After Transmigrating Into a Book, She Became an Ancient Divine Sword

Originally, the heroine didn't fall in love with the villain, but now there is a Tiandao named Yang, and the two are jealous. Also, when they were in the demon realm, the girl who was a rabbit and a half-demon, just because she reported that the heroine was a human, the heroine wanted to beat her, so Qin Li killed her. She was just a cannon fodder. Really, cannon fodder is no good wherever there are male and female protagonists. If the heroine is cold, just be her cold sword. Don't fall in love, and don't arrange 123456 male supporting characters to disgust people. It's only chapter 200 now. Don't bring out a Neptune by then.

Isn't it a random label without cp?

The front looks pretty good. I couldn't stand it anymore in the middle. The writing feels messy. The heroine's design is weird. One moment, the heroine is like a holy mother who takes care of everything. The next moment, she is like a crazy person who kills a group of people with her hands. There are several supporting characters in the 1v1 cultivator, and the more she goes to the back, the worse she gets. I was able to finish this book only because I found the first part interesting. I spent money to unlock them all, and I didn't want to waste my money.

I hate the entanglement between the heroine and the supporting characters. What I want to watch is 1V1, but he didn't mark me. The biggest red flag is that the relationship is unclean. It doesn't matter if your plot is a little bit different. Your relationship must be clean, and you don't have to imitate those men and become a scumbag. I will be very annoyed. If the heroine becomes Aquaman in the later stage, who will compensate me for my little heart.

Why is there a no cp label? Isn't this a lie?

The back part is indeed a bit messy. The heroine feels like a holy mother and feels like she is murderous. The plot is very scattered and complicated. When I write about it, the heroine's design collapses. I feel that the author wants to create a cold and indifferent heroine who doesn't care about anything, but there are really many surprises in the back... The heroine can kill a lot of people when she saves the bride, and also when she escapes. . . But the heroine is really like a virgin sometimes. . . For example, she would bring along some burdens for no apparent reason, and she would save people, etc. It was very contradictory. Let's talk about the male protagonist. The male protagonist is awesome but has a dark side. He likes the female protagonist but is sensitive and has low self-esteem. I feel very anxious for them. Moreover, I think the male protagonist has the idea of ​​​​passing through the dark room. I am quite looking forward to it. After all, if it is written well, it is a major plot of the whole book, but if it is not written, I am confused when I look at it. Hey. Later, the heroine's daughter fell in love with Ming Yunyi... But Ming Yunyi liked the heroine? Although Ming Yunyi died in the end, the heroine's daughter was imprisoned by that cloud, which made me a little confused and a bit bloody. . . My favorite is the last episode. Xiaobaishu and Mermaid like each other. It feels so sweet. Oh, by the way, I feel that there are not many perfect endings in this book. I feel that the heroine and Xiao Baishu, Mu Qing and that great emperor are not clearly explained. I don't know if Mu Qing will be with that great emperor later. It feels like a very good plot. Both Mu Qing and the heroine have a black jade bracelet and it is not clear (what is the name of Qing, I guess, I didn't remember the name in the book). Many male supporting characters like the female characters. The main character then lives a lonely life... And the little mermaid falls in love with Fox Er... Which is outrageous. Fox Er doesn't treat the little mermaid as a substitute but still likes her. It feels like a lot of pitfalls have been buried. Why the system came to the heroine is not explained clearly. Why the original male protagonist became a fox is not explained clearly. How the original male protagonist and Ye Shi are paired up is not explained clearly (and how Luo Shi found out that the original male protagonist is a broken sleeve is not explained clearly. (Chu) Anyway, there are still a lot of pitfalls, but I can't remember them. In fact, the writing in the front of this book is really good. The author has a good sense of the provocation, and it looks very nice. To sum up, the author's writing is good, with ideas and plots, but the writing is not good, that is, he failed to successfully create the image. There are too many plot ideas and not enough writing to show it. It is very messy. There are many characters and the heroine is very complicated. As soon as I came out, I even received the thing certified by the master and didn't go back. Everything changed. (Actually, I felt very uncomfortable when I saw that the female protagonist had so many infatuated male partners and the male protagonist was always jealous. Although it was 1v1 in the end, it was still uncomfortable.) Didn't the female protagonist want to go to the earth to see her family? Take it to the next level! 🌹

I feel like the author's writing style needs to be improved a bit, and I can't stand it anymore just looking at it. . Abandoned. Well

I didn't like it within the first few chapters. I just don't understand. Just go online when your system is online. You have to go online when the heroine leaves. The heroine didn't like the threat and left, so the system happened to be online to save the villain. What about the heroine? The heroine is an ancient divine sword. A woman said she was not threatened, left, and came back shamelessly. No matter how you look at it, it feels cheap. If your system needs to go online, you should go online right from the beginning. You have to be stuck at that point to go online. I felt bad for a moment after watching it. Don't like it, hate it.

I liked it very much before, but from now on, I don't like the male and female protagonists anymore. I really don't understand what they think. It's a bit confusing.

Mr. Shijiu, please update soon. It's so beautiful.