Battle Through the Heavens: The Rise of the Yao Clan

Let me mention the second setting here: ❶The skill practiced by the protagonist, "The Art of Divine Tree to Seize the Sky", is similar to the fragments of the "Immortal Divine Code" of the great master Muchen. It is compared with one of the five lost original dharma bodies, the Eternal Incarnation. It can cultivate the prerequisite dharma body of the Eternal Incarnation - the Holy Body of Creation. ❷ There can be multiple holy bodies of creation. The Wood Spirit Tribe also practices "The Art of Seizing the Heaven with the Divine Tree". However, it is the only one of the five lost primitive dharma bodies. They were all destroyed by evil races outside the territory. However, the original dharma bodies are born in the sky and the earth and are immortal. However, no one can find them, so they are considered to have been completely destroyed by people in the world. Those who have watched "The Great Master" should understand ❸The five lost original dharma bodies: the Golden Burial Ancient Body, the Eternal Creation Incarnation, the Taiyuan Immortal Body, the Burning Heaven Divine Body, and the Guixu Immortal Body are considered second designs. After all, they are not mentioned in the original work ❹The timeline of "Fights Break the Sphere" is a bit vague. After the second design, the emperors ascended to 30,000 years ago, and there are some causal calculations in it, so I won't spoil it. The remaining two designs will be written slowly, and will be summarized as mentioned in the book. You can also remind me if you have any good ideas and ideas, and if you are dissatisfied, you can comment below.

Who are the heroines? The author writes well, keep up the good work

After taking it, the author made the Yao Clan look like a remote country. The protagonist's three-attribute Dou Qi talent has never appeared in the Dou Qi Continent. However, it turns out that he is not as fast as the dual attributes of anti-inflammatory? Yao Chen, who has no bloodline talent, has become a Dou Zun, but the protagonist's father, who has a fifth-level bloodline, is just a Dou Emperor? The 5th-6th grade bloodline is already the backbone of the 8 ancient tribes. Even if the protagonist's father is young, he must be at least a Dou Zong, right? And the elder of the Medicine Clan is at least a Dou Zun, right? After reading a few chapters, there are too many flaws. It's not considered poisonous, but it's also quite enlightening 😐

I only have more than 100 points, but I invested 100 points for you. I hope you don't let me lose so completely.

You can do whatever you want to reduce inflammation, but just pay attention to the logic and reasonableness. There is no unreasonable hate and no unreasonable love.

I would like to make a suggestion. The conflicts are too frequent. From the first chapter to now, no matter what the protagonist does, he will encounter Dou Zun or above. After going out for training, it becomes more obvious. Every time he goes to a certain place, something will happen. The people he encounters along the way are all Dou Zun and above. The protagonist is just a Dou Master, which is too far away. Even if the wolf king is included, he will be abused, so he runs away all the way. This will make readers feel very depressed and feel like they are abusing the master! Basically, the protagonist has never practiced properly! When the protagonist is low-level, do not set high-level enemies, otherwise it will look very cruel. There are enemies in each stage. Moreover, relying on encountering super powerful enemies to promote plot development is no longer very popular. For example, if the Tian She Mansion was destroyed, what effect would this have on the development of the plot? It will only appear that the protagonist has been tortured and escaped all the way. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion, don't spray it if you don't like it!

The main character is too miserable, either useless or simply unenjoyable. There are only a few dozen chapters. It will be a long time before I read this book again.

No? I think the Little Medical Fairy is a very pitiful and lovable heroine. I already feel a little alienated from the main character Yao Clan because of Yao Chen, and now I have to regard the Little Medical Fairy as the villain. Is it because he can't get poisonous pills, or is the Little Medical Fairy just not talented enough? Then what is the purpose of the protagonist's identity as a Yao Clan? Is it disgusting to be of the same clan as Yao Chen?

The setting of Goldfinger is quite interesting, but the villain at the beginning is fighting saints... Don't talk about king versus king, soldier versus soldier, you really have to be able to strictly follow the rules, can you be called a villain? Even though the game can start in a normal situation, there are still many authors who insist on creating a setting of bitterness and hatred. Why is this? A setting like conflict of life experience can dissuade at least half of the old readers.

I found that I am a bit of a middle-class student. I need to write more carefully and be more ruthless. I rely too much on others.