The Beginning Started with a Golden Breeze and Drizzle, the Poster Shocked the World with One Strike.

What is the protagonist's pursuit when he comes to this world! Treasures. Martial arts. Immortality. Unification of the world. Confidante. Return home (there must always be a goal). There can be fewer summoned characters, and the differences in various personalities can be written in more detail. The summoned characters can be reflected in the way they expand their power. They can be domineering, insidious, smiling, righteous, and clear between right and wrong (thugs with unfit personalities can be arranged). Various characters from the opposing forces will appear, and what countermeasures should be arranged to hinder the development of the protagonist's power. Summon characters to develop their forces due to lack of manpower, defeat, death, dilemma, and the emergence of new realms. The protagonist can have some minor defeats and the death of unimportant characters. There is no need to write down every character in detail. Unimportant characters in the main plot can be written to death, and don't disappear inexplicably. I feel like the opposing forces are all like pigs. Even though Calabash Boy saved Grandpa, so many forces have failed and they haven't learned their lessons yet.

Enjoyable novels, updates are too slow! Not suitable for chasing! More updates will be rewarded!

What the hell is the difference between this and not watching?

I'm just curious to ask why working with Emperor Zhou is all about kneeling and licking? There are humans on one side and beasts on the other. What are the problems with cooperation? The protagonist and Emperor Zhou both aim at the Tianmen, and there is no real conflict of interest between the two parties. Besides, I really didn't see the protagonist getting along with Emperor Zhou grovelingly. Just because the protagonist didn't kill everyone, could he be the emperor himself or call a summoned character to be the emperor? Just licking the dog? I'm just curious. Some of you said in the comments that the protagonist is like a super licking dog, but I didn't feel anything after watching it a few times. The heroine appeared at the beginning of the chapter, and she has been a character for a long time. There is no problem talking to Emperor Zhou, but in the eyes of these people, why does she become a licking dog? I just asked out of curiosity, nothing else.

Alas, write less about big scenes. It feels like you can't control it. The first copy can be over. And don't just punch at every turn. There is no force at all.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

You can still watch it, but I definitely won't give you a monthly pass.

Chapter 3: Just check the box and you will know what it is

The author has been subscribing to this book until now and has given me a monthly pass. There are a few words that I really don't want to say. The biggest problem is that there is no sense of substitution. If I were the protagonist, I would definitely run Jinfeng Xiaoyu Tower behind the scenes to grab resources, grab martial arts secrets and open the golden finger, and keep trying to summon again! But I don't understand the pig's trotters returning to the Shanhe Gate at all. The people you summon can assassinate the great elder. When you return to the Shanhe Gate, you just open an extra map, and it's unreasonable to be alone. Even if you have a card, what about being poisoned? It is even more unreasonable to hold a Qinglong Club for no reason. According to your setting, the troubled times will just be the Golden Wind and Dry Rain Tower! To put it bluntly, it's like a billionaire's golden finger is to get good reviews, so you have to deliver food yourself to get good reviews. Now that you're a billionaire, you can just open a few stores and do it yourself, or hire someone to deliver food to get good reviews, and ride a bicycle to deliver it on the street? What should I do if I am hit by a car and have assets worth hundreds of millions? And I will definitely keep the white cards to open the blue cards. If the characters are enough, I will save the blue cards to open the gold cards. What do you mean by opening the Azure Dragon Society to become a killer? The plot is entirely about establishing the Qinglong Society for the purpose of being a killer, not for resources and money. Just like the billionaire I just mentioned delivered food to get good reviews, and then established a Qinglong Society to kill all the other delivery people. Let's talk about the plot in the plot. You A system summon text, pig's trotters, 20-year-old social experience, playing tricks, no matter how you play, any one you summon will be more powerful than pig's trotters, pig's trotters just use gold fingers to open characters to protect themselves, when they become stronger, they will be pushed horizontally, and a golden wind and drizzle tower will ring throughout the three realms!

The concept of time is so bad, fighting almost every day, no time to develop power. To be honest, the people inside are like soldiers, the speed of transmitting messages is super fast, etc. The concept of time is set, the size of the map

Four areas that need to be deepened First: The fighting scenes are refined. The level-level fighting is too simplified to attract fans. The special effects of destroying the environment, items, and describing the skills can also be well reflected and increase the sense of immersion. (The output can be increased, but the current output is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.) Second: The position of the character in the drawing card is too high, lower the position to enrich the original power. It can increase the sense of layering and make the characters more active. Don't do it every time, two people in one building, just a few words to take over, and the Nine Difficulties of Heaven and Man will come to the stage. Now there are forces that are refined and various positions are added. The middle-level cadres lead the subordinates to kill, but they can't defeat the higher-ups. The appearance of the Nine Dilemmas between Heaven and Man (I am the eldest brother and the younger brother will die unless I die? Then why do I need power?) Shows the splendid power play between characters from all walks of life. Third: The territory position of the force, controlling the main industry, relying on the mountains and the water (to pave the way for the subsequent expansion of the sense of hierarchy) needs a clearer description: For example: Xinzhou cantaloupe force (selling melons for a living, eating melons can improve skills, and rich people control the subordinate forces of Xinzhou). Attacks between forces, one attack will surely seize the melon base, and lead the cantaloupe masters to counterattack. Increase the rationality of the struggle for hegemony and the basis of significance for various subsequent actions.

It's not a good thing to check the box after three chapters after being commented by a black man. If you restrain yourself to the point where you have no desires or desires and focus on cultivation, you have to give it a try. Now is to expand your power and improve your cultivation. What do you want to do? If you have no purpose, you will look confused.

The author's recent updates are so impressive. In order to make this book even better, I would like to make a few suggestions for reference only. First, in terms of intelligence. As an intelligence officer, I didn't write about progressive development. I just guarded my own one-third of an acre and didn't expand. At least I set up a point in every point in the Zhou Dynasty. An inn or a brothel didn't necessarily have to have a very powerful person in charge, or it could be a subjugation of local snakes. Second, the map. It's best for the author to draw a map. We don't know how many regions there are in the Great Zhou Dynasty. There are more than 600 chapters. After demarcating the areas, prepare to arrange who is responsible for each area from Tianya Pavilion and Qinglong Club. We will fill in as many people as we need. If there are not enough, we will call in. This way the distribution of forces can be made clear at a glance, and what each summoned character is responsible for and what they do is also clear. Third, the golden finger aspect. The development level of the golden finger is not high. As the capital of a stable life, Su Chen should attach great importance to it, but he is not active enough in obtaining it. At present, there is no single way to obtain lottery cards. Although they are mainly unique copies of cheat books, there are also characters who have achieved breakthroughs, accomplished great things, treasures, etc. But Su Chen did not summarize the rules of acquisition, nor did he obtain it in a targeted manner. For example, you can send people to steal and rob secret books, or arrest people for questioning, kidnapping and extortion. Treasures can secretly control the Chamber of Commerce's acquisitions, and assassination commissions can also prioritize treasures. Doesn't it all have to be gold and silver? This is about intelligence again. Apart from matters related to the martial arts world, shouldn't intelligence focus on where to find secret books and treasures? Then go get it and maximize the use of cheats. Fourth, it's cool. First of all, you have to use your trump card. There is no point in hiding it. For example, the Yan Kuangzu experience card has been out for so long. When it is time to use it, facing backward is no longer a trump card. If the hostile forces can kill them all at once, don't do it overnight. So far, more than 600 chapters have not been able to destroy a few forces. It feels like fighting with each other, endlessly killing matryoshka dolls, killing one layer and another, endless, and it doesn't feel good enough. Fifth, the power structure. A promising force must have both the grassroots, middle and senior levels, but Tianya Pavilion and Qinglong Society have a typical inverted pyramid shape. There are many high-level people, a serious lack of middle-level people, and almost no grassroots people. The development is so abnormal that as a summons article, it is a bit incredible. Because we can keep shaking people! Once again, these are just suggestions and for reference only. The author's writing is actually quite good, as evidenced by the fact that two volumes have been fully ordered. I just hope that some suggestions from a fan like me can help make this book even better.

As a reward for the white lottery, you don't have to wait ten times to draw a more advanced one, so why do you still need the white lottery setting? Even if it's excessive, just smoke these and show them to us.

I have read the first part of this book so far, and I can only say that it is not as good as the previous one. To be honest, the book is too intellectually subversive. It might as well be written as an invincible flow, which might be more enjoyable to watch. The machinations, plots, etc. That are played in it are embarrassing to watch, and even a child's play house may be more exciting than this.

The unicorn arm and all that stuff are so lousy, if that thing is useless,

It was the strongest force when it appeared, but after two pictures, several stronger forces popped up, including ten elders, eight sect leaders, and five kings. Each force had so many powerful characters, and they were all gone after two pictures. There are not many of these characters and forces that people can remember. Those who appear are dying faster. The flowing force, the flowing dynasty, and the flowing characters. They are the two strongest forces on the surface, but they hide hundreds of them secretly. Do you hide the hundreds to deceive the few on the surface? ?

I can't stand it anymore, the writing is messy, the main character is not very strong, and he interferes in a lot of things, here and there.

The more I read, the less I know what to write, so I gave up 😅

The author needs to reflect on himself. If you can't grasp it, don't force it. It's still because you don't have enough background.

There is more and more nonsense. I skipped it all. Basically, I can only read one chapter out of four or five chapters. Sometimes the exciting chapter is mostly nonsense.

The author himself probably doesn't know what he is writing about, right?

I suggest you reopen the novel. If you want to write a summons, use it flexibly instead of keeping it unused. It's not a one-time use. If you just want to write about the protagonist, don't give character cards. It's been more than ten chapters. Do you keep the character cards you started with to give the protagonist a child? Be more careful. It's still the same suggestion. Restart and make a good outline.

The recent plot is not good, I should say it is very bad, it is a very old-fashioned matryoshka doll, and the plot is very rubbish. The protagonist seems to be very powerful, but in the end he is not afraid of anyone. What bullshit [Tianmen] is even more speechless. Because of the existence of this, even if the protagonist is very powerful and can kill the Nangong clan, the result always gives people a feeling of being suppressed and aggrieved. All I can say is... There's not much to read in this book. It's just as good as the previous one. As soon as the bullshit [Tianmen] setting came out, it attracted a lot of attention. The more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became.

I don't even know why, why do you insist on writing about a bunch of forces? This is the same routine in old books. I'll write some of this today, and when it's over, I'll write more with another faction. The conflict is between the idiot who underestimates the protagonist and the one who finds trouble with the protagonist for no reason. Forces sometimes cooperate and then become enemies. There is no indigenous ally, it's all killing and killing. I understand that the current Internet articles are all about selfish protagonists who are only seeking profit, so no one criticizes them. But you write about martial arts. You don't dare to amplify the protagonist's so-called Holy Mother (that is, chivalry or benevolence or whatever), but you can work hard on summoning characters and find a few popular characters to amplify their chivalry. Every day he provokes the protagonist to betray and betray, without any intention. What is the difference between your outer world and the immovable city? Martial arts and martial arts are more interesting when it comes to breaking the sky or chivalry. It's what other people call the Nanny or the Holy Mother. I hope the author really changes his mind. Now I am just reading the old book but the name is different. The Origin Emperor is well written. This is the hero. Being forbearing, compromising, etc. Is also kind enough. Know that true evil is good. I hope the author will change his mind. It's all written for those who want to read it, so it's better to speed up the plot for them to enjoy. It also gives me the relief I get from reading old books like this.

It's getting more and more outrageous. The system is too rubbish. It's the same old routine. I'm being plotted, being assassinated, being looked down upon. Can you do something new? Why don't you just step on the horse and practice your character? Why don't you directly improve your strength and perception? Everyone else can understand the card. I don't believe that the host can't be used in such a rhythm. No one will watch it immediately.

New books are published first so I can put them on my bookshelf, otherwise they won't be found.

Author, don't you tell me where this year's new book is? Didn't you say see you in the New Year? This year is almost over

What about the new book? All the flowers I waited for have faded.

It's been almost 2 months and there's no new book yet?