The Villain Fantasy Heroine Design Completely Collapsed

I would like to support Little Sponge. How should I put it? In terms of the author's writing experience, he is still a newbie. There is nothing wrong with the writing content, the smoothness of the language, the expression of the text, and the clarity of ideas. The content of this book is quite to my liking so far. I hope it will get better and better in the future. Please support it!

This book is so to my liking, it will become an excuse for me to stay up late at night (✪▽✪), tell me how to vote for the monthly ticket, etc. (This is my first time (=ﾟДﾟ=), the author needs some decimal points🌝), and then I will make a final complaint. The cool article is really amazing. Although there are some typos and mistakes, it is still very good. I just hope you don't give up and don't collapse in the later stage. Oh my god

This is my first time writing such a fast-paced and refreshing article. Although it is semi-fantasy, it is also a refreshing novel. You should not set your sights too high when reading this book. Before writing, I read a lot of works of the same type before starting to write. So everyone can see heroines with different abilities. However, only one heroine can obtain each ability, and there will be no situation where both heroines hear their voices. Also, I'm not sure whether this book is a harem or not, but it's definitely not a collection of books. Do you understand this? Many female protagonists will give up. If you hate the characters or the characters you like, you can leave a message here. Then I will determine which women should stay and which women should give up. If you interact with me more, I will have better ideas. Or if you have any hopes that the next heroine will have any abilities, please let me know if you have any good ideas~ Thank you all readers, please remember to vote. Of course, the best reward is ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆ I wish all of you, the official watchers, get rich overnight! (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡

People outside the book are living their own lives, and people in the book write their stories. I hope that our Xia Ye can get his wish and come out with his own story, and I also hope that the author can become a god along the way. Thank you for writing such a good book, you are the best😜😜😜🤭🤭🤭😚😚😚✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

It's pretty good. Although the beginning is average, the follow-up is amazing. I can imagine that it will get better in the future. Come on.

The author's seriousness made me leave this comment. Maybe it will be harder to get started. Remember to stick with it if you can. Maybe there aren't many people who can confer gods in one book. But if you persist for one more day, you will be one step closer to your goal. Tall buildings rise from the ground. I'll give you a piece of cake, and I hope more people will like it.

Although I know this is for another reason to pick up the heroine, it is too much to engage in a lottery to lower my intelligence. I always thought that there is no such thing as gambling, this kind of pure SBI, being imprisoned and being tricked by the system and still resenting it, this is also the protagonist's path, right? Really convinced, I am so addicted to this wave of poison that I am playing ranked to listen to the novel, just hang up, let's talk about what I want to do

I read about 150 chapters. What fantasy. Cool article. Fast pace is all bullshit. It's all romance dramas that are disguised as illusions. Not practicing. No fighting. It's all about romance with various heroines. The author, you write fantasy. He doesn't even have any understanding of the cultivation level. Let's just say that the Grand Master is the ceiling. However, every level of cultivation below is the same. No instructions. I thought there was going to be a fight in the sect. But it's all inner drama. It's all about romance. Author, do you really understand the fast pace of fantasy novels? I am really speechless that an inner drama can reach 150 chapters. I love watching fantasy harems. But the harem without fantasy is really unbearable. Wish there were more fights. Less harem drama. At least it can't be 99% all harem dramas.

The first seven chapters are a failure. Why does a small plot have to be so long? Isn't it good to simply finish the first one and get slapped in the face by pretending? It's so dragging.

It's not just about following the trend. If you write well, a group of people will praise you, but if you write rubbish, people will scold you to death.

Well, I feel that this book will be good. First of all, no one reads it. To be honest, the performance is a bit unsightly. Secondly, the writing style is generally a little better.

It's raining heavily, come here for a visit. Is the author future platinum? The writing is so good. (Fifty cents a piece, remember to delete the last bracket

So far, a solid fan of Linnaeus. Secondly, I have a very good impression of Yang Guo. Author, just figure it out

The idea itself is very good, but I have read a lot of books of this type. From my own experience, I find that basically all authors will make the male protagonist very angry when the female protagonist does not follow the plot. The setting of the book itself is no problem. But I think some of the wording is inappropriate. For example, when a heroine violates the plot and writes about the hero's helplessness and anger, she will use some strong-toned words, the most classic of which is "resentment." I think whenever the word hate is involved, it is a very strong psychology. The male protagonist does have his own difficulties, but the female protagonist does not know it. This subverts the plot and even like Linnaeus in the book, she wholeheartedly helps the male protagonist. Others are dedicated to your own good, but the male protagonist's mentality should not be "hate", but should be a little annoyed, mostly helpless. When describing the male protagonist's heart, you can use a tone similar to ordinary people's high-spirited scolding, but you should also have a sense of propriety, but the high-pitched tone is best. Otherwise, the male protagonist will have the feeling of a villain in the market, without any structure of his own, and will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, without even considering the feelings of other people. For example, when it comes to Lin Naiyi's attitude, you can endure the temptation, you can pretend to be cold, and as long as the author wants, you can put the emotional line into a relationship where the male protagonist feels that he owes Lin Naiyi but is forced to have no choice but to be cold. This is also in line with Lin Naiyi's guess, and Lin Naiyi's licking has a reasonable logic. Whether the male protagonist is described as having a bad mouth or being resentful, it gives me the feeling that this male protagonist is not a good person. Let a person who is not a good person have a happy ending and enjoy the blessings of everyone. To be honest, I feel a bit uncomfortable.

There is no nonsense, I can only speak from the bottom of my heart. It is very well written and should not crash.

Why do today's villains have to be dog-lickers? Can't you write in Gu Changge's style? Moreover, the more I watch the protagonist, the more frustrated he becomes. The system in front of him is also an ex, and there are too many inner dramas. Tell me what makes him look like a villain? Isn't this kind of setting just like the silly son of a landlord in Novice Village?

Will Ning Ruxue accept it? I really like this character, but I am afraid that the author will write it into a tragedy.

Overall it's pretty good. There are two points that affect the perception. The emotional restriction punishment was almost driven away in the previous paragraph (this paragraph can actually be spoiled in advance). Fortunately, it gradually faded away after the heroine was recommended in Chapter 114. The protagonist's IQ is not enough. The protagonist in Qian Ning's episode did not expect to travel through time and space. It is not from God's perspective. Under the various conditions given by the system and the heroine, the protagonist still did not react. He just thought that Qian Ning recognized the wrong person. I hate this misunderstanding. The content is not sweet enough, I hope more sugar can be added. Don't flirt if you don't accept it.

When I came back, I saw that the author had left the palace. Rarely, that thing can still be picked up.

😂Personally, I feel like something is wrong now

How to put it, the whole novel, a central idea that is implemented, is that there is no human nature, people are irresistible to beautiful things, especially backward,

Damn it, where is the author? What to do after May Day? Could it be that he has become cold or died?

The author writes very interestingly 😁

Don't run away with the bucket 🙂

It's up to you, come on, support

Come on, author, stop being a eunuch. Hard work will always pay off

Are you a eunuch? I'd rather give you an accurate letter.

You're saying it's a well-paced article, but I've never seen it.

Author(ง •̀_•́)งCome on Oli

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