Traveling Through Four Generations of Namikaze Minato: My Name Is Nagataimei

Thoughts after reading the book. Jpg Don't be too addicted, the plot is smooth, but the previous plot is a bit bland. In terms of writing, the few fights are like a dragonfly touching water, and then go away after a few dips, which is not deep enough. In terms of plot, it lacks tension, but it flows naturally. Although it is dull, it is interesting and can be read at once. Some suggestions: 1. The fighting aspect can be appropriately in-depth, increase the fighting movements, moves, psychological changes, etc., Reduce the language, or intersperse the psychological description of the actions. (This may also be a drawback of characters like Minato. Fights are usually suppressed with a few moves, and killed instantly with a few moves.) For example, in the battle with Minazuki Ye in Chapter 63, add some scene descriptions, and put Ye's large confession after a long battle (preferably near the end of the chapter) Water Men Xin said: "We can probably fight for another 30 seconds, and the poisonous mist is about to spread." As his thoughts flashed, he gradually exerted force in his hands, suddenly increasing the output of chakra, and violently exerting force backwards, but pressing forward with his body, as if he was trying to cut through Ye's ice armor. "You can try to use the thunder attribute chakra and take this opportunity to break through. If you can't break through his ice armor within 10 seconds, then use that move." "It's just a civilian ninja, it's so boring. Just hurry up." Ye didn't finish his words, but saw his light blade suddenly surged. He was shocked, and he also increased the input of chakra, accelerating the recovery of the ice armor. At the same time, he couldn't help but feel like retreating, and pulled back. Minato first increased the output of chakra in a flash, and then drew his sword in an open and covert retreat. He successfully frightened Ye and easily retracted the Thunder God's Sword. Yeya realized that he had been fooled, and his face was a little helpless, but he was unwilling to give in, and continued to sarcastically say: "Jing will be smart, but what's the use? Don't you understand, you can't break my defense." The ice armor on his body seemed to give him a sense of peace of mind, completely forgetting that Minato almost broke through his defense just now, and rushed towards Minato to attack again. I saw the kunai in his right hand flashing with blue ice, drawing an icy trajectory towards Minato. With another shake of his left hand, he created five ice thousand bonsai in an instant. As long as he caught the slightest flaw in Minato, he would attack his life gate in an instant. "There are still 10 seconds left" "You are just a commoner who is not even worth being buried in my ice collection. Why don't you just be my experimental subject of Hyou Senbon?" Minato completely ignored his taunts. The Thunder God's Sword flew up and down in his hand, blocking the kunai that was coming from Ye, flicking away the mixed Hyou Senbon, and even slashing at Ye's ice armor with ease. The exchange of swords and shadows between the two people can't help but make people's hearts beat faster, and they bow to the art of sword collision. "Concentrate your energy and further compress the chakra, condensing it to the extreme." In the ping-pong-pong fight, at first glance, the unarmored Minato was in danger, but it was Minato who suppressed the rhythm of the attack. If he was not careful, his ice armor was cut open by a knife. But it was restored intact under his control. "No way, then practice your accuracy and try to see if you can hit the same position continuously" "Ping pong, brush, buzz" "Okay, that's it" Minato looked at the ice armor that had been shaved off by 1/3, and the movements in his hands became cleaner and neater. "Three times" "Ding, ding" Minazuki Ye threw two Senbon to interrupt Minato's attack. "Tch, have you been blocked? Come again." The more you hit the water, the more frightened Wuyue Ye became, "This brat was able to accurately cut the mark last time under the suppression of my Senbon and Kunai. He can grasp such a short gap, Konoha is really a monster." Another round of collisions between kunai and swords. After that, Minazuki Ye jumped back and gasped slightly. Although he was surprised that the yellow-haired commoner could suppress him in physical skills, he still raised the corners of his mouth and taunted: "No matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you try, a commoner is just a commoner." He pointed at the scratches on the ice armor with his right hand, but hid his left hand behind his back, preparing to use stronger ninjutsu. "It's already quite good to be a commoner like this. All that's left for you to do is to become my experimental subject, the noble blood successor ninja, and die with honor." Minato did not continue to attack. He looked around at the poisonous gas gradually spreading around him, and then at Night Body. The marks he scratched on his body gradually became shallower, and he thought to himself: "Is there still 15 seconds left? Can't I use his Ice Kai to improve the control of my thunder attribute chakra? Sure enough, it's still too reluctant. It seems it's time to use that move." His left hand was also hidden behind his back, condensing chakra. "You are just like a commoner. If you are defeated by a commoner like me later, it will not be easy for you." Continue a large dialogue from the original text "... It will be useless under my ice shield, hahahaha." "My ninjutsu will be ready in one second. It's your honor to die under this ninjutsu, Huang Maozai" "Rasengan!" (This chapter is over) Before Minazuki Ye's thoughts were finished, Minato's Rasengan had already popped onto the ice armor... It's just a little immature personal change, welcome to communicate with the author. 2. I personally like the protagonist to draw inferences from other cases. In terms of independent development of ninjutsu, it can be appropriately increased 3. The role and strength of the protagonist's teammates can be more obvious, and Kirigakure is a bit strong The above, as a little suggestion from readers, everyone is welcome to express their own opinions. I also hope that the author can write better and better, and become a lv5 boss as soon as possible 😚

It is rare among Naruto fan fiction books to have basically no poisonous points, probably because Minato is a little sun who is kind to others. I personally like books with the protagonist Minato, so I have a good impression of them. Although the writing style is slightly lacking, it is innocuous. Overall, it's not top-notch, but it's still a decent masterpiece.

I have thought about this before. If the fourth generation is immortal, there will be less trouble. Minato is full of energy and his fighting power is at its peak. The village basically cannot make waves. I guess the Uchiha can solve it peacefully. Outside the village, except for Madara, he is almost invincible. It is really Tenhu's opening that makes Madara to pieces.

When I saw the sentence "Exploring peace in the ninja world" in the author's introduction, I was really moved. This is a time traveler! Use your own will to create a peaceful and beautiful world! Going dark is too narrow-minded.

If possible, Jiraiya's ending should be based on the manga. I don't want Tsunade and Jiraiya to get together. He must be tired from rescuing Kato Dan or working with others to let the "hero" who silently protects everyone rest in peace. Jiraiya may always "like" her and protect her, but he will never be with Tsunade. Because there will always be an unbridgeable gap between the two. The most likely time for the two of them to be together was when they were in unrequited love with the beautiful girl at the end of the crane. After that, she and he became "strangers". One has been pursuing "truth" outside, and the other is in love in the village. A man who can kiss the man he "met" on the first day, a man who visits "brothels" but always has only one person in his heart. One left the village devastated by the loss of his brother and lover, while the other lost everything one after another and still managed to laugh it off. One was confused for the rest of his life because he lost his lover, while the other was persevering for the sake of change and peace in the ninja world. The once proud daughter of heaven has lost her aura of genius and turned into an "aunt" who is hungover every day, while the lustful crane tail who has been laughed at and looked down upon has grown into a towering tree that protects the village and even the ninja world. A person who found his way back to protect the village, a "frog at the bottom of the well, disappeared into the sea", this is their best ending.

This book is really good. The writing style is not poisonous and very funny. The author is very good at making jokes. The jokes are very dense and not cliché, which is rare. In terms of content, it not only describes the sweet love between Minato and Kushina, but also writes about Minato's high IQ, and the fighting style is very Minato! Of course, the character skills and names are also very Minato, haha, there is a book that satisfies all my fantasies about Minato, and I look forward to the unfolding of the subsequent plot. At present, the early plot is an original plot, but it also perfectly fits within the big plot framework of the original work. It is really nice to have both, and it is set as a three-way game between the God of Otsutsuki and the fate of the world. It is estimated that the early and middle plots are more close to the original work, but starting from Otsutsuki in the middle and late stages is completely original. After all, Boruto does not know when it will be completed. I very much suspect that the author wants to write a group portrait, and bring out Madara, Hashirama, Itachi, Shisui, White Fang and other characters to fight against Otsutsuki. Fighting a civil war is boring, but it is more fun to fight Otsutsuki together. For the sake of your new book, I won't read it. I will read it every day, waiting for you to open it after you have gained weight... Some places are a little loose, but it's not a big problem, because the setting of the original work is a sinkhole... Well, that's all I can think of for the time being. I still saw this book in..., And specifically... Support it,... Come on!

Jiraiya said that no one is good enough compared to Namikaze Minato. I always agree with what Jiraiya said, the only person Minato is sorry for is Naruto. And the original version of Minato is completely a powerful ninja that surpasses Jiraiya. In terms of the dirt form, the perfect sage mode can enter faster than Naruto, plus the fastest speed in the ninja world. If he completes the Wind Release Spiral Shuriken, it is completely more suitable than Naruto. After all, compared to throwing it out, using the Flying Thunder God to release it personally and then leaving, there is basically no solution.

The first picture, family throne

This mouth to mouth. . . This author is not a serious person!

Twin Kamui Kakashi? Is the protagonist going to give Kakashi both of Obito's eyes? Just like in a movie I once watched, after the time traveler Sasuke killed Obito, he gave Kakashi the left and right eyes of Kamui.

The Flying Thunder God is indeed invincible in the early stage, otherwise Kishimoto wouldn't have killed Minato at the beginning.

In fact, Minato Namikaze is quite difficult to write about. The book I am reading now, Naruto: I Can Trick My Disciple, has Minato Namikaze as the protagonist. This book is quite well written.

To be honest, in the world of Mars, people without blood can at most rely on magic to find their way to the stage. No matter how awesome physical skills are, they are just a flash in the pan. It is absolutely possible to develop the power of the era before Otsutsuki came to the earth, such as celestial magic, the ability of evil gods, etc. No matter how powerful the Flying Thunder God is, he relies on chakra and the power of chakra. At the top, he is like Kaguya (maybe it is because she was crushed all the way. Kaguya did not show her true power, just like Kong Shou Baoshan who doesn't know how to use it and has no fighting experience, so she relies on flat A.). Both the Six Paths and Naruto were sealed with the power of immortals. For other powers, you can consider inviting gods (evil gods, gods of death, various gods, you can make them up.) Finally... The fourth Hokage is indeed a little sun, but those who can become Hokage must have a dark side. I hope you won't write too much.

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It's been so long, haven't they been updated?

The word "forever with the girl" appears too much. Although I know it is a joke, it is quite annoying 😅

I haven't read it yet, but I just saw one part in the introduction that I wanted to make a small complaint about. That is to say, if I remember correctly, Jiraiya took the three Nagatos first, so Nagato is Minato's senior brother... (But in fact, the Naruto timeline is messy, and there is no detailed explanation here. I just remember a scene of a conversation between Tsunade and Jiraiya. After Jiraiya saw Minato, he said that he was more like the son of prophecy)

My idea is that I can engrave the Flying Thunder God Ninjutsu on my hand and make a mark. For example, I can engrave the Flying Thunder God Ninjutsu spell on the palm of my left hand, and then release it with the other hand, so that the Samsara Eye can absorb the damage of the Ninjutsu.

Can I read this book? Is it poisonous?

How about Minato learn how to use this spiral bullet (which compresses the original spiral pellet again and launches it like a bullet)? After all, Minato's current battles are all about quickly rushing in and fighting at close range, but it is troublesome when encountering someone who is really not easy to get close to. Using spiral bombs, you can fly kites in conjunction with high-speed movement, which is also very interesting for long-distance consumption or even assassination

... Interesting novels usually have 20,000 to 300,000 words, or 30,000 to 400,000 words, but the one about The Eunuch is very uncomfortable.

Chapter 100 and Chapter 50 are writing about the Chuunin Exam. Is the author too high or too drunk?

The book that Yunami Feng Minato resurrected and killed Danzo, the Book-seeking Palace

After watching part of it, the only uncomfortable thing is that the ninjas at the same time were ridiculously strong, but the rest was fine.

I haven't updated it in 14 days. It's probably getting cold.

It's normal for Minato to be invincible. 123 Combos makes him invincible.

I've read 50 chapters, and it's time to finish it, but I can't let it go. I really don't want to wait for the update.

To be honest, when crossing Minato, the first thing you should do is to kill Obito without anyone noticing Not to mention Obito and Obui, at least Obui is targeting the whole of Konoha, instead of just targeting his own relatives and friends like Obito. The original book has no plan after killing Minato and the Uchiha clan. Really It is to weaken Konoha, continue to release the Kyuubi, and engage in other families... Obito is just crazy and thinks that those relatives did not protect her when Lin died, so it is just revenge Of course, some people may say that the time travelers have protected Obito and they have failed. It can only be said that there is no way to prevent it, but it is impossible to prevent it.

In fact, most Japanese comics are based on bloodline theory. The closer the bloodline is to the original, the more powerful it is.

The problem is Namikaze Minato, he is the bloodline of the Senju clan that spread into Konoha, although it is already quite thin.