My Dorky Little Girlfriend

Cherish every author who writes sweet articles

Female author? It gives me the feeling of an ugly duckling. We brought in a male protagonist, but it feels like the author brought in a female protagonist.

I can only say that there is no need for female authors to compete with male fans. Is this obsession? It's so hard for girls to write things that men like to read... Really, I read your first book last year, but it seems that my grades haven't improved yet.

I come first and do whatever I want🙂

Let's evaluate it objectively. This book is indeed not as well written as the dozens of chapters you cut out of the previous book. The rhythm of the previous book is better than this one. Before this book was put on the shelves, the writing was actually good and not considered poisonous, but after it was put on the shelves, it became a bit strange. First of all, the pace is too slow. It is too slow no matter what time it is. It is not right to be in love all the time or deal with urgent matters, but also to be affectionate in various ways. Furthermore, the cleanliness of falling in love has a cookie-cutter feel, and it becomes boring after watching too much. There is also the issue of title. The male protagonist can call the female protagonist by her nickname, but don't call her baby. Once the relationship is truly established, she will call her this way. I feel... It's too uncomfortable... Regardless of reality or novels, it is really awkward to call the heroine baby in almost any situation, or is it more intimate to call her by her nickname. Baby, it is more like used when coquettishly coaxing the other person. Rhythm is a big problem.

I was disgusted when I saw it later. When I was a child, my house was set on fire Later, I was threatened again, almost openly threatening my girlfriend's safety. I didn't dare to ask my parents for details. I just don't understand. What's the point of writing nonsense and ruining things in daily dog ​​food articles? Does it promote the plot? It's useless except to disgust readers.

He Yuwei's character design is quite good. She doesn't necessarily get involved in the love affair between Lin Beicheng and Jiang Shu in this era. She just works silently behind the scenes and fulfills her previous wish.

The writing is okay, the plot is average. What I can't accept the most is that the male protagonist is a person who has traveled back in time. Why is he so unsure of his wife of ten years? ? Thinking every day that your wife doesn't like you is really a sign of insanity. Is it because the novel completely forgot about the time-travel setting? There is also the plot of meeting your mother-in-law. How many times have you seen her in your previous life? Are you so nervous? That's ten years.

I have a small opinion. When I read Chapter 25, it was all kinds of dragging. It was obvious that I could confess, but all kinds of dragging and all kinds of psychological uncertainty. My head really hurt when I read it. Is there anything like this in the previous life that caused you to have this question? Delay the pace on purpose.

How should I put it? The author's writing style is very stable. There is no need for three golden chapters. The first two chapters can lure people into the trap. The emotional line is decided to be pure dog food. It depends on whether the business will be written crookedly later...