Immortality Begins with Casual Cultivation

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I'm not very good at writing book reviews. But the writing is pretty good and makes people want to read it.

The protagonist has learned a bunch of random spells, such as Malicious Detection, Qi Watching, Chiyang Swordsmanship, and Yuyang Fire Rain Technique. The key is to practice Qi for the third period. You are almost the same as a child of a small family, but you are a casual cultivator with bad skills, and you are still a four-spirited person. A magic weapon also comes with a small magical power, which is still a crappy magic weapon. The power system is in a mess. Logically speaking, at the third level of Qi training, you can only use a few fireball spells or fireball charms. At the 6th level of Qi training, you can use magic weapons, and at the 9th level of Qi training, you can use powerful spells. His intelligence is that of an average person. He has only traveled through time for a few years, and he has learned so many spells, and he is still doing well. I really don't know how to evaluate it

The book is really over-exhausted at the beginning. I know the author wants to describe the difficulties of casual cultivators, but the problem is, forget about the difficulties in cultivation, why do you write the immortal cultivator like a refugee? It is normal to be poor in cultivation materials, but you will not lack yellow and white things when cultivating immortals.

Emmmmm, I didn't read it when I saw Lingyue City. Let me talk about this book first. Although it is not to my taste, it is still a relatively good article about grain and grass. The plot is as bland as water. Although it is a casual cultivator in the early stage, it is inexplicably taken over by a foundation-building consummation girl with a background. Xiu is accepted as a disciple, and then he is given the inheritance of martial arts that directly refers to the golden elixir. There are also some inexplicable plots, such as Bai Xiaohan. The protagonist's survival to successfully build the foundation is all due to luck. Chance and other things were picked up by the protagonist for nothing. It is not what I thought a casual cultivator should be. I think casual cultivators strive for a chance to build a foundation, make friends, form a force, act as a gang of robbing cultivators, rob resources, survive hard, and finally build a foundation in their fifties, instead of building a foundation in their twenties and thirties like now. The golden finger of the protagonist in the early stage is not very useful at all. It is equivalent to the experience version of spiritual consciousness, because the foundation-building monk can carve jade slips, watch a memory repeatedly, and detect the situation of the ten battles in the radius. I mean that the golden finger of the protagonist is not that strong, but it can still build the foundation easier than the disciples of the sect. It is very unreasonable. The protagonist will participate in big and small events when he goes to a place, and then start picking up money. When I first saw that the protagonist was a Talisman Master, and then the female cultivator surnamed Huang was also a Talisman Master, I thought she was the heroine, or at least a supporting female character, but it turned out that she had no part in the role. Then I also thought that Bai Xiaohan was a heroine, an alchemist, talented, and went there to find such a good Taoist companion, but inexplicably she explored a cave and then the character disappeared. The last time I didn't understand was to accept two maids, one A mortal has the ability. A little girl with three spiritual roots can obviously be well cultivated, but a tool man comes inexplicably. The tools need to be oiled and maintained regularly. As a result, the protagonist has no idea of ​​nurturing her and allows her to grow wildly. In the end, she has a bad mentality and has no value. There is an old groove stuck in her throat. Finally, when she arrives in Lingyue City, there is only a mortal next to her. What is the use of mortals in this world? Even if the lifespan is not long enough, no matter how talented you are, it is difficult to defeat him. How arrogant are the immortal cultivators? Looking at mortals like pigs and dogs, who would obey the management of a mortal in this situation? Then the protagonist Ji Ji has been being harassed by the Ji Ji family before. This is a hatred that blocks his way. As a result, the protagonist didn't even think about dealing with it and just left. It was like he was targeted for no reason. Then he became rich and didn't say anything. Good guy.

I don't know what's going on, but when the male protagonist came to Helingzong, it was like he was a different person. In the early stage, he made money by making talismans, but in the later stage, he relied solely on cheating. Practice also changed from the original ascetic practice to sleeping with women.

Han Li, the protagonist of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", possesses the Heaven Palm Vase. With the heaven-defying assistance of the Heaven Palm Vase, Han Li surpasses everyone. The protagonists of the mortal stream should have a golden finger that is so powerful that it can change their fate just like Han Li had the Sky Palm Bottle.

Spinach, let me ask a few questions. First: Lu Zhong is too fast in the middle stage of foundation building. Second: Is it serious to pay 300~400 spirit stones per month for setting up the formation? Only 3,000 spirit stones in one year is less than what you earn during the Qi training period; third: Are there only three complete second-level spells of Feixing inheritance? It's still something that comes with the skill; fourth: learning a flying talisman can only be sold to those in the Qi training stage. Have you really considered this market? There has never been an introduction that you can use flying talismans during the Qi training period. When I was learning, I said that flying talismans are easy to sell and the money earned can be used until the later stage of foundation building. Now, just to make the protagonist a formation master, you have to set it up? Fifth: The main character 4 spiritual root cultivation speed is too fast. I started to find a master to teach the Seven Mysterious Arrow Avoidance Talisman for 2 years to the middle stage. In the middle stage, I learned the exorcism talisman in the later stage, and in the later stage, I learned the golden light talisman to build the foundation (it should be possible to copy other immortal cultivation skills from scratch). So as long as the sect pays the teaching fee and a little help, theoretically every sect disciple can build the foundation, right?

Alas, I feel that going to the spirit world is a bit too hasty. Shui Ni has never looked like Shui Ni, and Yu Feng'er is only in the middle stage of Nascent Soul. It lacks strength but occupies so much territory. It would be strange if nothing happens after the protagonist leaves.

And there is such a currency as talisman money, so I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

I don't see any advantages of the protagonist. Why can he build a foundation? The author wrote before that there has been only one Four Spiritual Root Builder in ten thousand years. There are countless resources better than the protagonist. How can the protagonist be able to build a foundation?

The feeling of this book is that the author didn't seem to write it carefully. I guess the author is a student. Many things are written very childishly. Sometimes the plot is confusing and the thinking is disorganized. The original concept and plot are quite satisfactory, but he didn't write it seriously. He probably just wanted to earn about 2,000 yuan a month in royalties and then it was ruined.

It's like casting a magic net, requiring you to recite incantations and perform hand seals. Is it possible for ordinary people to do such a fancy thing?

The plot is always missing, and some characters always get lost at some point.

What is said in the comment section is true. Loose cultivators are not refugees. It is easy for cultivators with a certain level of cultivation to obtain yellow and white things. They will not be able to afford mortal meat and live in a better house. The Four Spiritual Roots are a casual cultivator in their twenties. Breaking through the foundation building in their thirties is a bit inconsistent with the Four Spiritual Roots. It would be okay if a family vigorously cultivates them. The handling of the mortal concubines he accepted was average. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a little bit of the artistic conception of transformation to transform the protagonist's mood. Unfortunately, it was not very successful. Without the breath of mortal fireworks, refer to "Immortal Rebellion" for transformation. From the Nascent Soul stage to the time of transformation into a god, go to the mortal experience. A mortal's life experience of marrying a wife and having children, children growing up, old age, illness and death (suspended death), understanding the process of mortal life to achieve the sublimation and transformation of the soul, this is the transformation of the soul! The image of the mortal concubine described by the author is not profound enough, and the foreshadowing is not enough. She does not do anything of great significance or unforgettable to the protagonist's training career, so it does not have a big impact and feels dispensable. Enough foreshadowing, and then the female supporting role is written to death. The readers feel that this female supporting role is very good, but it is gone, and they feel uneasy. This means that the character creation is very successful.

What should I say about this book? There are many contradictions. For example, the theme is about casual cultivators, but the plot is about an invasion from another world, which doesn't match. Rogue cultivators, if they want to succeed in this world invaded by aliens, they need to be rescued. But the problem is that as a rogue cultivator, there is nothing. Until now, the skills are inconsistent. People have inheritance from the immortal world and have powerful ancestors. Shouldn't they be worried about whether they invade or not? This is quite contradictory. Another question is, looking up from Lianqi and looking down from Mahayana, the two lines need to be integrated and self-explanatory in order to reflect the author's literary talent.

I originally thought that this book was just perfect, but I didn't expect that the author later wrote his own way. It's really good. To be honest, after reading this book for free, although it is very good, it still has some shortcomings. It's just that the protagonist advances too quickly, and every advancement (before foundation building) doesn't feel like it's a matter of course. Everything else is very good, including the description of the Taoist couple (Yu Feng'er). Very good, what is a Taoist couple? In my opinion, it means helping each other, rather than unilateral contributions from either party. The mortal also dealt with it very well. He let go. Although he was reluctant to let go, he had no spiritual roots. In the end, it was a parallel line. There is also the sect, which is described very realistically. In a world where great power belongs to oneself, no matter how it evolves, the original purpose of the sect is definitely to gather people to serve oneself. After all, it is self-evident who to choose between immortality and inheritance. There is also life. This book is very well written, and the changes before and after forming a pill are very reasonable. In my opinion, the higher the cultivation level, the more stable life will be. Unless the general environment changes, or there is a lack of heavenly materials and earthly treasures to break through the realm, there will definitely be a small number of people who are beaten to death. The last thing is cultivation, which is absolutely very reasonable. Dual cultivation can improve your cultivation without any side effects. Why not use it? Both parties are willing to do it, just like the protagonist said, they are just tools. Why should we be afraid of using tools?

The spiritual power of the incantations and handprints is running. Is the magic so low? It's like a Taoist priest casting spells. Why not add a dancing master? I think at most there is a direction of spiritual power to cast, and the rest is superfluous.

You can read it, but I'm a little tired from reading it. It's hard for old bookworms to continue reading.

What is written next? Is the protagonist Teddy? He goes to Japan whenever he sees a girl.

Generally speaking, it is okay, above the level of food and grass, but I feel that the author writes very casually and is not very serious. Many places are inexplicable and do not explain it. For example, there is a Taoist sect inexplicably in the middle, and then Changchun Valley inexplicably resists the Taoist sect. It is inexplicable. The woman from the previous Qi training period inexplicably slept with the protagonist and then disappeared. There is also a female talisman master named Huang who has been forgotten in the world. It is said that some kind of golden number has entered the fairy world randomly, and I have a premonition of being poisoned. Don't feed poison to readers casually.

The protagonist's temperament is a bit cold, and he plots against others after being saved by others.

The writing style of Chapter 88 is very stiff. From the first chapter to now, there are many flaws. Can the author write seriously? Don't just use those few words to describe your expression, which will look dull and rigid. 😅

I really like both of Spinach's books, especially this one. The sense of reward gained from having nothing and hard work is very real. I hope it will sell well. The new book "Immortality?" Is promoted by Jiebaodi. I just want to show off", Wang Haihan🙏

Even if the family doesn't care, it's okay for someone to be a lax cultivator now.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I have to complain here The previous chapters are good, the combat power has not collapsed, and the differences between levels are obvious; Goldfinger is not abnormal in the early stage; it is difficult to obtain various abilities and professions, and the value is reasonably improved; most of the emotional lines are handled reasonably, and the mortal ones can also withdraw affection There are also disadvantages: it is difficult to obtain basic spells and basic professional abilities, and the talent requirements for making talismans and alchemy are reasonable, but the basic spells do not have cipher text, so they should be considered bad, and this It's unreasonable that it's so difficult to obtain; the biggest problem from the emotional line to the viewing part is that there are too many descriptions of lust, which makes me feel very thirsty; and the master is a bit far-fetched. It makes sense for the master to accept the apprentice because of his appearance, but he is also too good to the apprentice. I gave him the skills, and there will be more later He gave himself to himself and acted very hungry, which was a bit disgusting. As I said before, a strong person never lacks a partner. Finally, after more than 300 chapters, the protagonist's combat power was a bit overwhelming. The old Yuanying just played casually and couldn't stand it anymore.

The rhythm is tight and the story logic is complete. Overall, it's getting better and better. It's just that the daily update is too slow, at least two updates. It's really unsatisfactory to watch now.

I would like to recommend the new book "The Supreme Cultivation Family" by an old author. Thank you!

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

It looks very relaxed, casual, okay, okay