Spiritual Realm Walker

These these people are all spiritual realm walkers are all all these people are all spiritual realm walkers, I think there is a high probability that they belong to a family with high productivity. The reason is that except for the grandmother, there are no obvious signs in the family (not counting a bad temper like a fire master, after all, ordinary people also have hot tempers) indicating that they are walkers. There are clues that indicate that they are anything but ordinary people. 1. It is obvious that my aunt is the master of the Killing Palace. Judging from the surname, the aunt's surname is Jiang, which means she is not her grandfather's biological daughter. This is in line with the palace owner's life experience when his family suffered a huge change and he lived in Songhai. In addition, every time the Master of the Killing Palace went out to see Pig's Feet at night or participated in a battle, his aunt showed signs of mental lethargy the next morning. This was caused by lack of sleep or injury. The most obvious ones were the two battles with Xiahouchi and the participation in the siege of Hei Wuchang at Songhe Elementary School. The next day, the aunt said that her aunt was here. But there was only half a month between the two times. When Pigfoot saw through the cover-up, his cousin changed the subject to cover up, which showed that his cousin knew about the extraordinary identity of his aunt. There is also the Pingtai Hospital incident. When the aunt faced the gangsters alone, she showed a cold attitude without any panic. When her nephew appeared, she pretended to be scared because she didn't want to reveal her identity in front of her nephew. Also, after the incident was over, Li Xianzong was tracked down faster than the official authorities, which means that the master of the killing palace was in the hospital at the time, and it was undoubtedly his aunt. Another time, when the master of the Killing Palace offered to help kill Li Xianzong at a cost of five million, Pigfoot used props to sense revenge, precisely because he had pretended to be 13 in front of his aunt and said he had five million. 2. The uncle is probably the devil. This contains a hidden condition: the Demon Lord is not truly dead. I think this is entirely possible. First of all, the Demon Lord found the power of the sun, a powerful item that can suppress the Fallen Holy Grail, so that the Holy Grail loses its control over the Demon Lord. At the same time, because Brother Bing is not weak (this can be seen from the fact that the Demon Lord only found him as a helper instead of more, it is entirely possible that he has reached the peak of the saint realm within six or seven years of obtaining the character card), he can effectively restrain Hei Wuchang so that he cannot assist the Ghost Eye Judge. The battle between the Demon Lord and the Ghost Eye Judge can only be fair and rely on strength. It is said in the book that the Demon Lord was only one step away from reaching the top when he killed Judge Ghost Eye, which shows that his strength is at the pinnacle of the Domination Realm. His strength is higher than that of Judge Ghost Eye. He can kill Judge Ghost Eye without being seriously injured. He can even use the skill of the Night Wandering God to leave the body and pretend to be dead to deceive Hei Wuchang, who is much lower in strength. As for what Master Wuhen said about not being able to unbind the character card without dying, and the fact that Taiyi Sect recognized the death of the demon king, I think it may be because the strong masters in the Dominion Realm have not yet come into contact with the ultimate secret of the spiritual realm. After all, Master Wuhen does not know how to intercept the character card without being recycled by the spiritual realm, but Brother Bing did it, which shows that Master Wuhen has certain knowledge blind spots in this regard. The recording on Elvis Presley's speaker in the book mentions that the president of the American Gods Association knows the ultimate secret of the spiritual realm and invited the Demon King to meet her. Although the Demon Lord did not agree that time because of his lack of strength, he later went to see her after his strength reached the peak of the Domination Realm and learned the ultimate secret. And judging from the fact that Brother Bing put the Elvis speaker in Jinshui Paradise and asked Pig's Feet to find it, they were sure that Pig's Feet would definitely be able to meet this task. In the eyes of Pig's Feet and the official, it is a random matching task based on probability, but in their eyes, Pig's Feet can be encountered with certainty. This can only be done by those who have obtained the ultimate secret of the spiritual realm and understand the mechanism of task matching. Therefore, it became possible to unbind the character card and let the soldier take him out of the spirit realm without actually dying. In the end, the person who killed Hei Wuchang and tore off the identity information pages of Demon Lord and Brother Bing was a night wandering god whose strength was above the domination realm (he could destroy Hei Wuchang's spirit body and suppress the ghost bride to prevent her from coming out, and also had the ability to spy on the fate). And Bing Ge is neither a night wandering god nor a master (otherwise Hei Wuchang would not be able to escape under Brother Bing after the death of Judge Ghost Eye), and the Demon Lord does not have such strong other helpers (otherwise he can be called upon when killing Judge Ghost Eye, and Hei Wuchang will not be allowed to escape with the Holy Grail), so it can only be the Demon Lord himself. Furthermore, before Hei Wuchang died, he was extremely surprised and said it was impossible, which meant that in his knowledge he would never see this person again, and only the dead people he had witnessed with his own eyes would never appear in front of him again. This also showed that it was the Demon King himself who killed him. Let's talk about why the devil's real identity is his uncle. First of all, the Demon King used fake death to confuse everyone, and borrowed Brother Bing's help to bring out the character cards and send them to Pig's Feet. He also brought the Elvis Presley speaker, which currently seems to be the most useful prop for playing back recordings, to Jinshui Amusement Park for Pig's Feet to find. Such a troublesome Zhou Zhang must have a big plan (what the plan is can't be guessed at the moment, and maybe we won't know until Pig's Feet participates in the large-scale killing dungeon). The descendant of the Demon Lord who obtained the character card is undoubtedly an important executor of this plan. The Demon Lord and Brother Bing are in a cooperative relationship, so the candidate must be someone both parties think has the ability to execute the plan and can be trusted, so the person they choose must be someone they are familiar with and very close to. Judging from the difficulty of clearing the two S-level tasks, Pig's Foot's super memory when the brain is overloaded is also taken into account, because without this ability, Pig's Foot will most likely not be able to pass any of the levels, and will not be able to carry out their tasks. The only people who know the ability of pig's feet are relatives around them (as for how they know what abilities are required to pass these two S-level spiritual realms, I think it is because the Demon King has frequently traveled through various spiritual realms after knowing the ultimate secret of the spiritual realm. The purpose is to find the God of the Sun) Props with the same power are used to restrain the control of the Holy Grail. Elvis Presley Speaker also mentioned that the Demon Lord once visited a spiritual realm with a background in the Ming Dynasty, which should be the Sandaoshan Empress Temple, so he knows that only newcomers who can dance and have super memory can not die when facing the red dancing shoes). My grandpa was too old, so only my uncle and cousin were the only ones left. As for why I said that Demon King is an uncle and not a cousin? That's because judging from his schedule, his uncle never appeared in the morning, which means that he is a person who doesn't sleep at night and doesn't wake up in the morning. This is more in line with the characteristics of the Night Wandering God who mostly performs tasks at night (the power of the lunar calendar can be mobilized at night to enhance his abilities). And the cousin often comes to the grandmother's house for breakfast, which is a normal schedule, so the identity of the devil is more likely to be the uncle. In addition, Xiao Doubi likes to steal his uncle's wallet, which must be because the wallet has the aura of the Night Walker God, and Ying Ling likes it better. There are two metaphors in the book that are also consistent with this guess: one is that the pig's trotters are jokingly called the heirs of the mantle because they often learn to dance from their uncle, which is a metaphor for the pig's trotters that inherit the character card of the demon lord; the other is that the grandmother often scolds the uncle's family for being a scum, which is a metaphor for the demon lord's indiscriminate killing of lawful camp walkers. 3. The mother should be an elder of some kind of foreign professional organization for spiritual practitioners. This starts with pig's feet's brain overload. Ordinarily, symptoms with such obvious characteristics cannot be treated in modern times with advanced medical technology, but at least there should be many similar records. But I went to the hospital for examination, and the doctor not only found no problem, but also never heard of it. The explanation falls into a category that cannot be explained by modern science, so it can only be attributed to the spiritual realm. The medicines brought back by the mother should also be manufactured by a foreign Spiritual Realm Walker organization, so the probability that the mother is an elder of a foreign Spiritual Realm Walker organization is quite high. Occupation unknown. 4. Grandpa is a spiritual practitioner, his profession is unknown, and his level is higher than Pig's Knuckle. Grandpa's extraordinary performance mainly comes from two points: first, as an ordinary person in Grandpa's eyes, Pig's Feet mentioned the relevant incident more than 20 years ago during dinner when he first got the Sheling Tunnel trial mission. Grandpa, as one of the security officers who handled the matter, was deliberately vague about it, indicating that Grandpa knew the inside story of the matter, so he had to keep it secret from ordinary people. The security guards who deal with paranormal incidents should be spiritual practitioners. Second, when grandma wanted to introduce a partner to Pig's Foot, she was dissuaded by her grandfather and aunt. The two gave different reasons. In fact, the real reason was that they were both spiritual realm walkers of a higher level than Pig's Feet. It could be seen that Pig's Feet was also a spiritual realm walker. She even knew his Spirit Realm ID. She knew that Pig's Feet often faced some dangers that ordinary girls could not bear. Of course, my aunt may have another reason for liking pig's feet. 5. My cousin is also a spiritual realm walker, his profession is unknown, and his level may be higher than that of a pig's trotter. There are two main signs: one is that he ages very quickly, almost ten years older than normal, and his grandpa's friends make a joke about this. This may be the price of owning a certain item. Second, as mentioned earlier, my cousin once provided cover for my aunt, which shows that my cousin knows that my aunt is a spiritual practitioner. This should have been noticed by my cousin when my aunt's strength was relatively low. Why? Because even Pig's Feet doesn't know that my aunt is a spiritual practitioner, which means that my aunt will not take the initiative to tell her family about it. So it can only be seen by the cousin himself. From this, it can also be seen that the cousin is higher than the pig's feet.

Dafeng The Watcher is a book about self-improvement, positive energy, humor, and speed, so I fell in love with it. Although the previous book was not finished, when I saw a new book written by a newspaper seller and it got a lot of bad reviews, I really hesitated and didn't start reading it until May this year. As of now, when I read the killing copy, the protagonist is actually a useless person and not an ordinary useless person. I feel that the newspaper sellers focus on the speed of the car and funny idioms. The word count is really not low and the nutrition is insufficient. As a book lover, I have never thought about how powerful the protagonist is and how exaggerated it is. The enemy, but the special headache symptom brings the protagonist's talent, the descendant of the Demon King, and even the different Full Moon Night Goddess. The combat power is no different from the anonymous character. You may say that the level is still low, but I really don't see the advantages of the same level for the protagonist, so what are you doing with the Full Moon Night God? The funniest thing is the props. It feels like the props are there to provide laughter. After reading this book, I feel that the most effective thing in the book is the props. The author seems to be young. This book still has a slight sense of intelligence. It can be forgiven that the plot of the book is not mature and meticulous, but "Da Feng Watcher" is a serious book, so this book is a commercial work that feels like making money with pure water words. It is written in the book that the protagonist has a strong learning ability, but at the same level and even has more experience than Guan Ya. He has learned fighting for so long and cannot beat Guan Ya in fighting? Even Master Qian's drawn sword has been mastered with regular strikes. The protagonist's skills are useless except for out-of-body experience and night wandering. The spiritual realm cannot be a new mode section and should be classified as an online game novel. This book is so disappointing!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ! I paid to read the book, I didn't have sex in vain

At the starting point, there are many novels with this kind of upgrades and props, but I really feel that this is not the level that newspapers should be selling. Let's not talk about the problem of too much effort in early character portrayal, which can be easily solved. Let's talk about the core of this novel, spiritual realm, profession and props. As the core elements of spiritual realm and profession, it is a bit too gamified. This is actually a lazy approach. After entering the dungeon, there are tasks and narrations. Who gave the tasks? Who added the narration? Especially when there was a spiritual realm in the Song Dynasty, did you design the mission in this way at that time? Let's talk about professions. Professions and dungeons complement each other, but the most outrageous thing is to do tasks. Killing people will gain experience. If you have enough experience, you will level up. Isn't this too game-like for you? You leveled up instantly and learned the skills directly. I looked at the categories and saw that this is not a game novel, right? This set is not in the virtual world, and it is really blunt to apply it to reality. Let's talk about props. It's not new that props with extraordinary abilities have to pay a price, but it's still a problem. It's too game-like. The name of the prop, its ability, and the price are all written on your face, and there are also notes? Who wrote these? The spiritual realm itself? In short, these contents could have been arranged in a more subtle and subtle way, but the author was lazy and just used a set of game-like underlying logic, which made me feel extremely divided. Of course some people say, isn't this what QD dungeon props are all about now? Why don't you go and complain about them? First of all, I generally don't read them and I'm too lazy to comment. In addition, I think that at the level of selling newspapers, I should be able to write my own characteristics instead of joining in with them. But now the underlying logic is like this, and my poor brain can't figure out how to get it back. I can only say that the author should come on

Let me talk about my speculations about this book. The first is the relationship between Zhang Yuanqing and Demon Lord. It is inevitable that there is a relationship between the two, but what the relationship is is the focus of the speculation. First, let's look at Demon Lord's trajectory and growth rate, which shows that he got the character card. It didn't last long, and I learned from Elvis' speakers that he often went to other cities or even further afield. If he had a split personality, many problems would arise. For example, if he suddenly disappeared for many days, would his grandmother not ask him where he went after he regained his personality? However, it is not mentioned in the book, indicating that he has not disappeared in these years, so people with split personality are excluded. Then the second guess emerged. The division of the soul and body should have used some kind of regular props to separate the soul and the body into two parts. The Demon Lord has the memory of the spiritual realm, and Zhang Yuanqing just has ordinary memories from the past, so Zhang Yuanqing doesn't know anything about the Demon Lord. Moreover, the character card of the Demon King was mailed by Lei Yibing. If it was not a split, why did the character card need to be mailed? Continuing to reason along this line of reasoning, Zhang Yuanqing's headache can be easily explained because he can use a little bit of the Demon Lord's power, because his body is very weak, and the Demon Lord's power is very strong, which will make his ordinary soul feel torn, so those special medicines only suppress soul tearing, or eliminate the Demon Lord's power, and the reason why he can recall the details is that he temporarily possesses the Demon Lord's soul level, which leads to such a result. And based on the author's personality, he generally won't write about a supporting character who is very capable in that area. It seems that the only person who can defeat Widow Xu alone is Demon King. When the author writes, he usually puts himself into the perspective of the protagonist, so the author will not specifically praise how powerful a supporting character is. Otherwise, the protagonist will not be as good as the supporting character. Wouldn't it make readers laugh at the author? The most important point is that after the protagonist gets the character card, he almost doesn't have a headache. This is also because the soul of the devil is hidden in the character card. The owner of the character card is not dead, so the spirit realm cannot take back the character card. Therefore, Zhang Yuanqing can be bound to the character card of the devil, and there will be no more headaches later. That is because the soul is slowly repairing. After the soul is completely unified, he will naturally get the memory of the devil, as well as some of his previous layouts, etc. Of course the aunt is similar, and I guess that the regular props that can split the soul and the body should be in the aunt, but there are some differences in the aunt. The memories of her two bodies are interconnected, and the aunt can use the power of the palace master, so she is not a person with split personality. Otherwise, wouldn't Zhang Yuanqing be aware of the fact that she has been away from the soldiers for so many days, and with Zhang Yuanqing's ability, he would not be able to discover these details. The above content is all personal speculation. If it is correct, author, please do not delete the post and just change the outline yourself. After all, my labor is also labor.

But the title of the book should be changed to "record of Zhang's daily pretense"

Guan Ya went through the script of a boss falling in love with me and left the novice village. The later stage was too rubbish. The role of the Palace Master is too contradictory. The author also likes to have sex with the heroine. 1. The daily personality performance gap between the clone of the Palace Master and the main body is too large. There is no trace of the same person. One of them is weird and the other looks like crazy throughout the whole process. 2. The sixth elder will not say more about the green part. The use of timid quilts in the haunted house makes people think that because of a certain rule of the haunted house, all seven people lay down and were covered with timid quilts. You can't get in from the outside, and you can't move from the inside. Otherwise, do it all in the same position, either lying down or changing to a more comfortable position. In the final battle, the master of the Killing Palace originally stood beside Xiahou Aotian, and it was enough to cover him with a quilt. But the author initially described it as Xiahou Aotian throwing himself down to stop the murder of the palace lord, and covering him with a quilt. If the inside of the quilt is really as immovable as the description of the haunted house, the posture after throwing it down is too ambiguous. The author was scolded and then changed. It was changed to two people lying on the ground, covered with quilts. 3. There is basically no description of the daily life of the Master of the Killing Palace in the whole book. Readers of Auntie, Guan Ya, and Xiao Yuan at least know what they generally do on a daily basis. The owner of the Killing Palace and the protagonist have nothing to do except for meetings, drinking tea, and fighting. The readers don't know what the Master of the Palace of Killing is doing. 4. The harem was open in a coy way. In the end, the author even made the demigod body stay in seclusion for thirty or forty years. He did not explain the specific harem for the subsequent reproduction, so that the master's clone could complete the reproduction task? 5. The setting is too contradictory. The first step to stop killing the palace lord is a crazy start. The crazy part is just teasing the elder dog when showing off his face and killing the demon eye. One person avenges his lover and the other avenges his subordinate. His behavior is extreme but his motivation is normal, but his behavior is measured. It is just right to attack Zhu Rong, but he feels not crazy and like a normal person. Ridiculing Elder Dog, Elder Dog wanted to arrest her before, but now he asked her to help. It's understandable if you feel uncomfortable and say something mean. There is nothing crazy about the rest. Of course, I drink green tea when I'm jealous. I don't know if this happens when we get along normally or when I'm jealous. During the period of crazy criticism, I am not crazy about the protagonist. Jiang Yuer's clone didn't see where the madness was. Even if it was self-hypnosis like the one mentioned later, it would be too powerful to be watertight. The men in the Killing Palace are loyal to the palace owner, and the author says that the palace owner has a unique personality. How can a crazy critic make his subordinates loyal? The author just talked about craziness, and really didn't see where the craziness was. On the contrary, after curing the mental illness, he became even more crazy. 6. This book is either about having a harem or about pure love, but in reality this book is sandwiched between the two. This is the same as the Palace Master who stops killing. First of all, the professional skills of musicians can be used normally. I haven't seen the power of certain skills reduced because they don't fit the professional personality like in Shame of the Fire Master. The musician profession is called the Oriental Eros profession. The author describes the musician profession in a relatively subtle way. The profession of eros includes love and desire, and a small part of love is pure love. The author's description of the profession of female musicians is that they have an instinctive desire for reproduction, especially for powerful men. To put it bluntly, the sexual desire is very strong, but it can generally be controlled. The depiction we readers of The Killing Palace Master see is that he has pure love for the protagonist and does not look at other men seriously. Of course, it's possible that she has a harem, but she doesn't care about her appearance, and won't look at her appearance, which is just a tool to vent her desires. Of course the author would not dare to write the latter. But the author always leaves some room for cuckoldry. For example, in the end, the male protagonist enters a dungeon of love to open up wasteland and is slept with by an NPC every day. The palace owner is entering the Eastern Love Dungeon to open up wasteland. With this professional feature, it is normal for an NPC to sleep with her every day in the dungeon and the story of giving birth to a child. The author didn't explain it either. There is room for cuckoldry. 7. The logic of the palace owner's behavior is very contradictory and does not conform to the setting. I confessed to my uncle that maybe I wouldn't be the one staying with him. After the protagonist knew her identity, she confessed to the protagonist that she endured pain and self-hypnosis every day just to stay with the protagonist. Before the final battle, he said that he was afraid that his aunt would not accept his identity, so he used his identity as the master of the Killing Palace to cultivate feelings. He hoped that the male protagonist would still retain the love between man and woman after knowing about it. This relationship between man and woman was successful before the fourth chapter. The male protagonist also guessed his true identity a long time ago. The author did not say where exactly he guessed it. The relationship between the two people still remains at the stage where they are only ambiguous and never sleep. How should I put it? This thing makes no sense. The scum of the family supports the relationship between two people, while the others are just ordinary people. At home, the two masters have fun and no one cares about them. The two met for the first time after going abroad (both of them had teleportation tools). The Master of the Killing Palace was left in the cold for a week. When they met, he immediately wanted to kiss and hug him. Once he heard that there was something serious, he immediately returned to normal. In addition, when abroad, the protagonist sleeps with Guan Ya every day, and occasionally goes shopping and hangs out with the palace master. To stop killing, you can see the red line. As long as you don't meet Guan Ya, you won't be jealous. The meeting with Guan Ya was also within the range of Gong Dou not being jealous. Moreover, the master of the killing palace knows that the protagonist will either die or open up a harem. The devil moved from one woman's bed to another, but the palace owner still cut off his soul to be resurrected. The protagonist and Guan Ya confirmed their relationship. Although he was jealous, the palace owner did not use his skills to stop him. It doesn't matter if you really want to use skills. The Demon Eye almost killed the Palace Master. The Palace Master still broke into the zoo to save the Demon Eye and almost died from the lion. The Demon Eye might also suddenly take action against the Palace Master. In the Pluto incident, the wet nurse beat up the high-level wind mage hard, until she was covered in blood. The protagonist of the Pluto incident is also pretty scumbag. The palace owner said it was okay, and the protagonist really didn't care about the palace owner. He didn't even give him a teleportation talisman or anything like that (at that time, the protagonist didn't even know that the palace owner had teleportation props), he just took away the loot and ran away. The Qinghe clan will not care if the palace owner is an unofficial person, in case the palace owner is not teleported away and is caught as a trophy. I don't know what will happen. Of course, the author didn't dare to write like this, otherwise both the author and the male protagonist would be scolded. He also captured the Sixth Elder, resurrected the male protagonist, and infiltrated Bishop Bing (this little trick couldn't be hidden from Shura, and Shura really treated others like ants. If he really wanted to attack the palace master, the male protagonist would have to answer for everything). He went to the Dionysus Association to fight with the two lovers of the Demon Lord (male protagonist) and narrowly escaped death. He and his lover Motoko hunted down the elders of the Nihility Sect. Motoko was also a bit of a scumbag and used him as bait for his two lovers and two brothers. In case more people call a demigod, or the protagonist comes a little late. All four of these are included. These few things give readers the feeling that the palace owner's feelings for the male protagonist should be the same as Xiao Green Tea's feelings for the male protagonist (pure love ➕ true love, I don't mind other women, I hope the male protagonist can truly fall in love with her, as long as she can stay by his side. Xiao Green Tea) If Green Tea really wants to sleep with the male protagonist, he can just borrow a high-level musician prop or ask the Xie family demigod to hold a red string. Anyway, the ancestor of the Xie family also hopes to retain a highly talented night wandering god. Of course, I don't know how demigods view the male protagonist. What is the idea of the Red Line of the Demon Lord 🙂) 8. The writing is not strong enough, and the female character is forced to be jealous in the court fight in the Shura field. The palace master can endure the death of the Demon Lord during the Demon Lord period and resurrect at the cost of his soul. During the crazy period, he endured huge pain through self-hypnosis in the hope of staying with the protagonist. During the Guan Ya period, he was jealous but did not intervene. He knew that the male protagonist would become the Lord of the Sun, and used his identity as the palace master to cultivate the love between men and women. He helped the protagonist unconditionally in high-end games and fought several life-and-death games. I just hope that the male protagonist can truly fall in love with me. The author also said that he was silently guarded during the period of the Demon Lord and selfless during the period of Yuanshi Tianzun. The author gave the setting of a big heroine and a good wife, but the actual plot of the character is very contradictory. The role of the palace lord is the same as that of Fu Qingyang. The boss is in charge of the inside, and the palace master is in charge of the outside. They are all characters who are of great help to the male protagonist. It's a plug-in that comes from Shuangwen. This plug-in is also very easy to use and has no side effects. Fu Qingyang has no talent but is hard-working, the protagonist's mentor, a young and mature politician who occasionally gets emotional, and the portrayal is quite good. The author of the Palace Lord line cannot grasp the true identity, the clone setting, the virtuous wife setting, or the leadership ability (the Palace Lord successfully leads the Killing Palace), the setting of being smart and capable. The writing is not strong enough (Guan Ya cannot support the heroine, but it is in the comfort zone of pornographic authors), and the palace lord is described with selfless dedication, ambiguity, Shura field, and jealousy. This character was completely destroyed. When encountering jealous Shura Chang, this character is logically a character who can consider the overall situation and embody wisdom. The result was that he knew that the protagonist was about to enter a high-difficulty dungeon (the soul was already normal at that time, so logically there would be no such attribute as "Crazy Batch"), and he got jealous and used the red thread to hang Motoko. Just to reduce the character's intelligence, of course the author would not write a plot where the protagonist is hung by a red thread, has no recovery from his injuries, and suddenly enters a dungeon. Of course it can be said that the Void Demigod exists. In fact, the Void Demigod is just a fiend. The copy of Chaos of the Five Elements that Yuanzi entered (from Chen Shu's conversation with the Void Demigod afterwards, the reader knows that even the scum of the family did not know that Yuanzi was promoted to the sixth level. Logically speaking, he should be the first to know.), Yuanzi's copy died because the level was about to reach the fifth level. The boss used the protagonist's body to devour the spirit. Just as he was promoted to the fifth level, the spiritual realm was awakened by the male protagonist. Use the boss' abilities to cheat. I won the battle directly. Of course, this dungeon was also designed to write the emotional line between Madoka and the protagonist. If Void can win in such a way, the Lord of the Stars will win for him. It is impossible for the author to write the protagonist to death, but the devil can tolerate it even if he is very smart. Motoko only had a relationship with a few people. When the palace owner got jealous, he immediately lost his mind. He wanted to enter the dungeon and injured the protagonist because of jealousy. There is also the classic description of letting Guan Ya and the protagonist be good, not using skills but being crazy jealous. The profession desires to have children, engage in pure love, and not have a relationship with the protagonist. There is even a mission to protect the protagonist in the copy of The King of the Subjugated Country, and the protagonist is given the opportunity to eat tofu and refuse to sleep with him (there is a mission to protect the faint king. The faint king must have low combat power and has assassins. It is impossible to have a relationship. Protecting the king in the name of sleeping is the best way). The author cannot write the normal emotional line and character description of the palace lord, he can only resort to wits, jealousy, Shura field, and palace fights. The classic Shura field is deliberately built, and the main character lives in his own home (protected by the Void Demigod). The two of them often play games in the same room, and they don't just kiss and hug each other casually. Entering the Shushan dungeon, the author inexplicably added a scene of having to carry up the mountain in front of Guan Ya's cousin at the beginning. He really wanted to write an ambiguous plot with an ambiguous plot behind it. The character's behavior is illogical and written purely for possible selling points. The king of the subjugated country is the most perverted. As long as you are in the Hunjun camp, you will definitely analyze that the Hunjun is the protagonist. If you are not in the Hunjun camp, you will not be able to find out that it is normal. In order to write the follow-up Shura Field, Zhizhi became a new recruit for Stop Killing. According to normal operation, it can be analyzed that there is an assassin, and the game will be over in one death. Protection in the name of sleeping is definitely the best. The actual operation is to eat tofu and not go to bed, and if you don't go to bed, don't sneak into the palace early. The three assassins came first and put their knives on their necks, letting the fire master strike first. After the fire master made a move, they just watched the show and did nothing. The protagonist was allowed to be taken to the side hall by others, and the protagonist was assassinated again. At the critical moment, the dungeon NPC took action to solve the problem. In order to write about the Shura field where the five harems meet (otherwise there would be no reason to write this), the author resorted to wisdom and subverted the script setting. A super difficult copy that is actually S and nominally A. In the first level, there are only three people who can do serious work, one is useless (this actually gives the assassin a better reason to assassinate, which is a negative effect), one is stupid (the fire master) and one is watching the whole show with high IQ. Finally passed without any injuries. In the previous dungeon, one mistake in a certain level could lead to death, or almost kill everyone. Half of the combat power of this dungeon was not used, and there was also a problem with the protagonist's operation, but he was actually unscathed. If the fight at this stage is not very intense and the protagonist is slightly injured, the normal operation of the harem will be to feel distressed for the lover (in the next dungeon, Shushan Nanyuan, the palace owner will feel distressed if the protagonist is slightly injured, and quickly take out the Demon Refining Pot for treatment). The palace owner paddled the entire journey on the first day, and the protagonist was injured but was not treated. The first task is to do nothing. The next day, the plot of Shura Field started with a strange twist. The palace master said that he would either kiss and hug her, or I would kill Guan Ya. Gong Dou can also show his brains. When he took Guan Ya to dinner, he told a truth, and Guan Ya couldn't refute and got angry. Foreign countries directly used Jumangfei Yuanshi Tianzun to engage in Guanya. She changed her face and called herself Jumang's girlfriend. Totally smart guy. The King of Subjugation has a strange start. He explained that he did not protect the protagonist because he stopped coming after the fire master took action (the fire master only dealt with the first wave of assassins, and there was also a second wave. The normal operation is to protect and solve the second wave silently, and at the last time give a treatment. What to do if there is a third wave, but nothing is done, as mentioned above). The person who watched the protagonist endure hardships along the way said that it would be good for the protagonist to endure more hardships, which was completely inconsistent with the character. They are all smart and experienced people, and they are not children. How could they still be fighting in the palace when they are talking about business (sneering, interrupting Madoka's speech), inexplicably jealous, this copy of Madoka (lover setting), where the palace owner can be jealous, the author will definitely arrange jealousy to create a selling point and write down the character. In the end, he also sneered. Guan Ya is a scout profession and a leader profession. It's okay to write like this when you have nothing to do on a normal day, but you still have to fight for important things. The Mo family was jealous and kicked and injured the protagonist. When discussing tactics in the copy of King of the Subjugated Kingdom, the most inexperienced person, Xiao Green Tea, proposed unreasonable tactics, which he agreed with when the protagonist added the palace master Madoka when reporting tactics. Although being jealous of Shura Field is a selling point, doing this in a copy of Life and Death is absolutely unrealistic and has no use other than writing a broken character. 9. The author gives a good background setting for the palace lord and a virtuous wife. If the specific plot can reflect these settings and cannot be described, the characters will appear very contradictory and lack depth, which is commonly known as writing failure. 10. When I first read it, I went to other places to buy the full version in order to save money. There were some interesting places where I paid Qidian to read chapter reviews and so on. I probably spent more than 20 on Qidian. When I watched it for the first time, the ending was pretty good, but it was a bit messy and didn't explain it clearly. In the early chapters, Guan Ya was thought to be the first heroine, but later it was discovered that the palace master was the first heroine who was silently guarding her. I was short of books. When I read it for the second time (the second time I had my wits about me), I found that the two female protagonists were completely broken. 11. Finally, let's talk about something else. If Guan Ya is deleted, Jiang Yu'er can be directly changed to a child bride. As the master of the harem, Guan Ya's few battle scenes are assigned to Xiao Green Tea, Jingwei, Liu Shui, and Li Dongze (also a second-level scout). The daily routine of the Novice Village is assigned to Li Dongze (the guide of the Novice Village), Jiang Yu'er (the couple part), and Boss Fu. If female characters are written in this way, they won't have too few roles, and their instrumental roles will lack depth. The palace owner directly becomes the lord of the harem and accepts the future Lord of the Sun to open the harem appropriately. Finally, we wrote the line that Jiang Yuer's child bride and the master of the murder-stopping palace are the same person (Jiang Yuer has tear moles around his eyes, exposed eyes and a half-face mask. You can definitely recognize it. People who are really familiar with it can recognize it with just a small gesture. It's strange that the protagonist can't recognize it. However, it is unreasonable but it is convenient for the plot to advance). Most of the background settings of the female characters and the actual plot can be supported. Nor will all the female characters collapse. 11. Talk about the author's bad taste. Not to mention the cuckold plot. Guan Ya writes like a baby born to a prostitute in a brothel. This baby is a marriage tool cultivated by the brothel and does not accept customers. The biological father ran away. Talented but broke up with the brothel. You can meet all kinds of people in a brothel, so it's okay to be knowledgeable and broaden your horizons. Unlike someone who comes from a big family, a big family will strictly control a talented person but will never let him suffer domestic violence. 12. The moral issue of the protagonist group is that the Demon Lord is a degenerate, and he becomes more depraved by being addicted to the long-lasting spray. Demon Lord Myotou's emotional line is pure sex, and she has a career that desires reproduction and only loves Demon Lord. Although it was said in the end that we should try our best to minimize the harm, murder and rape (refer to the Zhu Rong incident) are actually very harmful. Such a villain becomes the protagonist. The protagonist and the soldier are both evil people, but they win. There is a big gap between these two and Wuhen. The first two cannot escape and enjoy the abyss more and more. The latter one is to fight against the abyss. Most of the protagonists are evil in the final analysis. The plot can be pushed forward even if the author doesn't write them as villains (the Key Immortal, the ruins of Mo Zong's organ city, the Demon Lord is changed to a casual cultivator, and he has several lovers, which does not affect the plot). The author prefers not to write the villain and the Demon Eye to win together. Just read it as a cool article, but don't be fooled.

Speaking of Baobao, I have to talk about Guigui first. Actually, I only paid attention to Guigui after watching Bao Bao. Getting back to the subject, "Steady" is the pinnacle, "Serious" is about continuing its glory, "Big Brother" is a little hasty, but the newly opened "Abyss" has faint signs of achieving greater glory. Steady and serious bosses are all immortals. For Guigui, they are in a comfort zone. If you stay in the comfort zone for a long time, your sensitivity will be blunted. And "The Abyss" is the stage for returning to re-training oneself. Back to Bao Bao, "Grandma Grandma", "Sister" and "The Second Generation of Demons" are all famous in the alleys. Since then, Bao Bao has formed his own unique style that is different from other writers and is deeply loved by the seafood market. But because of this, Bao Bao developed path dependence, which instead kidnapped Bao Bao's creation. This path dependence reached its peak in "The Watcher" and also created the platinum myth. But for Bao Bao, "The Watcher" is a blockbuster after jumping out of his comfort zone. The popularity of The Watcher has brought more readers. Compared with the old readers whose portraits were relatively single in the past, the new readers are more diverse and complex. Because they are the pinnacle of works as soon as they enter the game, they have higher psychological expectations and more demanding requirements for Bao Bao. Bao Bao is a soft-hearted author. Guigui has never been used to those who are messing around, and will just call them back. What Bao Bao shows us is self-reflection and a plea for understanding... Too gentle. To be honest, I am just a new seafood buyer who sneaked in from a job, but because I read too many authors, no matter the style or taste, as long as it was not too poisonous to touch my bottom line, I read them all word for word. So for me, "Spiritual Realm Walker" is just average, not good but not bad. It just tastes like Bao Bao, and I like this one. Reading online articles is just for fun. Isn't it uncomfortable for me to have such high demands? When I wanted to be an author, I read Bao Bao's interviews several times. I don't remember most of the content, but I rememberBao Bao said that he wanted to get out of his comfort zone, and he wanted to constantly challenge different themes and styles. I have always felt that this is what a writer should say, otherwise he would not be his own gunman. Since it is a challenge, there are successes, failures, and mediocrity. Isn't this a matter of course? Why be overly harsh? Baobao's only comfort zone now is its dependence on selling Baobao. The demand for Xiao Liu Bei's content from the sudden increase in new readers has exceeded the limit. In The Watcher, Liu Bei's content is the icing on the cake. In "Spiritual Realm Walker", I clearly noticed that Bao Bao was already racking his brains for the plot, but he still had to devote some energy to the seafood market, and there was even a tendency of the seafood market kidnapping plot. This can be clearly seen from the progress of Yuanzi and Guanya. By analogy to The Watcher, Xu Qian and the female character are naturally developed as the plot progresses. Ambiguous plots are also used to adjust the rhythm and enhance the tension of the plot. The intuitive feeling is that it is very moist and smooth. But the current progress of the relationship between Motoko and Guan Ya, and the progress with Madoka, seems to be stumbling, not smooth, not slippery. This is obviously because the seafood market kidnapped production and disrupted Bao Bao's military morale. I personally think that since everyone is a seafood lover, it's better not to push Bao Bao too hard. Really, when I saw the killing dungeon at the end of the first volume, I could clearly feel that Bao Bao was mentally and physically exhausted, and Zhang said that his mentality had been shattered, and the rhythm of the entire formation was messed up. It makes me feel so sad to see it. If you love abalone and seafood, give the seafood more free space to grow. This is not Zhangzi Island, so what are you afraid of?

The plot is interesting, the writing is pretty good, and it's lighthearted and enjoyable. However, the author has had the problem of inconsistency in the worldview of his works since his last book. It's quite comfortable to read when the map is small and the characters' relationships are simple. After one or two hundred chapters, many bugs that violate common sense and logic will pile up. The baseline of social operation in the constructed world may be different from reality, but this should not be an excuse to create a sense of disobedience, and the author's long explanation of "patching" seems very verbose. The complete self-consistency of the world view and the coherence of the plot logic should be driven by characters and plots, and should not be filled by large-scale behavioral explanations and explanations in the nature of narration.

Didi, follow-up updates, and monthly tickets are all given 😊

(Ha, I'm a headliner) After reading it for a long time, I felt that this was a fairy tale novel about the spiritual realm (group travel). The Five Elements Alliance is equivalent to the grand alliance of the righteous way, the Taiyi Sect is an ally, and different sects practice different methods.         ，，，， People like Motoko are inherited by big bosses. If you look at it this way, it is not like the next-door "First Player" and "Sequential Player" who can obtain all kinds of amazing abilities by downloading dungeons. Because the strength of your cultivation method (each occupation) is about the same, especially in the early stage, you can only rely on wisdom and props.          ，

After reading the second volume, I couldn't stand it anymore, especially the relationship between the protagonist's character and the female supporting character. I felt like it was quite scumbag, a bitch and a bastard at the same time.

Like Dafeng, the quality of the novel was good in the early stage, but it began to decline steadily and rapidly in the middle stage. The supporting characters have old plots to reduce their intelligence, and the supporting characters are stereotyped. They constantly set the pace to keep the topic hot. Corrupt officials, foreigners kneeling and licking, overseas Chinese spies, tsk tsk tsk, tsk tsk tsk, brainless routines and boiled water plots are draining the kidneys and making the heart pee.

I want to abandon the book. It doesn't matter if the plot is enjoyable or not, but the plot must be logical and reasonable. Instead of forcing wisdom to advance the plot, don't write things that you are not good at writing.

Some of the personal settings for the killing dungeon at the end of July were partially confirmed in the latest update! For example, the outer level escape and the upcoming maze, the updates for newspaper sales are too sloppy, let's discuss the middle and core area dungeons together! The following are the last updated killing dungeon ideas💡: My idea is a combination of many factors. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. Please give me more suggestions. Because there are many words, I will write it in several paragraphs: 1. Since it is a large killing dungeon , can come from two aspects A The hunting of walkers in the dungeon B The attack between good and evil sides 2. As mentioned in the article before, it is a point ranking system, and the points come from the dungeon monsters and hostile walkers. Other book friends also mentioned that each dungeon for the first time a traveler enters has an initial score, which can be 10 points or 100 points. Monsters are divided into points according to their strength. Kill the enemy walker to get all the opponent's points! 3. Since there is a confrontation between good and evil, there is also teamwork. You can design positions such as captains. If the position is successfully fulfilled, there will be props or point bonuses, or reputation bonuses 4. The killing dungeon can be carried out with a combination of chicken ➕maze mobile ➕king, that is: it is not a fight between good and evil at the beginning, but grows slowly to see who grows faster and stronger! For example: The first level, wilderness escape! Behind you are the mist or poisonous rain🌧️ that can gradually kill you, and in front there are monsters like earth monsters, inferi and other monsters chasing you! If it's exciting enough, you can join the monster-killing puzzle 🧩 to get hidden props or clues for the second level... Second level: Moving Magic Palace,Part of the clues come from the first level (this is actually a test of brain power), and part of them comes from hints inside or outside the Magic Palace, such as posting a couplet... The Magic Palace can be combined with many professions Features are developed, such as bewitching monsters, ghosts👻... There are dragon-like entities in the magic palace. If you kill them, you can get team bonuses or temporary props The third level of the Killing Tower is the winner when you reach the top. The loser will wipe them all, or the loser's points will be wiped if their points fall below a certain bottom line, and the winner will be exempted. You can also destroy the opponent's guardian tower. The rewards and penalties are the same as above! About the fight between good and evil, you can add it in the second or third level!

1. Advantages: 1. The theme is novel. This is the first time I have seen the worldview in which characters in the spirit world rely on character cards to become extraordinary creatures and upgrade to fight monsters in the spirit world. So I am quite interested in it at first glance, just like the worldview I saw for the first time in "Lord of Mysteries". I just want to express my interest in new themes 2. It is vulgar enough and can be used in various memes. This is not a criticism. Internet articles are for the general public. People read Internet articles more for relaxation and happiness, so vulgarity and memes can arouse readers' interest in reading. Reading a work that blindly piles up rhetoric and nonsense can make people disgusted 3. The author has a good temper. Although everyone criticizes and criticizes, newspaper sellers do not have yin and yang readers, and they will admit their mistakes. I have seen some authors who have a typical attitude problem. They eat this bowl of rice but cannot listen to any criticism, and will be yin and yang in the chapters Here are the shortcomings: 1. The unit drama type plot is not suitable for following updates. A dungeon opens up a whole new world view. Maybe the reader was reading the last dungeon with great enthusiasm, but then switched to a very boring dungeon. Like me, I will skip some dungeons directly... It is also difficult for the author to ensure that he can write each dungeon story with a different style 2. Harem novels, but the harem is not very described. Obviously you have enough descriptions for each harem, but the harems in this book are really a collective effort. This is one of the core competitiveness of your works, but they are all ignored and lost... Just look at the complaints in the comment area 3. Writing foreign plots is not flattering. I basically didn't watch the plot when I went abroad because it was really boring... I actually don't dislike the appearance of foreigners in the works, but I am really more accustomed to complete Western fantasy (such as "The Lord of Mysteries"). The combination of Chinese and Western and the plot is boring. Now I have forgotten the names of the foreign characters... 4. There are so many settings that the author himself cannot remember them. Spirit Realm feels like a game. There are so many props, levels, and NPC attributes that the author himself wrote and ate up the prop settings 5. Add characters by succumbing to the power of money. I hope the author can be more insistent on the work. The last one that was annoying was "My Senior Brother is Too Steady". Originally, the junior sister was the heroine at first glance, but I heard other readers commented that there was a monthly ticket financier who liked Yun Xiao more and then gave the heroine to Yun Xiao. I was thinking at the time, is the author's writing worthy of his book title? That's all for the time being {"TopicId":"979344774245777408","TopicName":"Spirit Realm Complete Edition"}

This book is very depressing now. The official evil in it is very serious. The official may also have aristocratic families to use their power to force people to leave the poor people represented by Wuhen Hotel. There is no way for grassroots promotion here, and evil professions basically come from the grassroots; official children of aristocratic families do not have evil professions, because they will not be convicted when they are ordinary people, and the spiritual realm does not care about their deeds.       ，，， The values ​​​​of the protagonist can represent the work, but the justice of the protagonist should not be shown by lowering the upper and lower limits of other people. For example, Elder Cai and Secretary Zhou, their lower limits are too low. Of course, personal opinions always have limitations. Another, the eternal god with magic eyes.

After reading this chapter, let me explain that if it were written according to the normal logical flow, Zhang Yuanqing should talk to Wei Yuanzhou in private and scold him. If he still has a conscience, he will atone for his actions. If not, Zhang Yuanqing will expose his actions and Wei Yuanzhou will be imprisoned. Or maybe Wei Yuanzhou had murderous intentions and was killed by Zhang Yuanqing, but the author writes here that Zhang Yuanqing's behavior was very radical and killed people directly. After all, Wei Yuanzhou's grandfather voluntarily died in the hands of his grandson, so it should be regarded as a kind of "suicide", right? Wei Yuanzhou's crime will not lead to death. This should be a deliberate foreshadowing. The following plot must be related to this, let us look forward to it.

When I was young, my family was poor, but I still didn't know how to make progress. I was fond of playing, missed school, and lacked ambition. I occasionally put my love in the mountains and rivers. I wasted more than 20 years of my life, running around here and there. Looking back at the 30s, I have not yet married a wife and had children, and I can't help but lament that time flies. However, flowers will bloom again, and people will no longer be young.

I have read more than a dozen chapters and it is really well written. But there is one thing. The currency system in this kind of urban supernatural novel is a pitfall. How much should an official psychic, that is, a spiritual realm walker, earn per month? If it's less, it's inconsistent, but if it's too much, it feels like money is flying all over the sky. In this book, a person with special powers who has just joined the officialdom, that is, a spiritual realm walker, has a monthly salary of 20,000 yuan. How rare are superpowers, so he is given such a small amount of money? That's the man with his head hanging on his waist. And I didn't introduce the purchasing power of money before, but I mentioned that the management of the company where the protagonist's mother works earns 50,000-100,000 yuan a month, which is only the basic salary. Suddenly there is a comparison between the two, which makes people feel weird, don't you understand? In the end, the Ou who was hunted down offered a reward of 50,000 for clues and a reward of 100,000 for killing. He was a level 3 spiritual walker. No matter how injured he was, it was not something that ordinary level 1 could solve. He was at least level 2, and it was a task that only the more powerful characters in level 2 could take on. This is just 100,000 yuan, and there is no mention of any other rewards or anything, so it feels like nonsense. Other than that, everything else is pretty good.

It is also the second newspaper sold. It's hard to describe it in one word. I can only say that I suffered a loss from Dafeng. I had high expectations, but after reading this book, I can only say that I was disappointed. Except for the volume of Night Travel God, which looks pretty good, the subsequent Star Officer, First Region, and Lord of the Sun are Zhen La Kua. The core leadership of the lawful camp cannot bear to look at it. The biggest boss, the Lord of the Stars, is really out of class (to be honest, if the political struggle in the Five Elements Alliance cannot be written well, there is no need to force it, there is no need to bite the bullet and write it). Whether it is the later dungeon or the actual battle, there are too many bugs in the settings and details. The most outrageous thing is the harem. Except for Guan Ya and Madoka from Shenyin Soy Sauce in the later stage, everyone else is just talking and no one actually takes action (not counting Demon Lord). Except for a young prince in the epilogue, to be honest, I don't think there is any emotion between these two. They are accepted for the sake of acceptance. Among the characters, to be honest, Mr. Qian and Demon Eye are the most impressive. Compared to the character portrayals in the previous book, they are quite different, and none of the female protagonists are as good as any of them in the previous book. The last one is that the protagonist in this book is really average, not as good as Yin La.

I was fooled by lard and subscribed to this book. I really couldn't stand it anymore. The logic was too confusing and there was no sense of immersion at all. The further I read, the more I felt that it was just made up. The author just made up whatever he thought of, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Get your money back!

There are 231 unread chapters left, and I feel like I can't read anymore... This book is amazing in the early stage and provides food for the middle stage, but it falls apart in the later stage. The setting is inconsistent, the logic is confusing, the combat power is confusing, and the wisdom is forced.

It's a book that I can't stand without losing my mind. Why don't you tell me that you hired a ghostwriter 😅

I've finished the book with about two hundred chapters to go. I feel like the early writing is really good, but the later writing is getting more and more broken. The last two hundred chapters or so are about to force my wits down and it's almost unbearable. It feels like tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to abandon. Don't watch it, it's almost over, but if you watch it, it feels so bad. Starting from the Dutch Ghost Ship, the logic has collapsed into a complete mess, which is simply outrageous. Forcibly cheating, forcibly reducing intelligence... It is better to just make the protagonist invincible and push him all the way to the later stage. It is fun to watch.

Let me state in advance that I pay for knowledge. This is my second time reading this novel. This time I still couldn't stand it after more than 200 chapters. When I first read it this time, I was still curious about why I gave up on it the first time. It was obviously quite good. The following is my personal opinion: The author should have had great ambitions when writing this novel. He also said in his acceptance speech that he had formulated a very detailed plan for this novel, but as he said, being too detailed means that there is less room for operational changes. During the writing process, he should have discovered some subsequent plot developments set by the plan. There are some inaccuracies with the turning point of the story, but it is not convenient to change. In order to make up for the shortcomings, he may have made the following efforts: 1. Use his personal strengths in other aspects. There are obviously more driving plots in subsequent articles, the story design has become more complex, and the number of characters and group portraits have also increased (the author may have thought that he could control the intensity, but It's a bit thankless) 2. Think about the future efforts and improvement directions based on the readers' comments on each chapter. It is naturally a good thing to learn from each other's strengths and weaknesses, but those with more likes may not necessarily be in line with the subsequent creative direction of the novel. After all, too many people may form a "rabble". This word does not have a derogatory meaning, it is just an objective rule. The author's starting point may be that he wants to Brainstorm and see if any readers have good ideas for the development of subsequent novels that can inspire their own creations (many authors do this), but I guess part of the reason is because the author lacks confidence in Dagang's subsequent settings. In this case, it is easy for readers to lead them astray and deviate from their own preset track. In addition, I would like to share my thoughts on the specific contents of the more than 200 chapters I read: 1. The protagonist promotes good and punishes evil to save an oppressed girl from suffering, and by the way, he clears the grievances of a supporting character (forgive me for not remembering the name of the character). It is a very intuitive value expression and is easy to create fun, but it is not advanced. Personally, I think there is no need to describe it in too much, it is easy to fall into clichés, and it can simply promote the plot. 2. The level of character creation could be better. The character creation of the male protagonist is quite complete, but it feels that it lacks some necessary conditions for becoming a "protagonist", including principles of dealing with others, abilities and personality. The description of other characters may be because there are too many characters in the novel to be comprehensive. 3. There are logical problems in some of the author's stories. Several werewolf copies and killing upgrade copies are not very pleasing to me personally; the topic of "werewolf" can easily cause controversy, but it is too subjective and can easily cause discomfort to readers; the killing upgrade copy is too long and the final victory of the male protagonist depends on the author's personal perception. The starting point of writing this copy may be to show that the male protagonist is resourceful and lead to a small climax of the story. Unexpectedly, it will lead to a wave of dissuasion. The reason may be that it is too subjective and the readers lack a sense of involvement. I actually like the author's writing style very much, and there is a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will get better and better and bring us more good works, that's all.

There is something about AI, so I just built a full stack

The advantages of this book are very simple. It sells newspapers with slutty words and jokes, as well as all kinds of sultry descriptions. It is a very good online article on the level. The disadvantages are difficult to describe. The description of the fighting scenes is hard to describe. I can only say that it is average. The most annoying thing about this book is the description of the emotional scenes. Pure love is not pure enough, and the harem is not enough. It's cool, being caught in the middle is neither fish nor fowl, but it makes you feel inferior. Especially in Chapter 123 of the Star Official Volume, the male protagonist deceives on two fronts when faced with the emotional Shura field, and forcibly subdues the female character to believe the male protagonist's lies. This chapter almost puts the last straw on the precarious emotional drama of this book. Overall, it is a good book, but when it comes to emotional scenes, the newspaper seller goes crazy and skips five or six pages. It is really damaging to the senses.

Maybe Dafeng raised his expectations too high, as this was originally a book for food storage. Fortunately, I didn't order it all... I even skipped through many chapters of this book. Personal feeling: I think that since I have paid, I have the right to comment and express my personal opinions It is far worse than Dafeng. It is like reading a cool article on free software that is not very good. The storyline is not good enough. There is also a typo that affects reading. There are quite a lot of typos in some chapters. I feel like I'm not very good at this genre. There are too many things mixed in, and it's quite violent. On a ten-point scale, it would be about 6.5 Points, which is less than my standard for paid reading.

See the title. If you want to read it, just find any resource. Old routine, upgrade, get hit by someone who has surpassed the level, and then fight back The whole book has almost the same template: when you are attacking, you are forcibly subduing your wits, and when you pass the dungeon, you are guided by one person A routine article written purely to make money, rubbish.

Overall, it was pretty good. There were no problems in the early and middle stages, but in the later stages, it was too rushed, too dull, and too boring. The fighting emotions in the main and branch lines were all just a bunch of excuses. It was rare that I was so bored that I skipped watching it. It extremely ruined the viewing experience. It's shit.