Evolution from the Crocodile

If you can't stop being ruthless, don't write about alien beasts. I can't tell my position clearly, and neither side is pleased with it.

Alien beasts, do the justice that belongs to the alien beasts, and stand on the right side. Cancel the description of human beings, or describe dead people euphemistically. Those who report killings when they see them have nothing to do, and the novel about exotic beasts is not suitable for you.

I saw the latest chapter, and I feel that the author's previous writing was pretty good, and he also handled many aspects quite well. Then someone in the comment area said that taking care of three little crocodiles and helping people is very toxic. I don't think there is any problem. The protagonist takes care of the little crocodiles in front of him to help him. The three little crocodiles in the front play their role in digging holes or protecting the protagonist's evolution. Regardless of whether they are animals or humans, after being together for several months, they will definitely have feelings. It can also alleviate the loneliness of the protagonist who has transformed from a human to a beast. Then there are those who say that helping people is poisonous. In fact, I think it's not bad. The several times the protagonist helps people and catches bandits are all done safely without exposing himself to any risk. As a normal person, if there are no big problems with the three views, and it does not harm one's own interests, he will definitely help if he can. Alien beast writing is not dark writing. It is difficult to become popular in the Alien Beast genre because there are many pitfalls in it. First of all, there should be no flaws in basic beast knowledge, otherwise you might not notice it at first, but there are a lot of popular science in the comments, and it will be very hard to find mistakes. Then there is the issue of getting along with humans, especially after the increase in strength is exposed. The official attitude of humans towards the protagonist must be reasonable, and it is impossible to be highly trusting and dependent or very alienated and hostile. The protagonist's attitude should not be too licking or intimate, but it is also best not to be too brutal and murderous. The balance in between is very important. After that, there is the issue of combat power. After the world mutates or the spiritual energy is revived, the changes in the strength of the protagonist and others are very important. They cannot rise too fast, otherwise they will easily become invincible. Compared with other alien beasts and humans, it would be easy to get boring if the protagonist kept crushing them. But the protagonist has a golden finger. The reason why other things are equal to or even slightly stronger than the protagonist is very important, and it cannot make readers feel that the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's strength... That's about it. I feel that the author has written quite well at the beginning, without any flaws or poison. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's really poisonous. After taking the pig's feet, there is only one nanny, who will take care of those crocodiles.

Humans need to torture and kill animals to prove that they are human beings, and alien beasts need to torture and kill humans to prove that they are alien beasts. Excuse me, is that correct? What is right and what is wrong. What do I need to add?

As long as the protagonist is not a human, then the villain must not be a human. I want to ask why, you are a crocodile, your enemy can be a bird, a tiger, or a dragon, but why can't it be a human? Are these animals any different from people? If you think about it from your standpoint, isn't that a group? Outsiders, go ahead and attack outsiders. Do you still need a reason? My brother is still settling accounts. If you help him, you are not afraid of farmers and snakes.

If I were an alien beast, I would not be seen by others when I was weak. When I was strong, humans would have become extinct. For alien beasts, they do not need humans.

Ahem, brothers of the Alien Beast Style, the atmosphere at the starting point is like this. Shark Man may be banned, but the author may really be a novice. The protagonist is indeed a bit licky, and his behavior is relatively normal, but this mentality. . . . . . . The author may still not understand that the Alien Beasts stream in Qidian is supported by a few enthusiasts. I hope the author can figure it out.

By the way, I'm thinking about how the author should write about the later period. In your modern society, the front is fine and you can write about natural combat, but the level in the back is high. How to solve it? Should you follow the old routine of spiritual energy recovery, or use infinite map transfer, or mutation, right? The first one attracts the most people when it comes to firearms and cannons that stand up to human beings. The second one is that you didn't do any foreshadowing. It's too abrupt to insert it suddenly. The third one is even worse. The protagonists have been portrayed as law-abiding citizens before. You are in conflict with human beings. Shield, how to solve it, is An Xin being dissected and studied, it would be okay if the protagonist is an ordinary crocodile, write about the life flow, and bring some plots about living in harmony with humans, which is pretty good, but you are a crocodile with force, and also add some, ordinary people have to be controlled by the state if they have force value. When an animal that is not a human has mastered the force that can threaten human beings, just thinking about it, you know what humans will do. I really think that the current position of human beings as the hegemon of the earth is peaceful competition???

If you lick humans like this, why don't you turn yourself into a crocodile bag?

Can we stop emphasizing the human soul all the time? It's really annoying to keep mentioning it, just like other values ​​​​that keep repeating, it's really disgusting

Personally, I still very much support the author's way of writing, which can be ruthless but not indiscriminate. If you really write it according to the way those who say poison is written, it is nonsense. If you completely transform into a beast, it is nonsense. You are not a human soul traveling into a beast, but a beast that has gained human memory and wisdom.

It's really difficult to write about this kind of alien beasts. The conflict between humans and the protagonists, and the author doesn't know how to write about China. To get the best of both worlds, the protagonist can be reborn as a pet in an official's house, and finally become a beast that protects the country.

Are there any novels similar to Godzilla's style of alien beasts that remain aloof towards humans, neither licking them nor showing hostility?

The so-called exotic beasts, the mainstream are tigers, leopards, lions, crocodiles and the like. Of course, except for a few exotic animals, these exotic beasts all have similar characteristics, that is, they are top predators in nature, and after evolution, they have various powerful and domineering appearances. In short, they are cool. Even if they do not change their appearance and simply increase their size, they still look very handsome. This situation is actually related to the recent rise of monster culture. Human beings are very fond of beasts such as tigers and leopards. Why are there more and more cats and dogs as pets now? Isn't it to satisfy people's own preferences? If you can't keep one 🐯🐺, it's not bad to keep one 🐱🐶 to enjoy it. After all, the appearance of cats is very good. So the novel itself is an extension of this situation. What it wants is for the protagonist to appear holy in front of humans, causing passers-by to express various emotions such as wonder, fear, admiration, panic, and so on. The author can refer to the bear next door, and he handled it well. The protagonist, the silver-white giant bear, is not only big and handsome, but also satisfies the reader's desire for monsters. He also comes out to show his holiness in front of humans from time to time, and the angle is kept at a distance.

I saw in the introduction that it said "doesn't change shape", but it turns out that the protagonist always thinks from a human perspective. Even if he eats raw meat, he has a psychological barrier. If he becomes an alien beast, his taste and senses will still be the same as those of humans. It's better to write about metamorphosis, and I want to be a human being, but human beings like to say "people who are not of my race must have different minds." The article I've always wanted to read is about the identity of an alien beast with "human" wisdom.

The best way to write the alien beast style is to write it in a camp-like manner, not in a racial manner. This will make it easier to connect logically and avoid many problems. For those who are close to humans, you can write a neutral and good camp or something.

Don't write about strength and speed, just use body type. The data should either be very rigorous or be vague! All strength and speed can be removed, and the alien beast style only needs to express the body shape!

What a temptress! Another temptress!

The comment area is just those questions, so I didn't try it myself. I just have a small problem. If it's not Sha Dai Decisive, please remove that label, don't mislead others. I just watched Sha Dai come in, and found that the comment area is one-sided. If you don't know how to write, please refer to the Anaconda novel from many years ago. Although that novel got worse and worse in the later stages, the plot and characters in the early stages were pretty good.

I really like the novel about alien beasts, but every time I see so many people raping people in the comment section, I don't want to read it Not only is there a problem with my thinking, but I don't think I have much of an IQ I think about annihilating humans all day long, and the reason is that human beings have complex hearts and are afraid of being disadvantageous to the protagonist Then I thought again, if I am worried about the protagonist being killed, it is better to just destroy the world and leave only the protagonist Also Some people naively think that they will have no worries after destroying human beings, and they can just accept some alien beasts as their little brothers Don't think like that, they have all evolved. If the alien beasts are not intelligent, then they are not having little brothers, that is raising pets If they are intelligent, what is the difference between them and humans Humans at least still have thousands of years of benevolence, justice, propriety, wisdom and trust (although most of the time it is useless), but what do wild beasts have? You only have the hunting instinct, so writing novels is better. If this happens, a beast will dig your butt out no worse than a human, it will definitely be stronger. After all, beasts don't even have a face, and with wisdom, they have a city and no shame.

I remember a novel in which the protagonist was reborn as a snake. The protagonist evolved into Goldfinger with his bloodline. There was a plot in which the protagonist and a female snake (the classic plot of the Prodigy's Cave Charming Potion) did something between man and nature - the spring chapter. After that, the female snake stayed for a while and left three snake eggs before leaving (I forgot the specific time, but the eggs did belong to the protagonist and the female snake!). As a result, the protagonist evolved once with Goldfinger and did not admit that the eggs belonged to him and the female snake, but he became the successor! The reason is that the scales of the evolved protagonist are cyan (should be cyan), and the scales of the little snakes hatched from three snake eggs are brownish-yellow (should be this color). The PS protagonist had the same color as the three little snakes before evolving!

The big crocodile in Rampage Behemoth is lengthened by 150 meters. The nearly 300-meter-long crocodile will go directly to Los Angeles or New York. You will run away after a while, and then land in the magic city. After a while, it will become popular 😁

When writing this kind of article, I think we need to take into account a "community of intelligent organisms" like the "Community of a Shared Future for Mankind". The biggest gap between humans and other species is intelligence. Where there is the possibility of communication, there are opportunities for common development. All intelligent creatures work together to increase productivity, just like a Dyson sphere. By then, all intelligent creatures will no longer have to conflict for energy, and true world peace will come. You can imagine what we would do if we encountered an alliance of alien intelligent creatures. The protagonist can use powerful force as a guarantee to establish a "smart crocodile kingdom". I don't know if the intelligent crocodiles can have fertile offspring with the unintelligent crocodiles in the setting. It cannot be handled naturally. After all, they are two species, and humans also keep chimpanzees in check. If it can be done, the author will have to think about how to write and balance it. The author can even search for the key steps of making a nuclear bomb, and use "spiritual power" to replace the tools required for the key steps, so that the "Smart Crocodile Nation" can become a nuclear-armed country. Sophisticated crocodiles do not necessarily have to be crocodiles. They can absorb intelligent creatures from all other races. The core idea is that "all intelligent creatures are equal". Recruiting talents will force humans to recognize the status of the "Sophisticated Crocodile Nation". Only by oriented toward common prosperity can real peace be achieved among intelligent creatures.

What is the author's new vest? You're a vest madman!

Is this also the "I want a gourd" vest?

There is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, but the subject matter is too niche. There are people who like to read it, but there are too few. Such good writing power was wasted.

Damn it, this ended so unexpectedly

How can this book be cut so quickly?

If the author does not write from the perspective of the alien beasts, he will not be able to write a good alien beast novel. I remember reading a book called Reincarnation as a Snake. It was very well written. It was really about putting yourself into the snake.