The Cannon Fodder Master Became the Sect's True Powerhouse

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I feel this is a bit ridiculous. The children, barely a few years old, are all mature, steady, and shrewd, while the Golden Core and Nascent Soul cultivators are all childish, foolish, impulsive, and talkative. Is the author doing this on purpose, or is he just trying to be funny?

It's a bit wordy. Sometimes, overly detailed descriptions can feel verbose! For example, if you meet a female cultivator who is a rogue cultivator, describing her entire history as a rogue cultivator would be tedious! It's like eating a bowl of rice; you might describe how many grains of rice were used, how much water was used, how long it took, its appearance, its taste, and even the entire…

I was only allowed to read twenty chapters without any restrictions, which is quite impressive. Having read hundreds of novels, this is the first time I've seen one so verbose. It goes on and on about everything from different angles eight times, as if everything has been slowed down eighteen times. It's enough to make your head spin.

It's too wordy; the author's writing skills are lacking.

This novel is incredibly verbose! It ruins the reading experience! It repeats the same thing over and over again. Take taking on the second disciple, for example. It's mentioned before the journey, that the divination revealed a predestined master-disciple relationship, and then it's repeated twice more later, explaining this predestined relationship and all that inner monologue!

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May I ask again, since the female lead has reached the Golden Core stage, is she several hundred years old? In the male-oriented novels I've read, most Golden Core cultivators are several hundred years old, with geniuses around a hundred. I hope the female lead is calm, composed, and intelligent.

It's so wordy! I was initially very interested in the content, but after reading dozens of chapters, I just couldn't continue.

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