Entering the World of One Person with Fluttering Fruits

In fact, the author's way of writing means that he doesn't write original fan fiction for Goldfinger from the beginning. Instead, he relies on the advantage of the plot to make things happen. The main thing is to highlight a careful thought. When you give plug-ins, you have to write them out, and you keep them and want to make things happen. If you don't get up, you can't get down.

Haha

The idea is very good. I was born in Jiajia Village with fluttering fruits and domineering spirit. It not only fits the world view of one person but also does not violate the harmony even if it is cheating. However, your writing style is quite poor. At the beginning, he said that he didn't want to attract attention because he couldn't cultivate Qi and protect the Piao Piao Fruit. However, his parents immediately found out about his use of Haki. Fortunately, Haki was covered up, and then his parents knew that the protagonist didn't want to attract attention and told the village chief. However, it is still acceptable up to this point. After all, he is his own family. Chapters 5 to 8 are pure nonsense! In front of these outsiders like Nadu Tong, he seemed to have forgotten his special ability and exposed the ability of Piaopiao Fruit. What is the foreshadowing of the start? What about settings? He completely forgot about it in an instant, and then told the clan elder about Zhang Huaiyi, not wanting him to die, but how the protagonist knew it was completely unclear. In the end, the clan elder trusted the protagonist and didn't go into details. Author, please revise it, your subject matter and ideas are really good, don't waste it!

Speaking of which, the protagonist has never developed the Piaopiao Fruit. He basically uses swordsmanship and domineering, and the fruit is basically reduced to a background.

To be honest, doesn't Piaopiao Fruit have the physical strength to be invincible by one person? What kind of sword do you want to play? I will drop an island for you. What kind of sword do you want to play?

The meteorite is too poisonous. This is the Piao Piao Fruit, not the Gravity Fruit.

The Piao Piao Fruit controls all inanimate objects and should also be able to control oxygen in the air.

Well, the author is actually not that bad. I have read more than 190 chapters. The first part is indeed a bit poisonous, but I feel that the author should be deliberately poisonous. It is just that the protagonist was played a bit miserably in the previous part, but after being beaten, the protagonist finally understood the gap between his and other people's IQ. The more this book is written, the better the author's condition. , There are basically no poisonous points in the back, you can plant some grass. Let me declare in advance that I am a free prostitute. Apart from typing words to help the author declare it, I will not put much effort into it. If you are obedient, just skip to the back and read it. It feels good and then you feel that the plot is incoherent and then move forward. Anyway, free chapter 😅

The author has always struggled with his writing style, but in my opinion this is not a problem with his writing style at all.

As for the Piao Piao Fruit, let alone awakening, even if it can only float a basic island in a village and smash it during battle, it will be useless even if the Heavenly Master comes...

(ᄑ_ᄑ) In fact, the problem is not big, it's just that it's too little refreshing, boring to look at, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

The flowers have faded

After about 200 chapters, I felt that the author was being rude, but later I found out that they were all free chapters. Hey! I really have the confidence to speak rudely. As for the book, if there is a shortage of books, you can read it. The author is using love to generate electricity. He is tough.

You always use Japanese comics to beat Chinese comics, which is really a good official authority.

If according to the alien circle, the one who can summon meteorites must be my great summoner Liu Xiu.

This launch was too sudden. . .

The Piaopiao fruit can float an island just by touching it. This is killing a chicken with a knife.

The January period has arrived, but it's a pity that people haven't come back yet

How did the author exam go? There has been no news

I feel like the role of domineering in One Piece was not written.

The three-year period has expired. Are you dead?