The Heavens Begin from Da Luo Hall

Come on, author, it's really hard to find this book now.

I once read a book about astronomy, traveling through a world, with female characters with surnames. If they see each other, they will read them all. They are not afraid of meat and vegetables. I used to enjoy reading it, but now I don't know, I have become very indifferent, even disgusted. I feel like a puppet lost in the boundless illusion of power given by the system.

After taking a look, the first world is a bit short, but the pace is good. The second world was too long. When I saw Yuanshen appearing, I thought there was something wrong with the rhythm. This world is not the main world, so there is no need to set up a copy world with a higher limit in the early stage. Generally speaking, it is best for Zhutianliu to finish a dungeon world in just a few plots. You procrastinator can write a fairy tale novel by yourself, there are too many trivial plots. It would be better if it is set to the early main world, has a main line, and obtains nutrients from the dungeon world to grow.

It's really well written. . . . . A rare masterpiece from Zhutianliu

Although I said there will be no heroine, I am still a little worried. There are many people in the circle who want a heroine in the harem. Don't change your mind immediately.

In recent years, Gouzi's Projection of the Heavens is considered to be the top book among the Heavens fandoms. The further back it gets, the better it is. You can learn from that book 😥

This book is regarded as a masterpiece among Zhutianliu. It is very beautiful. I heard that Qidian has applied a big data analysis system and makes recommendations based on the number of readings of the latest chapters every day. I hope that friends who like this book will not keep the book before it is put on the shelves. Timely reading will give the author a great motivation to update. After all, you can't expect to generate electricity for love. Please improve it a lot.

I think the character of this college classmate is unnecessary except for the number of words... Earth should not play the spiritual revival style These chapters feel like they have nothing to say.

Nice. The first world is very good, mainly because it captures the strong character of people having nothing but self, and even people having nothing but self. The second world is bland and pretty good, but it doesn't show that level of character. All fire astronomy has this kind of compulsion, that kind of detachment that others pursue all their lives.

The image of the protagonist feels weird. I wrote a bunch of plug-ins at the beginning. I thought it was the kind of story where you can travel through the world and become invincible on your own. The protagonist should be the image of a calm and wise man. But after reading a little bit, I felt that the protagonist is neither calm nor funny. It just feels weird to me.

Zhutianwen is not suitable for a female protagonist, so come on, author!

After reading Chapter Ninety-Nine, I felt like I was about to give up the book. Huang Han didn't say it was not well written, but it felt too severe to be separated from the previous chapters. . From what I can see from Da Qin, what attracts me is your talent, Da Luodian. As a result, when Huang Han read it, it felt like another novel about cultivating immortals, and I didn't understand it.

It gave me a headache to read, for example, Taoist, the name of the protagonist, qualifications, intensive work, various literary and youthful tone, and the fighting skills are low.

Overall, it's good, but the two concepts that attracted me the most at the beginning were the spiritual object training and the mysterious immortality. Now, it can be said to be dispensable. Now it seems that it is just a cheating fairy tale.

I think the protagonist should regard the Huanghan world as the main world

The writing is not fluent enough, the whole process is useless and too much goes into detail, and it is not concise enough. There are even different comments in the comment section written by the master. The good reviews of this book are indeed thought-provoking...

As far as infinite streaming is concerned, the first world of Da Qin is too short and ends in 19 chapters. There is still a lot of things that could be written if it is more detailed. The second world of Soul Cultivation is too long and it is not finished until it is released. It is undoubtedly very procrastinating.

I thought the first world was good😊. I didn't like the rest of it and stopped watching it. Is it my fault?

I've read all the comments, and they all come up with blind ideas that harm the author, such as kidney transplants without a heroine, that's really crazy. Now when writing a book, you either end up with a harem like a teddy, or you have a pure palace like a eunuch. Don't try to sell dog meat on someone else's head. Only when you have a clear goal can you attract the right customers. If you try to sell dog meat on someone else's head, you'll only get scolded. Each category has its own rules, similar to Tieba, Douyin and other publicity and recommendation. If you are not good enough, you will not be good at both ends. Not only will you be scolded and have no traffic, but you will also be criticized by others. Therefore, the author should either be a pure (good person) or an extreme (bad person). Don't be mediocre!

He's becoming more and more self-indulgent, and the supporting characters are becoming more and more like narrators.

How about a Tiandaoliu next book? It's written. It's also very good. For example, if you read more about the way of heaven, which is similar to the world of heavens, religious scriptures may be able to set something more rigorous. Rigorous and imaginative. Don't borrow from other worlds. To construct your own heavenly novel. That's what I like more. Originality can arouse the interest of others. After all, what if the next book was written as a fusion of someone else's work? For many people, they are tired of seeing it.

Two monthly votes have been cast, but no finer additions have been made, you understand?

I hope the author can write more words in his remarks and write down all his thoughts.

Come on, author, the writing is really good. Fully booked

I feel like Wenzhao Gong got inspiration from reading your book.

Don't you think you should change this so-called void into a vast world? Because I always feel that one soul can survive in the void. No matter how you look at it, it looks like the void of a world, and the so-called ninth-level world is just his lower continent. This is more reasonable. After all, it is often said that Da Luo can travel in chaos. After becoming Da Luo, the next step should be to devour this. In one fell swoop, the world became the Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian, who could reversely generate sibling bodies and send them to various worlds. Harvesting data is similar to Pangu's method of conquering the Dao with force. Then it is similar to the prehistoric world. Reach a higher realm

! That's it! So fast

It looks good, but the details are messy. It would be better if the pace was faster!