Investigator in the World of Strange Tales

It feels okay. It should be based on the recently popular Rules Zoo. It can be regarded as a clear stream that barely stands up in the suspense category. Make a few comments. 1. Don't try to refine the emotional drama. This is a taboo for suspense and supernatural drama. Don't blame me for not having confidence in you. It's as hard to grasp as an air conditioner. 2. Don't make the plug-in too powerful, otherwise it will be fantasy rather than supernatural suspense. 3. (This is a personal feeling) Improve IQ. Although some people do have low IQ, the yin is really yin. I feel like Hu Ge is a smiling tiger who shouldn't offend another person because of a toy, even if that person seems easy to bully.

Rule-based ghost stories themselves require a lot of polishing of the rules, and it often takes a lot of effort to conceive a rule-based ghost story. Therefore, writing a long online article using rule-based ghost stories requires much more time than ordinary horror-themed online articles. I hope the author can persevere and write a rule-based ghost story with style.

I suddenly realized the dangers of keeping books... Of course I understand that readers want to wait until I write more before reading, but the current situation is not optimistic... There are too few readings, too few to last until next week, because this is science fiction turned from suspense, and there is no advantage in competition. Your reading and support are really important to new authors!

The subject matter is indeed good, but the main character is not very smart. I personally think it would be better to write the plot twists and progressions without being too deliberate, and to cultivate them first |ω)

To be honest, the latest two chapters are really enlightening. Is it not a big deal in the COC worldview to believe in cults? Moreover, it is a cult that has clearly demonstrated its mysterious power and intelligence network, and yet it feels like giving away one roommate is not enough and wants another one. . .

The author writes events very well, but when he writes about people, he is like a disease. Although he knows what you want to express, when you write it, you feel that the supporting characters look like xx. For example, the two who hospitalized the protagonist, you can understand that the author is playing tricks, but the effect of writing is that the protagonist encounters two SBs, and the other supporting characters are similar. The few that are not so objectionable are basically tool people who nod along with the protagonist... I hope the author can improve it in the future.

I just find it strange that the main character doesn't say a word after leaving the hospital and selflessly dedicates himself to assisting the editor in retelling his experiences and making a manual.

It's okay. The biggest problem has been mentioned by others. The author didn't explain some settings, which makes the protagonist seem reckless and self-righteous. The author knows many things but thinks the protagonist also knows it. It's weird.

Rare Good Grass is a very good novel so far. The only shortcoming is that the younger brother of the Ke type is not very good at the Ke type, and the weird, mysterious and crazy feeling is not enough. For example, compared to the lot of nonsense about the villain in Chapter 72, I prefer to repeat a key sentence. I think it has more feeling. Contact the author to do more research on the feeling of Ke system, maybe it will go further. Finally, I hope the author can become a god with this book.

Some books can be finished as long as you keep them.