One Piece: I Can See Skill Proficiency, So I Became a Legend

A fantasy story wrapped in a One Piece theme 😅

It's clearly a One Piece fanfic, but they insisted on adding a bunch of fantasy and martial arts subplots, which instantly killed my interest.

Combining fantasy elements with classical Chinese in the One Piece universe is indeed quite awkward.

If you see any pirate series mentioning equality, just skip it. It's pointless. Even in reality, complete equality is impossible. What are you trying to achieve? Proposing this idea would be like going against the world. Truth doesn't reside with powerless civilians. Anyone with even a little power won't accept equality. Good people like Shanks and Luffy are too few and far between.

Nico Robin

Wow, this synopsis sounds like a typical harem/protagonist novel with a young, arrogant protagonist.

Well, I'm afraid it might discourage the author! This One Piece fanfic doesn't have the One Piece style at all; it has more of a martial arts/fantasy feel! It's a complete mess!

I suggest the author stop using so much classical Chinese. Doesn't the author feel awkward? Using classical Chinese within the One Piece setting is incredibly cringeworthy. I was enjoying it, then suddenly I was stuck, and a chill ran down my spine.

The writing style gives me a fantasy feel; if you replaced the names with those of a small-town dojo in a fantasy world, it wouldn't feel out of place at all. It just doesn't feel right. Chapter 12, "Dragon's Reaction," changes the scene to a historical novel, but the writing style is exactly the same.

Every time I see an author dragging our old sayings and proverbs into these Japanese manga, I just want to kick a three-bedroom apartment.