The Savior Hero Who Came from a Fairy Tale

I can't figure out the male protagonist's brain circuit. At the beginning, he actually wanted to get along with a god as an equal?

The writing is good and can be read. There are no big problems with the logic and the plot development is reasonable. The most important thing is the characters. You can focus on adding more descriptions of the characters.

Let me know what you think after reading Chapter 65. I think the story is quite good and the characters are also relatively three-dimensional. But the problem is that there are too many illustrative things. I don't know if they are illustrative or not. Anyway, they are just psychological descriptions and the like. There are too many of them. To promote the plot, I skipped all your explanatory stuff. I'm too lazy to read it anyway. If you change these, more people should watch it.

Ye Feng is not normal either. He might as well call him Lei Feng.

Change it to Ye Feng... This name is not very popular now...

Are you going to write about a fairy tale world later?

It's okay