Traveling Through the Marvel World: Judgment Angel

Is your writing style from four or five years ago? Cheating the protagonist. I don't want to go too far. You write like this, if you want to make money, it's better to find a factory.

Why don't you go to Chuangshi to practice your writing skills? It's easy to get criticized here for being autistic.

😅 This kind of experimental skill destroying a wall at home and being exposed in an interview makes me speechless 🤫, especially if you are still a person who is struggling to develop, it is such a waste to choose a bunch of late-stage skills [fn=10 ], these are really poisonous hair, not to mention the Time Variation Management Bureau, Gu Yi will come to you for tea. The way to write Gou Development is either you keep pretending to be a grandson and make a blockbuster, or else if you don't move, you will kill with one move and then escape far away to continue developing. Hey, I don't want to say anything 😅

Transform yourself into an angel and go to a famous church to say who in America is guilty and who dares to offend you. It is not as simple as you think for the church to follow European and American countries and plunder the world in modern times.

I chose to develop skills, but as a result, I always liked to rush to the bottom of the tower. Opening the invincible game has to be restricted to the limit.

If you want to show strength, you show off. You say a few words to show strength, and you are chased by missiles. Like the United States, if you don't kill it until it hurts, it won't know what strength is. It makes me sick to death.

The protagonist's heart is as high as the sky, his life is as thin as paper, and he has no self-awareness at all.

The q development of the dog head, salary equipment, and then the passive of the lantern, or Thain's w. Meat it for a while, and then it's Xiaofa's q or the big bug's r. Invincible. Add at most one Dragon King.

Finding a factory to work hard is better than anything else

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is too poor.

How many chapters do you think this author can write before he becomes a eunuch?

All the interest I had built up before reading Chapter 8 was gone, and I was still so wasteful in the later stages of the game.

That guy from the biker gang wanted to rape your girlfriend, but you let him go. It's very cruel.

Chapter 3: Teasing (it's the protagonist's honor to be hit by you), Chapter 5: Dating, Chapter 6: Forced Kiss, Chapter 11: Mei is in danger

Time travelers should be more ruthless. A time traveler has some golden fingers. He actually wants to go work and make money. Are you kidding me? And he even fights with ordinary people to the point of almost death. That's rubbish.

They wanted to rape your girlfriend, but you finally forgave her, and your threat was too childish. You forcibly added a godfather and godmother, and was kidnapped. Your revenge is to take the president and return it to Ross? You want to write an invincible article but there are various restrictions. The data stream also comes with an old man. You also follow Xiao Yan, and the old man is forced to sleep.

This is so funny, are you an angel? You are a bird person, you have no character at all and you have been beaten to nirvana. You made me laugh so hard at night that I vomited.

Seeing so many people complaining makes me happy

Everything else is okay, but it's not showy enough! Nothing like an angel! You might as well search for words that apply to angels showing off.

This is the real angel

. . . . No brains? Why not use the power of religion.

You can write some Kama Taj, so that you can expel demons and other foreign creatures, and upgrade quickly. When you upgrade to level 11, everyone will be your son.

Come on, this book is just for writing practice.

Come on, the subject matter is great, but the writing needs to be improved.

Although I haven't read the chapters, if you want to practice writing, you should go to other book sites, not Qidian. Writing at Qidian is extremely stressful. I wrote a novel with only three chapters, but I didn't dare to publish it. The water at Qidian is too deep. It is also a cool article. Qidian is Qidian, and the book station is a book station. There's such a big gap, at least that's what I personally think.

Angels are like Kesha.

Is there anything written about Aunt Mei 😏

Please support me, it's not easy for newbies

I still have time to read the two or three chapters I wrote. If you think it doesn't work, please give me some guidance. Thank you.

I hate reading harem novels from Marvel.