Become Invincible from the Time a Mortal Cultivates Immortality

He actually said that the protagonist has never read Mortal, but your author has, pretending to be confused because he understands. It is right for this book to be like this. It is poisonous.

The introduction is a bit discouraging. Mortal fanfics don't need fancy introductions, just point out that they are fanfics! The author should change it

The protagonist hasn't read The Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortality?

Poisonous weeds among poisonous weeds. I started to be unable to stand it since the 20th chapter. There is no reason to accept others as disciples to share their cultivation resources, and the Holy Mother does not want to see women cry.

Why do you feel like these Nascent Soul cultivators are so easily tricked by the protagonist? It feels unreasonable. After all, which Yuanying monk is not a cunning person?

When writing a fanfic, the protagonist hasn't seen Mortal yet, but we have all seen it. It is definitely a good book to understand that it is confusing, no matter how you read it, and it is not popular with ordinary people. It is definitely a good book. After all, people who watch fan fiction just want to have fun watching it.

Accepted, you have a Holy Mother's heart in the mortal world, even if there is a Taoist ancestor behind you, it may not be able to guarantee your survival to the later stage.

Although your novel has flaws, the character of your protagonist is indeed well written. I can only say that your writing style is really sloppy. As a reader, I really struggled to read this novel. Extremely energy consuming. Learn a lesson and learn from it.

Not only has the protagonist in the book never read A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, but the author feels like he hasn't either.

The biggest attraction of fan fiction is knowing the plot. If you put a fool who doesn't know anything into it, what's the point?

Author, your book must have been read ten years ago 🤓

You set the protagonist as not understanding the plot, but you do understand the plot. There is nothing wrong with this setting. After all, it is the author's right to pretend to be confused despite understanding. But the terrible thing is that this is fan fiction, and readers know the plot! Aren't you causing trouble for readers? Readers are the author's parents. Who gave you the courage to create trouble for your parents?

I think that since you are writing fan fiction or time travel fan fiction, you should respect the original work. After all, those who read the fan fiction come here for the original work.

Mortals can't level up too quickly, right? Mortals look best in the lower realm. Before the 200th chapter, they'll be in the late Nascent Soul stage.

Mo Juren is a bit dead. . . . Putting aside the fact that he would take immediate action when encountering an immortal cultivator, it is strange why Mo Juren's powerful poison was not used first.

If you write a fanfic and the protagonist has never read the original work, you might as well create an original world. . . Too many novels with this setting have become popular, and the batch of fan authors in the 2000s have tried it out...

Bottles to grab. Daluo Jinxian cannot interfere with the long river of time at all because there is no past and future at all. The bottle that was thrown was also from a parallel universe and was not Han Li at all. In the past, all that was complete was the bottle.

Author, do you still write fanfics with this setting? Wouldn't it be nice to find a class?

Damn it! What's the point of fan fiction if it doesn't compete with the "protagonist"! Life is only a few decades, if you don't earn it by nature, who will earn it! How awesome will "Han Li" be in the future? He is not yet the character written in the book by Mr. Wangyu! Your predecessors were all at the same time and space as "Wangyu"! It's impossible to survive once in a time travel without opening a trap!

Well written, like it, like it, like it, say it three times

The first part is very good, but Chapter 31 is just poisonous. Even if the second part is good, I'm not in the mood to read it.

It's very interesting, author, don't give up

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

More and more rubbish, just bad money and rubbish

This is how I finish the book. A eunuch is a eunuch. It's a shame that he's too high-minded even if he doesn't finish the job.

It's so bad, I wish I could eat the author's life

Autumn

At the beginning, she was deceived and deceived, but in the end, she became a selfless virgin in Mortal Cultivation Story, accepting disciples at will, allocating resources to exercises, saving people and letting bad people go at will.

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The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.