Promise from the Borderlands

Are you a fan of the Borderlands game?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Enmmm looked at the beginning, and the question... First of all, the first chapter, the plot is quiet, the scene description and the number of characters are a bit too much. The online article recommends that there should not be more than two characters in the first chapter except the protagonist and Goldfinger... Because the first chapter is the beginning, there is no need to be so hasty. The second issue is the protagonist Goldfinger and his status... The description of Goldfinger is not very specific and powerful, and cannot meet the readers' senses. The main plot line is too quiet, there is no small climax in the first stage, and most of them are descriptions of scenes. The Japanese fantasy style that suits the domestic market is the one about Reincarnated Assassin... It is recommended not to imitate the rest. (This is purely a suggestion, you can ignore it if you feel it is wrong)