Death: I Use a DNF Clone to Be the Boss Behind the Scenes

I would like to make some suggestions. It is best not to use code names for characters. The code names should only be called Crimson. You have to remember both the name and the code name. It is okay if there are fewer characters now, but it will definitely be confusing if there are too many. There are many characters in the second DNF, and many of them have background stories and charming personalities. I hope the author can choose carefully and not have too many and too many characters. Those who have played the game can tell them clearly. But if the characters printed in the minds of readers who have never played the game are too many and too complex, it will easily become confusing. After all, it is difficult to write a group drama and perfect their character settings😜

Ah, since it was put on the shelves, the author's update time is always early in the morning (ಥ_ಥ). I can't sleep without seeing the plot every day, which makes me stay up late every day. You, the author, are committing a heinous crime☄ฺ(◣д◢)☄ฺ

I read it from other places, I won't say where. After reading this book, I think the evaluation and suggestion are those who have played DNF, right? It's okay to play it before, it's okay to play it now. In short, you need to understand the glory of DNF in the past. When you read this book again, it's best to play it for one or two nights before you realize the charm of this book. After all, this is It is a fanfic, and the title is also written, Death and DNF, the main body is still Dnf, the world view is Death, and the details are actually quite good. For the Death part, you can actually read other commentators or up owners to understand the plot or combat power inside. I can say it is Cloud Death, and I have only read a few articles about that combat power before. I also watched a few episodes when I was a kid, and then I took a look at the story collection. The fanfic of this book is a good combination. At least it doesn't highlight the dnf. I am very strong. It is a combination of death and dungeons. I am very strong. I didn't give the protagonist too many golden fingers at the beginning. This is a second creation by a fan behind the scenes, so the requirements are not so high, and it is written by dnf quite well. Some of them are good if you look at them, and it is really enjoyable to watch. At least it did not make me feel that the fighting power collapsed too quickly. When this book was finished, Bird Back was not even published. Before Bird Back, the thousand-year bloody battle of the God of Death was completed after a month or two.

The First Apostle Kahn! !

1/ 2/ 3/， 4/，low

The author's idea is great. This book is also a rare combination of the world view of Death and DNF. Unfortunately, it is limited to Death. I feel that it can be combined with DNF and comprehensive comics. It would also be interesting to drop different apostles into various worlds. In addition, I hope the author can strengthen the literary drama and daily life, and show the differences caused by the apostles, instead of being like this book where major events are almost non-stop, leaving people with a breathless feeling.

There are too many clones and it looks very messy. It is difficult for readers to assume the perspective of several protagonists, and each avatar has its own name, which undoubtedly distracts readers' attention. It even makes it difficult for readers to tell the name of the protagonist. So might as well just have one body enhancement.

This is the best book among all the behind-the-scenes videos I have read. Maybe it's because I've just caught the airwaves. I haven't read Death God, and I've played DNF for a while and didn't understand the plot, but it didn't affect my viewing at all 😁 The most touching part is the Great Wisdom chapter. Come on, author.

After Ghost Swordsman and Gun Master, I think this is a very good DNF fanfic, and I also like Death fanfics, which I really think are good. Does anyone have any similar recommendations?

In fact, among the 13 apostles, apart from Kahn, Prey is the king of the demon world and the only one who is the king of the sky of the demon world. The other 11 were just like that, Bakar was punched away by Kahn, Fourth Uncle couldn't even hurt Kahn, Ozma was just a parallel import, I felt that Sirocco could beat two of these weaklings in his prime. The gap between high-level apostles and ordinary apostles is really big. DNF now has several great gods in the plot, and I feel that the B level is not low, including Carlos, the god of wisdom, Nimmel, Lion Head, the main god of the church, Reminios, and the clone of Dimension's wife Naia.

The world of Death should not be able to surpass the Spirit King. He does not want anyone to be able to sneak attack on him, and it cannot be divided. Even those who get a piece of fingernail can become a strong person.

After the main movie of Bleach started, it was too boring. The plot of the main movie was exactly the same, but a few opponents were changed. The ending and development were almost copied from the original text. It was too unoriginal and boring.

It's pretty good. At least the author is really serious about making up certain settings. Also, the content in DNF can be combined with personal feelings. From a personal perspective...

It's a shame that all the professions are integrated into avatars. If the main body was strengthened, more people would probably see it.

It is not necessary for Alice to introduce new apostles. You can also make something like a puppet Giselle. The old turtle that we have beaten all the way to level 110 from Ghent can be used to push Bakar. The plots of apostles such as Anton are good. There is also a person like Barn, who is not a good person for sneak attacks on Luke.

The author's book is really awkward and the writing is terrible, but I immediately praised this one. Compared with my previous books and compared with other books, the writing is definitely top-notch, and I haven't stepped on any bad points.

It's too short and not enough to read. I haven't read many good books recently, and suddenly I saw this good book that suited my taste. I read it in one sitting in two days. I couldn't stand it at all. It is countless times better than other clone behind-the-scenes stories. It is indeed a rare good book, whether it is for fans of the God of Death or fans of poisonous milk powder. The intensity control is also very good, every detail is well-founded, and the description of Aizen and the layout of the clones are particularly well described. Great book, I don't know how long it's been since I've seen a book like this that appeals to me.

There are already ghost swords, so will there be ghost hands in the future? But if this is the God of Death, it must be localized. For example, "Hollow Hand" and then "Curse of Genichi"? 😏

About updates Brother, it's not that I don't update, but it's because during the new book period, it's not good for me to update too many before pushing it. We are now testing the waters for recommendation. If you can advance, you will be selected as a new book, and if you advance further, you will be strongly recommended. If it can be recommended, I will naturally update as many as possible... And because two friends donated 100 yuan, I will add two more updates, but these two updates will be put on the shelves... So, please read it🥰🥰

When using the dnf ghost sword system to defeat the Shinigami Zanpakutō system, you don't just have to fight casually with your eyes closed, you can win by rolling your face⌨️! Of course, if it really follows the setting of the Bleach manga, the swastika with a temperature of tens of millions of degrees can destroy the virtual world, the rule-like Soul Sword system, and the dnf external logistics system that is easy to lose without equipment, can be played by Death at will!

Judging from my thoughts as I read on, Unohana is actually the character least suitable to change her destiny and give her more roles. It can be seen that the author likes the character of Unohana very much and wants to give her more roles. But, how can I put it, the more plots and scenes of Uzuki Flower are written in it, the more it feels like a "passer-by plot tool with the name of an original character". It seems that the author wanted to show the "Kenpachi", "Great Evil", "Fighting Madman" and "Fighting Instinct" side of Unohana Yasenryu, so he wanted to draw Unohana to Onagazaragi, so he added the "Sword of Instinct"... Various setting plots. But I feel like I can't grasp it. It seems that this kind of character design is not the direction of Unohana, so I have to hold back on speaking and doing things. In the end, because I couldn't grasp Uzuka's speaking and acting personality at all, it resulted in a sense of stiffness and dissonance of "forcibly setting up an ordinary passerby female character who has no clear personality." Actually, this is not the author's problem. Because the character Unohana was originally described by Kubo in the manga, there was a lot of blank space, and there was very little psychological activity. Highlight the mystery. For a long time, everyone's only impressions of him were that he was "mysterious, secretive, sinister", "possibly a sweeping monk", "gentle and courteous on the surface" and "contrastive". It was not until the bloody battle that he ate a big melon from the past and learned more about Maozhihua. The bloody battle chapter is also the place where the psychological activities of Maozhihua are the most contained. However, the result did not make the character easier to describe. On the contrary, it increased the complexity of the character and made it harder to grasp the edges and corners. For example, before the bloody battle chapter came out, it was relatively easy to write Uzuki Flower like Uzuki Flower, as long as you grasp the characteristics of "gentleness and courtesy", "contrast and sinister", "unfathomable" and "mysterious" like Uzuki Flower. However, after the bloody battle came out, things were different. Many questions came up at once, such as "Is Unohana's personality the same before and after sealing the sword?" "What was the character of Unohana during the Yachi-ryu period? Was it like Zaraki or more similar to now?" "Would Unohana during the Yachi-ryu period be more carefree? Or was she a sinister and cold-hearted arrogant swordsman at that time, or was she like a swordsman fighting to the death? Irako had the same feeling of a smiling and dangerous beast. "Was Unohana more proud at that time? But still following Yamamoto, does that mean that the arrogance of this kind of swordsman is also limited?" "Is Unohana at that time more like a genius and proud female swordsman, or is she closer to a more restrained master? These are the things we know? I don't know. Because there are too many blank methods in describing Unohana, everyone has their own imagination, so except for Kubo, it is very easy for others to write about Unohana. For example, I understand that Unohana and Rukongai are two types of Kenpachi who have relied on instinct to fight since childhood. It can be said that it is the way of fighting and growth of the beast. He does not care about anything, as long as the instinct of fighting is enough, he has only learned the swordsmanship with two hands. But Unohana is proficient in all styles of swordsmanship, and he is the best in the swordsmanship class. A figure of genius swordsman. Even in the era of fighting madness, Unohana is not a pure fighting beast like Kenpachi. She also has some pride in fighting. This is why Unohana finally learned to fight like Kenpachi. He is the type who values the inheritance of his reputation as the strongest swordsman in Kenpachi and has the pride of a warrior tradition. These are just my understandings, but I believe that if I write a book based on this logic and write about Unohana, some people will feel that it is not the Unohana that they imagined. This is why Unohana is not suitable for description and drama. The reason. If it is a passer-by character like Mr. Qianshan, there is actually no need to think so much. Because everyone has no impression of him. But because Unohana is the kind of character that everyone has an impression of, the author only arranges a few scenes, and it is still based on the description of the character's personality, past behavior, and speaking style. Leaving a lot of blank space for your own imagination can lead to problems like this, which means the reading is very uninteresting. So I suggest you don't change the ending and experience of Maozhihua. In that case, you will only make Maozhihua a passerby with the name of Maozhihua, and don't add too much drama to her.

Those Quincy holy texts in Thousand Years of Bloody Battle are just bugs if you think about it. Yuha's four personal guards, V's imagination, Hasward's text B, just looking at the abilities, most anime are just all kinds of random killings. It's a pity that the essence of the Bleach world view is the battle of spiritual pressure. No matter how awesome your ability is and you don't have enough spiritual pressure, you still can't do it 🥱

Have you ever thought about doing DNF in the world of Bone King? 🤩

I like the behind-the-scenes flow and the vest flow, I particularly like it, but I don't know how the author's writing is. Also, I feel that the world view in the world of Bleach is very small, and the world of Bleach feels like a small secret realm. At least there is a starry sky in the real world. If the protagonist's clone is a big boss like Devil May Cry, the world of Bleach is not fun at all. The protagonist in the later stage is better To be able to create the ability to train Hollows into an army, you must also have control methods, otherwise Hollows have no wisdom, and then let the clones lead the Hollow army to attack other worlds, and then whether it is to discover faith, make yourself a god of faith, open up the kingdom of God, or absorb the power of the world to evolve yourself, otherwise it will be like that when the world of Death reaches its peak,

After reading many so-called fanfics, I feel like "I can write what I write, even better than what you write." This book gives me the feeling "I can't write what I write. This author does have something."

The plot of this book is very good, and the reading experience is also very good, but it feels that it deviates from the God of Death. I think it is the God of Death that limits the performance of this book. Judging from this plot, I think the author should set a world view by himself, so that there will be more room for development.

The popularity index is very low, although the writing is quite good.

When I read the introduction, I thought that the plot would be about 100 chapters at most, but when I looked through the table of contents, I discovered that the book is halfway through. Kurosaki Ichigo has just been born.

All I can say is that it's the best Death fanfic I've ever seen, and it made me interested in DNF.

With the current version of dnf, it is no longer necessary to rely on the Spirit King, and the apostle can be on the same level as the Spirit King. It is a pity that this author has stopped writing it. The starting point of dnf is this one. I think it's good.