Seeds of Fire in a Strange Realm: Survival in the Lucky Neighborhood

After reading Chapter 15, I understood that the author wanted to write about the mentality of an ordinary person, but the writing was a bit too detailed. I can't say that your word count is bad, but it's too detailed. I've reached chapter 15 and there's not even a climax. It's not good for it to be too ordinary. Retired...

These 68 chapters are all the first day, and the first day is not over yet. Cow, cow. Other books have 1,000 chapters, but you only have enough for the protagonist to survive for 10 days?

To put it simply, it's not enough fun. I first chose the stars and got the Luban technique. Then, I didn't feel any enhancement, especially the part where I encountered the bear. It was very frustrating. I felt like I was just trying to save my life by being clever. But there are too many such ordinary people in their lives. They have no characteristics or strengths, and they feel too bland. The plot is also too... Emm, mediocre? At present, the overall feeling is that it is tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to discard.

The hamster player expressed his doubts about whether he could pick up the exploded items.

It's 180 fucking chapters. Not even a fucking month has passed in the world of the novel. Are you planning to write a novel like Conan for 15 years, but only one year has passed in the world of the novel? 🤭🤭🤭🤭

The description of the battle is too overwhelming, it feels like grinding a 60 million boss with 200 damage.

Write! His grandma! Why not write! Don't write it, right? ! If you don't write it, I won't be able to read it if you don't write it! Your tickets and coins are gone! Ah ha ha ha ha, my mission is completed!

The summary of this book is that dogs fight against human power👣

It's quite beautiful, but there are too few, author gkd

This book is very well written. It is considered a good book that combines weirdness with monster fighting and upgrading. However, I personally feel that some of the recent chapters are a bit loopy. I feel that the pig's feet are completely removed from the novice area with the help of the bear. Then I encounter an apple with a high probability of death. I don't know what the "?" The bear goes on an adventure. After all, the protagonist's own strength is too weak now. If something goes wrong with the bear, he will give up his martial arts. Later, he eats an apple and upgrades to fight monsters to prove that this decision is useful. In the plot after the bear upgrades, normally the pig's feet sees that the bear's attributes have overwhelmed the opponent, but takes the bear to get temporary buffs. Normally, this is not considered under normal logic, and then the monsters suddenly explode to prove that it is right to get the buffs. From these two things, it can be seen that the story is indeed less coherent. Many events that occur have little to do with the previous ones. It feels like the protagonist is arranged to make a decision first, and then some plot is imposed to show that the decision is right.