Building Wonders, Starting at a Space Station

If you're going to create a spectacle, then do it properly. Why add plot points that are designed to filter out the reader?

I'd be awesome. Making a male cat with intelligence bathe with his female—that's awesome! That's incredibly awesome.

New author, new book, welcome everyone to check it out. The author is still a newbie, so feel free to offer any suggestions, and I will try my best to listen! This book is about a post-apocalyptic space world, and I will do my best to finish the story, so don't worry! (Even though my last book was a complete flop, I still managed to write 1.2 Million words.)

Hmm, the technology is either not dark enough or overly so (the warp). The plot is neither farming nor combat, neither romance nor anything like that... They might as well have just given us a romance system and made it headed straight for love. The wonders could have just become proposal gifts; there's nothing really to highlight.

Solo space survival is fine, but with the addition of supporting characters, the scenes are really hard to watch. The brawl between Earth's thugs continues in the boundless starry sky.

The female lead's storyline is so melodramatic! For farming/space/spatial novels, why all the monster-hunting and leveling up?

The background is quite funny. Why would someone smuggle themselves into a country? Most smugglers are people who have committed crimes locally, or those who can't afford to live in their current location. Even if spaceships are widespread, will they be as widespread as airplanes? I haven't seen many people smuggling themselves in on airplanes.

What's the fun in a base-building, farming-style strategy? It's about accumulating resources and slowly building your strength, developing your character cautiously, and mass-producing troops in the late game, rather than fighting alone in the early stages.

I don't know why I can't post it in the chapter... Image source: Homeworld 2 MOD Fialy Empire.

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