Starting with Time Stop

The author is really not suitable for writing character interactions. The author is suitable for writing lone rangers.                                                                                                                   " This woman named Ye Wanting's ability to travel through time and space is also inexplicable.        ，， If time is compared to a "line", the protagonist's time-stop is a "point" without length. There is no logic in how this woman randomly ends up in the protagonist's time-stop in this infinite timeline. In contrast, it is impossible for Ye Wanting to know everything every time. It is impossible for the protagonist to meet Ye Wanting every time the time stops, and it is also impossible for the Ye Wanting every time he meets to be the Ye Wanting who has traveled through time and space many times. She is more likely to be the Ye Wanting who has traveled through time and space for the first, second, third, and nth time. There are also age changes mixed into this - Ye Wanting is not an immortal, and the Ye Wanting the protagonist meets is not very old, which further shortens the number of times Ye Wanting travels through time and space. She cannot know too many things, and she wants to crush the protagonist in knowledge. It is impossible. At most, she has experienced a lot of unusual things. It is impossible for the protagonist to be educated by Ye Wanting every time he meets Ye Wanting. It is also impossible for the protagonist to always be a stupid young man. Once the author writes too many such stupid young people, it will easily affect the perception. In short, "Time Stop 2" is not as straightforward as "Time Stop". The addition of Ye Wanting completely reduces the logic and readability of this book. I feel that the author did a very good job when writing the protagonist of the Lone Ranger. Once the interaction with other characters is added, it will stretch the crotch. (Except for non-human species) Oh, that's it, come on, author.

I am familiar with this movie, having watched dozens of movies. It's just that the male and female protagonists are wearing clothes and no clothes, and the girl is screaming in agony.

To put it simply, the author cannot control this good subject matter.

After reading more than ten or twenty chapters, the setting of this book is very attractive. Once written, it will definitely be a magical book. However, there are too many bugs in this setting, which are endless. It is extremely uncomfortable for people like me who like to talk about logic in reading. However, I recommend it to people who don't care about logic. As long as you don't pull your hips in the later stage, it is a good book.

This book has added some embarrassing plot points in order to win contracts and recommendations, but don't panic, now that the results are better, the real story and adventure are about to begin. I have been studying Time Stop for three years, and I will never let you down, rush!

The human king is a time-stopping immortal plus a time-jumping one. One day when time jumped again, I found that the protagonist was sitting on a golden toilet.

There are many small problems ahead, but they are not important. Food consumption, why can light still move? Is the air integrated? It prevents rotation if it does not contact asteroids, but it can be avoided if it contacts the earth. These are not important. But about 50-100 hairs fall out every day. This number should be quite a lot in ten years, and there will be various bugs. So the movement during the stop should be idealistic. After contact, the protagonist can move if he thinks he can move. I posted it in the chapter review, so I'd like to remind you again. It should be easy to change it now, but it will be troublesome later.

If I stop sometimes, I will directly sow seeds all over the world

It all stopped. If you just cut off the monster's head, wouldn't the world be peaceful? The author really complicates a simple thing.

I'm in a good mood for dreaming. The new chapters are of higher quality. Keep writing. Quality is the most important thing. Don't worry about those random comments.