Qingyuanxian Road

How should I put it? It is obviously a family, but the protagonist took the family's spiritual peaches and cultivated the best spiritual peaches, causing hundreds of peach trees to fail to bear fruit for a year or two. Then he bought the spiritual peaches in exchange for money, and then sold the second-level top-level kung fu to other sects. Although the author has explained before, it is said that it is given to the family. It is unclear where it comes from, and it may not get the benefits it deserves. It will be handed over after the foundation is established.

What do we look at in family history? What we look at is the family affection, the blood of the family, the warmth of the family, and the unity of the family The author writes family stories without understanding, and describes the protagonist as selfish and like a white-eyed wolf. It is not at all like a family monk who is like a casual cultivator, so it is not good for you to write about casual cultivators. If you have a book of cultivation and don't hand it over to the family, what's the use of others raising you? Isn't this some powerful magical power? It can lead to the destruction of the family. I haven't read much, but according to the book review, you sell the skills to others and don't give them to your own family. You are a pure white-eyed wolf Then you sell the top-quality peaches cultivated by the family. This tree cannot bear fruit for hundreds of years The protagonist is also afraid of society. If there is no social interaction, then what kind of family do you write about? You write about casual cultivation. Isn't it delicious?

I feel that the character of the protagonist is better alone. If you don't write a family story, I might order it all 😅 From the beginning of Chiyang Pantao, I felt that something was wrong. Until I returned to the family, the family was gathering, so you ran away to practice. I knew I should run away. I attended the company's annual meeting, so you ran back halfway. You are also a human being. If you don't want to build a good relationship, you can go alone. Don't write about a family clan.

It's better to write about the sect. There's no point in running a family.

I can't stand watching it anymore. Wherever you sell peaches🍑, you should know that what the system provides is different from this world. Curious items to live in. He also sold his exercises. It's clear you have a problem. It also has an effect on transforming gods! Then you will die. Collect the soul directly. .

The protagonist is too double-standard. If he doesn't get married, how can he have a family? If the protagonist's parents don't get married, how can he be a protagonist? How can he cultivate immortality and pursue immortality in a middle plane? How can he have an iron heart? If he is so afraid of death, why doesn't the protagonist stay in his mother's womb to practice for thousands of years and win at the starting line?

Generally speaking, I don't see the concept of family cultivating immortality. I don't know if it's the author's problem or something else. The protagonist is not like a family cultivator at all. Instead, he has a selfish and ignorant mentality of a casual cultivator. He has no family concept at all. There is no problem in saying that he is a casual cultivator.

The setting of being easily possessed is also addictive. The protagonist's own qualifications are not good, and the skills are not very high. The fear of being possessed will hinder the progress of cultivation. There is indeed a reason why this book is not popular. There are too few interesting points, the pace is not tight, and the updates are slow!

The setting of this book is okay, but the data is not good with this daily update?

This division into two is not worthy of the name. I originally thought it was the establishment of a sect, with the direct line being merged into a family, and the branch lines being merged into the sect's disciples. The result is this, and a new Yunzhou Li family must be re-established. At least one elder will be the family, so that the initial talents will be enough. As a result, the protagonist becomes the leader of the clan for a period of Qi training. Apart from his wife and those children who have no sense of existence, it is almost as if the protagonist has joined other sects alone. If you divide it into two, the protagonist will be separated.

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I just said it was okay, but the latest chapter was too awkward to read. The bloody golden elixir hits the nine bridges. I'll ask the author! Why doesn't such a powerful Jindan Patriarch find a way to have a baby for himself? Don't talk nonsense about protecting the family, having a baby is the best protection. Your previous article is of no use at all, so just popping up like this, doesn't it seem very abrupt? Is this the level of such a powerful golden elixir?

From the reviews of several book friends, it is indeed quite good, but the number of words is indeed small, and it is still a seed. It is really not fun to read, and I am afraid that I will lose it if I keep it, so I contributed a few yuan. The student party really has no money, so I wanted to encourage the author. I feel that the word count for fairy tales and fantasy is about the number of words. The more they are, the more interesting they become. I hope the author will stick to it and become a part-time hobbyist. All I can do is recommend books to book friends.

Isn't it too easy for the protagonist to buy and sell across thousands of miles? Based on the description in the book, you can easily travel thousands of miles and start this business if you just go to the late stage of Qi training and save a sum of money to buy a flying boat. Not to mention other difficulties, how did the protagonist find the way when he went there for the first time? Are there signs on the road? Or do you have Gaode map navigation? 🤭 Or is there a magic weapon similar to the permanent pointer in One Piece?

If you have stayed in a sect for a long time and you are afraid of being divided among your clan members, then why bother to join the sect? It will be difficult to become independent after you enter the sect.

Selling peaches is a bit frivolous, but it's not a big problem. After separating from his wife, he fell into a routine. Although the next plot is barely explainable, it really does not conform to normal understanding. The protagonist has only reached the seventh level of Qi refining, so he takes on this important task. It's like a handsome boy who is in the second grade of junior high school in Guangzhou. He suddenly gets resources from his family and goes to Beijing to establish a branch. This is too out of the ordinary.

War, wedding, family separation, and joining a sect, can this be a plot trend that can be compressed into just a few chapters? Many authors do not lack writing skills or creativity, but they lack a sense of rhythm. Their writing is very exciting and confusing.

It's a very strong book with a great setting. This space that brings people together is wonderful. It's a pity that we are not a big boss. If we were a big boss, we would have to give a reward of 100 million alliances.

There are not many books that I can say well, and this is one of them. The author maintains the style and it will definitely become popular.

Brother, the writing is good. It is highly recommended by Longkong Forum. I came over to take a look. It should be regarded as the best mortal flow written recently. It is just that the number of words is a little short.

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