The Stand User in Marvel

I read Chapter 25 of the book. Although it doesn't suit my reading style, everyone has their own preferences for this kind of thing. I didn't plan to post it at first, but I read a few chapters by the author. Get together and answer. First point, no matter how you write, some people will say that your writing is not good. This is inevitable. But when it reaches a certain level, it might be really bad. Secondly, you said that the protagonist is an ordinary idiot who has lived two lifetimes. It is recommended to change it to a younger child. The protagonist has read Marvel and knows that he has passed through Marvel. And the experience of the previous life, what have you been doing all these years? This is the Marvel world, not the harmonious society of the previous life. It would be more reasonable if you set it as a primary school student, or as an adult after passing through. What else do you say you want to do? How many of the readers who come to Qidian want to see the documentary of the priest's life? In daily life, you still want to show off when you have nothing to do, but when you travel through time, you become a low-key Holy Mother? According to this logic, Marvel still has tens of millions of poor and left-behind children waiting for you to save. Why should you be a priest? How about going to Africa to do charity? What kind of conflict plot is planned? If there is conflict, it will not feel better, it will end in an anticlimax. There is no problem with the second setting of the original plot, but it must conform to the basic logic of the original drama and be able to justify itself. Otherwise, the readers attracted by Marvel have recently changed beyond recognition. Isn't that false advertising? It's like the Erguotou in a Moutai bottle. Everyone except the wine seller has emotions. The third protagonist's battle problem, the weather forecast for the awakening at the beginning, if you think it is a big hang-up, just try to make up for it. For example, it consumes too much mental energy, or you need to upgrade the level, which makes the avatar weak or unable to be used frequently. But after you awaken the avatar, the protagonist will go up to fight meleely. Don't say it's to hide yourself. If you really want to hide it, then don't use it, or if you use it, don't leave witnesses. This forcefully lowers the protagonist's ability and intelligence, which is very discouraging. As for what you said, if you don't want to read it, just find another book. Don't show off your superiority here. To put it bluntly, when the author of Qidian writes a book, he is selling vegetables in the market, and when reading a book, he is buying vegetables. If there are any problems with the vegetables, he will not be allowed to talk about them. Do you think it is appropriate? If you save it on your phone, do you think anyone will come out to show it? Now that I have posted it to a public platform, even if I am not trying to make money, I am still trying to find a sense of recognition. Then you have to accept disagreement. That's all for the above, personal rating: ★★☆

What is the protagonist? The protagonist is a fool! It is obvious that the author wants to write the protagonist well, imitating the spirit of JOJO and the charm of the characters written by Araki, but the author does not have that kind of writing power, plus the setting of the time traveler, two layers of negative buffs, no matter how you look at the protagonist, it is just a virgin and a stupid young man, and the substitute does not write the power and mystery in the JOJO series. So, author, you have to work harder!

Brainstorming God said that the priest is the shepherd of God. Now the gangs are established, drugs are rampant, and the sheep and sheep are harmed, so the priest plans to eliminate drugs, and the first step to eliminate drugs is to become the godfather of gangs, so now the anti-drug trend is started. On the road to anti-drug wind, he met the Punisher. Due to the relationship with SHIELD and the influence of anti-drug wind's ideals, the punisher decided to help the protagonist. It was not until he later realized the protagonist's golden spirit that he began to truly teach the protagonist how to become a qualified godfather. Then blah blah blah, until seven days to become the godfather of the gang. 🐶 After the anti-drug campaign was successfully launched, a man from the future came and said that the world was going to end and asked the protagonist to save the world. The setting of the box was also brought to the protagonist. The future man explained that Stark in the future used the arrow in his hand to research the box. (The arrow has now appeared in Marvel for unknown reasons. Kingpin has a bug arrow in his hand. Now it is in the hands of the protagonist. The Mutant Academy has a missing person arrow in the hand. S. H. I. E. L. D. Has three ordinary arrows. Stark met the Stand Organization while fighting criminals. He got the arrow after a narrow escape and began to study the arrow.) Stark lived up to the name of Marvel plug-in and successfully developed it. I have found out a first-generation box. The box can convert an object into a stand-in through the stored electricity and run it through electricity. However, it still cannot convert life into a box. Therefore, the first-generation box is also called a universal weapon box (yes, I know what you all think of, converting bullets and cannonballs, right? Then I can also add a converted stand-in. If the box is hung up, the box will break and become a stand-in. Consumables that the messenger felt were right) Such items that boasted the times were also known to the Wuchang, and Stark knew he couldn't keep it, so he gave up the initiative to hand it over, which caused a headache for the higher-ups, but Stark would not let the higher-ups take the initiative to take control of the weapons. So, the box company was established and sold the boxes (weapons are available for civilian use) Stark continued with three arrows from S. H. I. E. L. D. After doing experiments (destroyed two), the second-generation box that finally opened up a new era was born, along with the box ring, called the third industrial revolution The box ring. As we all know, the stand-in is Youbowei, and the first generation has no soul energy, and the ring is a tool that can utilize the soul energy of flesh and blood. The second-generation box can store and use it and is more durable and stronger. How about choosing Ultra Ultron for the future crisis? (This wave is a brain explosion. If you are interested, please let me know when I think about it. By the way, the author doesn't copy book reviews, right?)

I see some friends are wondering why they choose the weather forecast as a stand-in. I still want to explain it here. First of all, everyone's first association with the profession of priest should be White Snake, but with this ability, I personally (personally!) Feel that it is not suitable to be the first stand-in in the Marvel world. White Snake is suitable for Yin people, and there are no other stand-ins for the protagonist to draw discs. Most American comics like close combat, and White Snake is a stand-in with autonomous consciousness. The data panel also has many question marks. If I write strong, I will be criticized easily. If I write weak, I will be criticized. Whether I write or not, I will be criticized, so I simply give up White Snake. Looking aside from the profession, do you have the ability to advance, attack, retreat, and defend, can attack single targets and range attacks, and have good attack capabilities? I came up with the idea of ​​Justice (too ugly and not in line with the protagonist's temperament) Spicy Red Pepper (dissolved in water) Youth (beating teammates) Bohemian Rhapsody (use it once and write an extra "virtual" character) Miracle and You (too buggy) So after thinking about it, the only substitute that meets all the conditions is Weather Forecast, and he is handsome and strong. You can also learn to make the substitute's ability continue to grow. The weather forecast was finally selected ✌️

From the beginning, it is shown that the protagonist is a warrior in the form of a reckless man. It is better to choose a stand-in like the World Platinum Star or the Crimson King. After getting the weather forecast, you can use your abilities to defeat them and then pretend to be a magic stick and say this is God. How about baba bala. After all, you are a priest, and you can still keep yourself mysterious. I never expected to beat you with your fists. It is a pity that the weather forecast followed you.

Author, I suggest you change the title of your book to "A high school student who traveled to Marvel suddenly awakens to become a substitute messenger at the cost of forgetting his past life memories"

The integration of avatars and other themes will always make the protagonist have multiple avatars. I always feel that this is not very good. If it focuses on another theme, it doesn't matter, but if you want to write out the spirit in Jojo, this setting is a bit overwhelming, because in essence, avatars are the embodiment of the spirit. I want to write J If it's o taste, it's better to let a single stand evolve continuously, which can also reflect the gradual sublimation of the protagonist's spirit, and it is also very reasonable to spiritually evolve the stand. For example, Kira Yoshikage, who does not want to die, evolved into the loser's dust. As for the arrow, you can add it or directly write it as a naturally awakening stand.

My mind exploded again and a flood of thoughts came to me. If the villain is not strengthened, there is no way to play.

The setting of this book is that the avatar can be seen Tsk, when I saw this, I didn't want to read it. You said it can be seen by people with strong mental power. Even a little ninja can see it. It's outrageous.

Found two pictures hahaha