My Life Has Gone Completely Off the Rails

In the next chapter, I plan to make an action movie with only fighting and no plot, focusing on showing off my skills. But because the protagonist's experience in practicing martial arts is so scientific, you can really keep fit and practice martial arts. It has become a popular science documentary about martial arts and fitness. Won the documentary award😁 To make a documentary, I found a scientist, and the result was to recreate the long-dusted history of the Republic and become a patriotic education. I stopped making movies and engaged in catering. The restaurant closed down in three months, and my tongue is out. Engage in animation, but animation is not popular. The self-made animation engine has become a best-selling game. The degree of freedom is extremely high. Classic sandbox game. And in order to facilitate creation at that time, low image quality was Minecraft, and high image quality was a high-end engine, which could make various large-scale games.

Chapter 28, as far as my current senses are concerned, the author's writing is a little impressionistic and a bit abstract.

The idea is very good, but what do you say about your writing? It's so procrastinating that you treat the branch plot as the main plot and it's endless.

I understand the exaggeration technique, but this is outrageous and overdone, and the protagonist's knowledge of many professions is wrong, and the plot logic is full of loopholes and a mess. I'm curious about what success this book will achieve by putting it on the shelves, and how many people will be willing to pay for it.

I feel like the first 20 chapters are still readable, and can be said to be exciting, but the music in the later chapters falls flat from the beginning. Then I made a movie again. . . . Water again. There is no passion anymore, and it no longer matches the title of my novel. There is no sense of gap like before.

It's painful to write! An idea can support you in writing twenty chapters, but it cannot allow you to write a complete story or a complete book. You can be considered an author who has written two million words. Next time, let's make an outline and write the main line first, and then slowly polish the details, okay? If this book hangs, let it hang!

After seeing 144, I don't want to read anymore. It's the first time I saw the devil and changed Tang Bohu to write so many chapters of chronicles, and it kept making me laugh.

It was my first time to read a novel of this type, and my impressions were flowing. The novel was very urgent, and the text content was very urgent. It was fast-paced and I turned the pages while reading. The 95-chapter novel took me more than 20 minutes without skipping chapters. It successfully developed my speed reading skills.

The writing is too abstract, and it doesn't reflect the protagonist's work at all. Just like if you say a girl is very beautiful, and people ask you why she is beautiful, you just say she has two eyes, a nose, and a mouth.

The front part is pretty good. It writes about variety shows in large sections after joining V, and writes about those who participated in variety shows from various angles. Moreover, the writing is clumsy and ugly. I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit. I, a fully subscribed reader, can't stand it. The author probably doesn't care about grades.