Deities for All: My Race Editor

The writing is good, but the abyss enemy at the beginning makes people feel confused. How did a mere demigod infiltrate a school with so many powerful true gods. And this world of gods has been developing for so many years, and we know the power of the abyss, so there is no way to counter it? Then these big guys might as well just die.... And according to what you wrote, the abyss is the number one enemy. How come you haven't even obtained the most basic information about this world yet? In short, the writing is still readable, but the logic would be better if it were more logical. Of course, it is possible that the author has other foreshadowings that he has not written out, but this is my experience with the twenty chapters so far.

Let me just tell you my opinion. I don't like the author's delaying pace.                  This demon species can definitely be finished in 2 chapters, but it's been a week of writing now, right? Still continuing? Still in the hole? Are you still a trump card and I am a trump card? I'm asking the author, I'm not talking about entering the palace abyss, just make a copy of the lower realm. How many months do you plan to write 🤔🤔🤔

I hope it won't appear that Liu Yiyi is a victim and innocent, and he will help her in the future. He won't stay in his own world in the future, right? I really don't like this character.

The protagonist's parents must have left a legacy, right? There should not only be compensation from the Legion!

Chapter 1: Talking to myself in front of the courier, so stupid

Then use the compensation given by the school to create advanced races that adapt to the abyss or purify the abyss, such as the Kraken? Naga? Dark Elf? Demon? Or concentrate the abyssal atmosphere in a trench?

It's inexplicable that a novice can come back from a fight with a boss at the beginning?

Is this daily poison so blatant? Do you also recommend the completion of 190,000?

There is still something wrong with the eyes of the editor of Daodu. I would recommend a book that costs more than 100,000 to 200,000 yuan to finish. With this kind of working conditions, is the company about to become obsolete?

The Abyss Invasion was too slow.

I'll change the author's sentence! It gave me the idea to continue reading😰

It's gone now, it's a pity...

I commented on it yesterday, but it's gone today. Although the plot is a bit broken, the setting of Queshi is quite attractive. The author can study again and start writing again. If the plot is smoothed out, the results will definitely not be bad.

To be honest, I really didn't handle the part about the abyss well, but the kang is neither too big nor too small. If it is handled better later, it will be considered a full circle, but it is still in the palace. I hope the author will work hard in the future!

Fools deepen the abyss. Let us think carefully about what comes to mind. You heard me right, Dagon! As the famous ocean evil god in the abyss, aren't all the fish-men under him corrupted by the breath of the abyss? Or if we think about it more boldly, you can even steal his authority.

This book is similar to The Age of Global Gods

Almighty Vegetable God, also called God

Why do the family members like to write about fishmen? It doesn't mean anything, I just don't like fishmen.

In fact, the author's plug-in for pig's feet is quite interesting, just to see if he can write it. . . . . . The editor plug-in is still a bit interesting.

First, the author should write according to his own logic, and don't listen to the readers' opinions, otherwise it will definitely collapse. Second, don't touch the poisonous points that appeared in the previous global gods, especially the heavenly route. Work hard and collect it first. This is the first novel of less than 300,000 words that I have collected.

The bookshelf I added yesterday is finished today (￣へ￣)

The first part of the book was pretty good, but I don't know what to say later. It's only seventy episodes. There isn't much serious content in each episode, and the rest is just water, and there are forced dramas. It's so embarrassing. At first, I was looking forward to the update. Later, I found that I couldn't see anything after reading one episode of this book. There was so much nonsense that I had to jump through it. After two or three days, I had to wait for five or six episodes.

The name of the main god: God. Each race opens a trumpet god and lets these races fight! Let them be like the Three Kingdoms! Let them develop the attitude that they can be beaten by their own people, but not by outsiders! After every invasion from another world, there is a short truce period! In this way, the probability of heroes appearing is high, and the overall battle is stronger!

Come on, author, I hope you won't stop updating.

The setting of the book is quite interesting, but the plot is a bit dull. Two chapters a day is not enough to read. I guess I will have to read it for a few months. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Four updates have changed to three updates, and there is no update today. I'm complaining.