeying

The writing is slow, mainly the plot. What makes it exciting is that the author has no points at all. Obviously the plot of this book looks very good, but all the clichés in it are ignored. It is still inexplicable. This book should be light-hearted, but it is inexplicably more violent. At the beginning, passers-by questioned, and telling others to leave before they even played was very poisonous. If you have no grudges, you are not afraid of being beaten The makeup incident, when no one was wearing makeup, the director was still furious with the extras and the assistant's incompetence. Although this part is not considered poisonous, it just feels inexplicable. If you want to write about a violent director, you also need to write clearly why. Yes, the author has no reason for various incidents. They are all inexplicable and full of violence The incident with the school's surname Cha should be the most inexplicable. Anyway, I was poisoned during this period. What hatred or resentment could make her do such a thing? ? ? I would like to give some suggestions to the author. You can write the passerby like that at the beginning. The reason can be that he is just a social animal. He comes to cause trouble because he is under too much pressure. He wants to conflict and fight with others to relieve stress. Then he found that although this horror game is scary, after shouting it out The whole person became more relaxed, but he was relatively useless, and then he became a regular visitor. From then on, he could let this character have nothing to do and let others play with him, such as water, water, female boss, iron cock boss, etc. It would not be very relaxing and interesting to scare them The same goes for the case of the female anchor. It was over too early and it's not fun to write about it. For example, if you write the female anchor as an anchor who loves horror videos, and then don't visit the store, you can write her into a cute and fun-loving character Makeup Matters In this article, you can write that the director and the actors licked each other in various ways, which shocked everyone. The follow-up movie won awards, and insiders licked the makeup artist in various ways, and the audience worshiped and worshiped them The surname Cha is too inexplicable, and this kind of plot is not pleasing, so it can be deleted.

Next, we have to speed up the pace... The map is opening a little slower.

It is recommended that there be fewer women. Women will only affect the level of terror.

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I read the previous chapters and found a problem that I don't understand. First of all, this is VR. Unlike Sword Art Online, you can imitate people touching objects when wearing VR clothes, but you don't have a universal treadmill. The map is as big as yours. Is your store big enough? And there are places to climb over. In reality, you must have something to borrow force to help your character climb over in the game, because this is a wearable suit. Unlike the handle or the like, there are no operation keys.

Chapter 10 is very wrong in what you wrote. According to your logic, wouldn't it mean that in reality, rich people just hire hundreds of people to fabricate a trumped-up crime and directly arrest their enemies? Is there any evidence for a trumped-up charge? No. I just get angrier the more I look at it. It's too poisonous. Especially when the policewoman pretends that she doesn't want to wrongly accuse good people. You're too poisonous.

It is recommended that the author play some horror games and experience them carefully to find inspiration, such as Dead Souls series, Silent Hill series, The Evil Within 1, and Zero series.

It's pretty good, keep it up and take care of it for a while first

How should I put it, although the previous plot is a bit far-fetched, it is acceptable. But the problem with Weuxue is too big. It is no longer just a problem in chapters 3-4. But after reading those chapters, I saw that the follow-up was not dealt with at all, and I couldn't read the rest at all. I basically read the title and then skipped chapters. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I had no desire to read any more. Those few chapters of Ruoxue were really annoying. I think, why don't you just write that Ruoxue was raped, and then committed suicide. In the end, the character was deleted directly from the book. The protagonist will know how to miss it afterwards, and it's over and handsome.

I feel that the game is not that scary. I suggest the author read the book by the air-conditioning master to get a feel for it.

It feels okay, but there are not many people watching.