My Life Has Gone Completely Off the Rails

In the next chapter, I plan to shoot an action movie that focuses solely on showing off skills and has no plot. However, because the protagonist's training experience was so scientifically sound, it became a popular science documentary about martial arts and fitness. Winner of the documentary award 😁

Chapter 28, from my current perspective, is written somewhat impressionistically, a little abstract.

The idea is good, but your writing is... Well, it's dragging on and on, treating the side stories as the main plot, and it just keeps going on and on.

I understand the exaggerated style, but this is way too absurd. The protagonist's understanding of many professional fields is flawed, and the plot is riddled with logical holes and a mess. I'm curious how well this book will perform on the shelves, and how many people will be willing to pay for it.

The first 20 chapters were quite readable, even entertaining, but then it became incredibly filler starting with the music. Then they made a movie... And that was filler too. It lost its passion, which doesn't match the title of my novel. It didn't even have the same impact as the earlier chapters.

Writing must have been painful! An idea can support you to write twenty chapters, but it can't support you to write a complete story, a complete book. You've written two million words, so next time let's start by outlining the main plot and then gradually refine the details, okay? If this book is unavailable, then so be it!

I didn't want to read any further after chapter 144. This is the first time I've seen a drastically altered version of Tang Bohu with so many chapters of rambling, disjointed writing, and it keeps going on and on.

This was the first time I'd read this type of novel. It was very fast-paced, with the text flowing rapidly. I was flipping through pages like crazy while reading; the 95 chapters took me over 20 minutes without skipping any. It successfully honed my speed-reading skills.

The writing is too abstract and completely fails to showcase the merits of the protagonist's work. It's like saying a girl is very pretty, and when someone asks why, you say she has two eyes, a nose, and a mouth.

The beginning was quite good, but after it went premium, there were long stretches of writing about variety shows, depicting the comedic characters from various angles. However, the writing was both weak and poorly done, likely deterring many readers. Even I, a full subscriber, couldn't stand it. The author probably doesn't care about the results.