A Tour of Classics Starting from the Red Mansion

The writing is too conventional, too polite, there is no strategizing, there is no power and domineering, it doesn't feel like a good article, it lacks soul, and I can't continue reading until the sixth chapter.

The author said that the results were not good. Let me talk about some of my feelings: 1. Arrange an invincible setting for the protagonist. The protagonist relies on this setting to quickly conquer a large number of Water Margin heroes in the early stage. This gave me two feelings. One is that the author is too lazy to conceive of a protagonist who can convince his subordinates with his resourcefulness and charisma. Anyway, he is rich and invincible, which is enough to start a business quickly. The second is that this setting, including the portable space in the Red Mansion, is actually not needed for the rebellious protagonist in historical novels, and the book does not cover these non-human things in a large amount of space. As a result, this book is a systematic text, but it does not need to be systematic. It is nondescript and superfluous 2. The author often uses a large section in the novel to write about how a person in history is viewed by many people in later generations. The author's inclusion of personal information in the novel is so serious that it is not even clear whether the author wrote such a paragraph incidentally in the novel, or whether he wrote a novel specifically for the purpose of writing such a paragraph. In addition, if readers want to see the true face of someone in history, they won't read history textbooks or Baidu Encyclopedia. Why would they read online novels? This kind of thing is okay if it is written lightly, but 1/3 or even half of a chapter is written like this. Isn't this just a waste of word count? You are writing an online novel, not an argumentative essay! 3. The protagonist travels through the world of Water Margin. The original work of Water Margin provides the author with many supporting characters to write about. But the focus of these Liangshan heroes in the original work of Water Margin is to highlight their loyalty and righteousness, and not to their fighting ability or political ability. The author uses these people to conquer the world, which makes me doubt. Can these people really conquer the world? Although abilities are acquired, the original Water Margin has labeled the heroes of Liangshan as loyal and loyal. These people can rebel as bandits, but it is not known whether they can conquer the world. The author borrowed the framework of Water Margin, but did not follow the path pointed by the framework of Water Margin, which made it difficult for me to get involved in the play. 4. At the beginning, I saw the protagonist traveling through various worlds of classics alone. I thought this setting was novel, so I clicked in to watch it. After seeing it now, I feel that not only does this setting fail to achieve a novel effect, but the author has too many worlds to write about, resulting in each world being written in a hurry. The result of writing them all is that they can't write well.

Author, why can't you put Water Margin in the world of Red Mansions? It doesn't affect both sides very much, but it allows the protagonist to calm down the chaos.

As for the people in Jia's family, if I were the protagonist of this book, I would try every means to raid their house. Don't talk to me about Daiyu Baochai. I really don't think that such a huge dynasty can't find a woman who is knowledgeable, polite and beautiful.

As for famous books... *Pingmei is quite famous, right?😏😏😏

This male protagonist, seeing someone fall in love with someone else... Lin Daiyu's temperament is so crazy that she takes concubines for him... I feel like the character is already OOC

Is this embroidery guard so good? On the one hand, he offends the ministers On the other hand, the protagonist is the son of a local warlord and controls the intelligence agency. How can he not be jealous of the emperor? Simply thankless. How about letting the protagonist hang out in the capital and then take over his father's job?

The setting is the same as Serious Illness, where the son of the feudal lord controls the secret service. What kind of emperor does this person have to have his head shattered into before he would allow a person of this status to take control of his life? Are you, Sima Dezong of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, reincarnated?

Daiyu was molested by Baoyu no matter how many times, but the male protagonist didn't even let out a single fart. He was a sucker at first sight, especially in the feudal society at that time. He didn't care about the crime of the Rongguo Mansion. He just acted like a prince and took the green light

That year, Tang Xuanzang met Lin Daiyu in the Grand View Garden. That year, Jia Baoyu fought against Lu Fengxian at Hulao Pass. That year, Cao Mengde betrothed Sun Erniang in Liangshanbo. That year, Zhen Guanxi slaughtered a talking pig. That year, Li Jing named his fourth son Li Gongcai. That year, Wang Ziteng scolded Wang Jingxing for being ungrateful. That year, Guan Yunchang lured Hu Yanzhuo to surrender on Changban slope. That year, Pan Jinlian went to Tianzhu to seek Buddhist scriptures on the 28th of her youth. That year, I walked into a familiar masterpiece.

The fact that the emperor asked the protagonist to rebuild the Imperial Guard is nonsense. First of all, there is the Jinyiwei secret service. No matter who wins, the old emperor or the former prince, Jinyiwei is needed to monitor all officials. It cannot be like this for more than ten years. Secondly, let the protagonist rebuild the Jinyiwei. What official position does he hold? Is he the commander of the Jinyiwei? That is a third-level official position with real power. How could the protagonist be given such an important position right away? The last person chosen was also the one who asked a group of nobles to be spies. What do you think? Not to mention whether the status is suitable or not. Do a group of second-generation ancestors who spend their days walking around with cats and dogs, eating, drinking, whoring and gambling, have the ability to be royal guards?

Lin Daiyu's description was too perfect. It felt like the drama was forced on her. How could Lin Daiyu be so kind and eager to help Sanchun arrange a marriage? In the original novel, did Lin Daiyu take the initiative to release her love to anyone? To say that Grandma Liu is a female locust is a bit harsh. Lin Daiyu has become a plot promoter for you? It shows Lin Daiyu's warm-heartedness, and then involves the plot of Jia's family. I feel that Lin Daiyu's image is too perfect to be realistic. This protagonist has lived two lives, but he still feels immature. He does not have his own intelligence organization in the capital, and his subordinates are all supported by the original characters of the Xiuyiwei. Are they really good? The original work has proved that they are not very good, but you have written the Xiuyiwei with them as the skeleton as very capable. It feels too bland and the society is too beautiful.

The most extroverted part of The Red Mansion and The Red Mansion is that the men of the Jia family are written to death, and the women feel pitiful and need to be saved. The men of the Jia family are certainly not good things, but regardless of men and women, everyone just recites poems and fights every day, and enjoys leisurely. If men have no ability, do women have the ability? Is it really beautiful and innocent? They are just parasites that infest the Jia family, are they capable? No, are you talented? The reputation of any talented woman written in the book has spread to the outside world. It's all just for self-pleasure within the Jia family. Everyone is a vase, but the men are more hateful, can cause trouble and kill people, and the women just happen to be in the Jia family, pure vase.

Jia Lian is a good wife, how can he be considered a good person if he hooks up with a married woman? Although it's your preference, but this is a personnel matter? Because he seduced the servant's wife and caused the family to be hanged and his family to be destroyed. None of the men in the Jia family were good. The marriage of a bad person is worse than doing evil. In ancient times, when a bad person was famous, he was happy and did not consider the consequences? So there is a theory of cause and effect in the Dream of Red Mansions. Jia Lian's wife and daughter were separated and there was karma. What's wrong with people's outlook on life nowadays? Do you feel safe being friends with such a person?

Are you serious about letting local warlords control central intelligence?

I thought this was a rare article about Hong Manu not messing around with relationships, but I didn't expect that Xiang Ling was sticky and unclear. How long has Xiang Ling been following Xue Pan? Maid...", Is the protagonist the master or she is the master? Just say that she is the maid who is close to the roommate. I'll go and get drunk. Should I first explain clearly what type of Wenwen is bad? If I had known that it would still be like this, I wouldn't have refused a girl. It's deceiving my feelings...

It's still Red Mansion. By the way, has the author forgotten that this is a Zhutianliu novel?

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This is my first book, so I was very concerned about everyone's opinions at first, and tried my best to arrange the plot in a reasonable way, but later I found that I was overthinking it. The two most controversial points are that one is that Daiyu is the female protagonist, and the other is that the male protagonist is in charge of the embroidered clothes guard. I explained the reason why Daiyu was chosen as the heroine. I won't go into details here. Here I want to talk about the reputation issue that a few friends have been worrying about. First of all, the time I arranged for Daiyu to enter Jia's house is different from the original work. Maybe you didn't pay attention at all, but just saw that Daiyu was the heroine and started to criticize people. Secondly, as for the issue of reputation, we are not ancients and cannot always follow what others say. Some people care about reputation, while others do not. I feel that I have some knowledge of history, and I can give you a bunch of examples. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, his mother, Wu Zetian, and Liu E all served as queens. The first two are familiar to everyone, and the last one is Empress Zhenzong of the Song Dynasty. If you don't know, you can learn about it. So stop talking about reputation. The most important thing is that I have modified Daiyu's experience. One last emphasis! Secondly, everyone felt that it was outrageous because the male protagonist was in charge of a spy organization as the son of a feudal lord. You can't just hear that you are the son of a feudal lord and think that the emperor will definitely not use you. When I set this up, I considered it from the perspective of the emperor in the book. First of all, the male protagonist's family is from a foreign vassal, and secondly, he is the emperor's nephew. In the book, the hero's family guards the northeast, and the imperial capital is in Luoyang. When a dynasty is at its peak, does the emperor worry? The most important point is that the ancients paid great attention to the reputation of teachers. Even Zhu Di's own nephews would be in the name of peace. Why do you, a foreign vassal, worry more about your own people from the perspective of the emperor? In the thousands of years of Chinese history, except Zhu Di, who can name another person who was at the peak of the imperial court and overthrew the central government with his local government? If a vassal king does not have the strength to rebel, let alone separatist rule, why can't the emperor use you? There are definitely some issues that I haven't considered thoroughly, but some friends can't hold on to them just for the sake of leverage. It is impossible for everyone to be satisfied with fan fiction, but most of my friends are very rational, but there are a few who are constantly entangled in what is reasonable and unreasonable. I just want to say one thing, the official history is not reasonable, let alone an adapted novel. If you have never studied history and wrote a novel about the experiences of Emperor Guangwu of the Han Dynasty, you people will probably scold you after reading it. This is even more outrageous than a cool novel. But it just so happens that people are so outrageous. Finally, I would like to thank my friends who have always supported me! Those friends who are still looking for trouble are welcome, but I just listen to what some friends say and ignore them.

It feels like the protagonist is like the nanny of the Jia family. Lin Daiyu is always looking after the Jia family. Even if she is kind to the Jia family, she should almost repay it. It's inexplicable.

The writing is inconsistent with the identity of the characters, and the structure is also full of loopholes. I dare to write the four famous novels and choose The Red Mansion at the beginning. It's hard to say whether a newborn calf is not afraid of tigers, or an ignorant person is fearless.

I just saw a friend saying that Jia Mu didn't really love Daiyu. I'd like to share my opinion. Of course, it's just a family opinion and everyone can discuss it. I actually feel that Jia Mu may not really love Daiyu. I wrote it this way for the sake of the plot. In the original work, it can actually be seen through several things. When Daiyu first entered the Jia family, through Daiyu's perspective, we can see that the people in the Jia family wore red and green, and Wang Xifeng and Jia Baoyu were also dressed brightly. This was very rude in ancient times, because it was still Jia Min's filial piety period. According to the rules, the juniors of the Jia family should dress more modestly even if they do not observe filial piety. Also, in the original work, Shi Xiangyun compared Daiyu to an actor. You must know that actors in ancient times were low-class, and they were in the same status as J's daughter. Let's not talk about Shi Xiangyun's intentions. Jia's mother heard it and did not react. However, we can also see from this incident that Daiyu is not as petty as everyone thinks. Jia Mu always said in the original work that among her children, she loved Jia Min the most. I think her words were an excuse to cover up her preference for her second wife, and she deliberately told Jia She and outsiders. If it really hurts Jia Min, will she not react to the above things? The one who really loves Jia Min should be Jia Daishan. In the original book, it was said that Jia Min was in the red makeup of Shili, and Jia Min was married to Lin Ruhai. Because according to common sense, nobles like the Jia family would marry into noble families, and as for Lin Ruhai, although his ancestors were princes, by his generation, he was already a scholar. Moreover, they are still the top picks. Everyone knows that the top picks must not only be knowledgeable, but also handsome. Therefore, this marriage must have been brokered by Jia Daishan, and maybe he asked the emperor to grant the marriage. Every time I watch Red Mansions, I am thinking that if Jia Daishan had not died, there would have been another ending. Daiyu, Sanchun, Jia She and his son, and even the entire Jia family will definitely not end up like this.